ArHi SS: Kashmir Se Kanyakumari || COMPLETE - Chapter Twelve (1/6)

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Sugi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Awesome update NK & his Tamil 😆

Hug scene reminded me of Kanden Kadhalai film scene

Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 11 years ago

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sirivalli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

awesome update...

loved it...

thanks for d pm...

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Anj007_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Just amazing update dear..loved it alot..

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Jyothsna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

He's like the rasam to your papad. Run
away. I'll find someone-
someone who will be my
papad. - what a dialogue.
Loved it.
Wndrfl
finally they ran away frm there.
Who is the man khushi loves? Nw wht wil happen.
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BSRaizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

That was fantastic as usual!!
PS: the banner u made for ek nayi zindagi is fantastic

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sivatharshini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

🤣 Awesome one !! Khushi is just crazy !!

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933191

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Jab we met is my all time favourite Movie, Now Arnav and Khushi in a story inspired by the same movie is not something that I can miss. Also being a south Indian myself I like the Tamilian touch you have added to the story.

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Simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Chapter 4 was fantastic!!

I liked it so much!

I really liked how you described Khushi, when you described her dress from Arnav POV was so nice! I could very clearly imagine it! Khushi must have looked beautiful!

I really liked the introduction of NK! He was so understanding!

Arnav telling Khushi more about him shows that he trusts her, like she trusts him.

"He's like the rasam to your papad." This was so good and a very NK thing to say!

Awesome job! The ending made me want to read more!!

Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Great job and thank you for the pm!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

hi...sorry...caught up with this SS just now..really liked it...n read ur OS today aw well...thnx for the PM...

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Important Note: I have changed my username- mostly just because this one fits better. Everything should be the same- if you encounter any issues, do let me know.

Also, the translations for the Tamil (which is minimal in this chapter) come right after the Tamil. For example: "En per yenna? What is my name?"

Chapter Five: Excerpt

Arnav squinted as a droplet fell onto his face, splashing gently. He blearily opened his eyes to see dark clouds in the sky above them, the blue long gone. Khushi sat in the corner, huddling next to the cow as the wind blew.

Another droplet fell, and within minutes it was pouring, completely drenching the couple in the back.

"What the- when did it start to rain?"

"Thambi! Neenga shelter edithikongo. Go take shelter! We'll drop you off somewhere. This is our last stop, so we will drop you next to a hotel." The driver leaned out, calling from the front. He pulled up next to a shady building, the ominous white brick contrasting with the bright red letters spelling out "HOTEL".

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Edited by chotidesi - 11 years ago