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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing thriller. Here's my take - Arnav and Payal have secrets and a shared history - something illicit between them. Khushi is going to discover an unpleasant truth. The puzzler is the first scene - self flagellation concerning Arnav? The scene reminded me of something similar from the novel, The name of the Rose (Umberto Eco).
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting chapter...so khushi ventured to meet payal behind nani...now it is understood why nani's disinterest against payal...Arnav is the owner and editor of a news paper...it is interesting...who was Arnav talking to...the story is so mysterious...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
KBA ;-D

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schizophrenic it is. I had been looking for a word for Arnav's condition since i read chapter-1.

I was amazed at the conversation that Arnav and Khushi had, was kinda expecting it too. For whatever his condition might be, the way his editorials and unbaised critics had been mentioned by Khushi herself in last chapter, i was looking forward to see how did Arnav embrace this new relation. I'm sire Khushi's resolve and her answers, would have satisfied Arnav, for sure. They do explain Arnav's behaviour towards Khushi. He's feeling too, maybe he can read Khushi too, for all we know, he is just keeping inside him.

Why..oh..why? Khushi can't tell him. Even i feel sad for tha bit.

Gossip mongers need fodder, especially when it comes this way who will refuse. A girl from lows, marries a diseased guy of highs.. Wow! Sure much of publicity he would have got.


As for Nani's decision to Aakash's corpse.. I felt it cruel. Really. I mean however bad, he still was family, her own grandson. Just bitterness the reason behind the step she took.. Or is there some more? I think there is.

As for Khushi's last line, Looks like insted of Dikki's ghost, its Aakash's ghost in town. ;)
Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
You're exceptionally talented at weaving backstories and mystery- and I truly mean that. I never, ever would have guessed that Arnav was schizophrenic. Not even in my dreams- I'm even more intrigued, and I have to hand it to you for doing this with such talent.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is one scary story and I'm not sure if I have the guts to continue reading..Bravo!!

Why did I never think of schizophrenia? ASR was often thought of as bipolar among other things given his blow hot-blow cold behaviour but you've taken this to a whole new level. The Raizadas have many skeletons in their closet still crying to be let out and Khushi is going to caught in the crossfire. Phew! Here's wishing her loads of luck...For the first time Payal is not the docile, demure DIL but a coarse, saucy sharp-tongued woman of the boudoir..me likey!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Payal just unnecessarily wants to fight or create some fuss. Loved the way Arnav replied her back. I must say Payal is one hell of a female. She is a unique character.
So Arnav has schizophrenia. What happens when he gets the attacks?
Does he have an alter ego? Loved their conversation before marriage where in Arnav expressed his concerns regarding his condition and their marriage.

I am still confused as to what does his mental illness have to do with hiding the news of pregnancy from him.

So Aman is the police inspector here. Nice casting.

So the police found a dead body and Nani saw it and recognised it to be of Akash's . She does not even want to claim and body and do the cremation and asked the police to look into the disposal of the dead body. That was kind of cruel. Though we dont know the entire picture, still treating the body like an unidentified one felt really cruel.

Finally the last statment, will Akash's ghost haunt them???

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part
liked it
thanks for the mail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res

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Schizophrenic??? Wow bipolar yes that thought have appeared in my mind many times while watching IPK or reading stories on IF but never did I think of Arnav aka ASR to be schizophrenic. Whatever it is, his concern to let out all in open and let Khushi know what she was getting in to was genuine and shows that he cares. Also the answer she gave reflect her character that she is not after the name, fame or money she is genuinely interested.

Yes, all fine but why to hide about the baby. If the idea of him reciting or questioning is the barrier to the news than it will always be their line I said last time. It's still not. Lear.

But I have to give it to you with all the happiness that you are so great at weaving the story and mystery. Lost of secrets still to unfold.

Payal a complete opposite of what ahe was in IPK. She knows what she want will she get it will see.

Naniji's act was cruel. Not claiming Akash's body and asking to dispose of as unidentified. Will Arnav come to now about this as well? Or this will be another secret?
Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Arnav was a schizophrenic, i could never think that about Arnav.
Naniji is a very traditional lady and very cruel and rude. She harbors pure hate for Akash and ever other thing and person related to him. He is a greatest disappointment to her and her family. She doesn't want to perform her family his last rights.
I think khushi will be prohibited too to reveal this news to Arnav.
How many secrets will she hides, first her pregnancy and now this!!!
waiting for the next update eagerly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
So Arnav is a schizophrenic and Khushi agreed to marry him. So the prologue was one of Arnav's episodes. And the baby is being kept a secret to make sure it doesn't have that gene?
Akash is dead. Oh dear.
I'm glad Arnav has a job despite having a mental condition. Most can be controlled and there are so ignorence and misconceptions about mental illnesses.

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