14 Days || A Kriyaansh Short Story || Day 10 On Page 96. - Page 6

awesome update.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..

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It was awesome
Every thing was just perfect 👏

Mall Bale scenes
Swaron scene
KriYansh scenes
lovely 😳

Kriyansh ke beach MU hone bali h
na Kuch time baad

But i love this kind of Story as i
before say
😳 😳

Thank u somuch for the pm
really i was so waiting for this

Nd Next update kab milega ???
15 page par bohot jayada hi late ho jayega yr

Yiippieee...
U updated and mai itna late ho gai.. 😭

Awesome as always..
Bichare rey he thinks he can easliy make kria fall for him.. Na rey nevr.. kria b tedhi kheer hai itni jaldi hath ni ayegi.. 🤣

Waah kria u sent sharon with swayum..
Not bad han.. 😉

Agla b jaldi post kario.. 😳

superb update

awesomeee part👏

Hey aditi mai b spamming mei help karu kya..!!??
Jaldi teri wish puri ho jaye.. Jitne pages tak tu chahti hai vahan jaldi hum pahunch jaye..

okay so i guess m late...very very late...m gonna cry for dat...
so i realized it now..its gonna be of 14 updates..rite...i mean from now on...great...well u hv promised to update once in two days bt u r breaking it...not done...
this one was great for the start...
reyam convo lead to nowhere as evrything goes above rey's head...bt its not fair...he shud know he i spoiling others life for his past life...krisha on the other hand..i pitied for kriya...her lovey dovey awful past is gonna come back...so sorry for poor lass...
mall me sharon ka reaction...aah..haha...damn funny..nd reys trick to shoo off the girl...cool...
again...kriyaansh fake...evrything fake..this thot boils the blood...kriya is witty nd sensible i must say...on the other hand...isnt rey too much full of pride...i mean comeon..kitni bi looks ho..its not ki whole world revolves around him...selfish jerk...again..i wanna kill him...
by the way..u r building up the plot really very well...
one line of kriya stung me for her..."kriya ghai never breaks promises"...its gonna take a troll on my girl only

Originally posted by: arsha-rupanshi

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Superb update
Luvd it...!!
I m luving kriya's bold attitude in dis ss
Amazingly written
Waiting for nxt part
Update soon

super awesome update...loved it