ArHi SS: Kashmir Se Kanyakumari || COMPLETE - Chapter Twelve (1/6)

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After finishing Fighting Dragons, I felt like my life lacked a little creative spirit. Since one of my favorite movies ever is Jab We Met, and I really like Arnav and Khushi, I decided to combine the two of them into one story, and thus, this story was born.

It is based off of Jab We Met- so I am warning you, as the reader, right now- there will be close parallels. It comes with basing something off of something else. That being said, there will be differences as well, and I hope to put my own twist on it.

I am also switching to a blog format- It is open to everyone, I will post excerpts from every single chapter here. It's not for any particular reason besides the fact that I feel that reading on a blog is more pleasant. Feel free to comment on this thread, like the excerpt, etc.- If it really doesn't work, I am still open to switching back here.

You are free to comment here and/or on the blog. All restrictions on commenting on the blog have been removed- so it should allow you to. However, if IF works better for you, then feel free to

You can find the link to the blog in my signature at the bottom of this post. I'll still be sending PMs, the usual- buddy me if you want them.




INDEX:
Chapter Three: Excerpt
Chapter Nine: Excerpt
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Prologue: Excerpt

He slipped into a random seat, sighing in relief as he turned his melancholy gaze out of the window. People were rushing about like headless chickens, the calls of the coolies and the whistles of other trains adding to the chaotic noise outside. Vendors yelled out prices as people milled about the track, downing chai and bisicuits by the liter. He heard his train blow the whistle and begin to move, slowly pulling away.

"Arey Anna!! Jara wait karna! I'm coming!" The high voice of a girl with a thick South Indian accent called out, a hint of panic underlying her tone.

He rolled his eyes as a flash of color sprinted up to the train, backpack and hair swinging as she pulled up onto the now rapidly moving vehicle.

"You know, I've never missed a train in my life! Not one!" She panted, her voice loud against the silence of the cabin. Her South Indian accent was pronounced as she shoved her bag into the hands of the man standing by her, sharply instructing him to handle it carefully. She turned around, her braid falling onto her shoulder as she stopped in front of his seat. He looked up to see bright red leggings, a neon kurta, and curious hazel eyes gazing down at him

"Excuse me, you're in my seat, sir."

Continued Here

Edited by likeadesigirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww Dear, you are starting new SS...

Cant wait to read the first chapter... I also loved Jab we met Movie... I am eagarly waiting of Arshi's version of Jab we met 😉
Any way all the best for new story dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I also love jab we met
Awesome prologue 👏👏

Eagerly waiting to read d SS 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow..i have always loved the concept of Falling in love and friendship in a journey...i am sure to love this too...
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Beautiful...sending you buddy request!! accept it sweetie

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Congratulations on starting a new story.🥳
Jab we met is my favorite movie too and I am excited to read it with Arhi touch.
Khushi looks like a jolly girl like Geet. And Arnav is like Aditya failed in love. His roommate married his love😲. At least he has a sister who is worried for him.
Poor Arnav he looked so stressed that he want himself to distant away from everything. He has lost hopes and sees his future dark. Betrayal in love has shattered him. For him world is ended.
Khushi will be having honor to reintroduce him to the life and happiness.
Pm me it's next part when you update
Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting do continue soon
Jab We Met is one of my fav movies

P.S. Geet and Khushi are very much alike (both are crazy but I still like Khushi more) lol

Update ASAPwa!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A very interesting start!
I like the title a lot!
I am excited to read the new story! I am a fan of both Jab we Met and Chennai Express 😃
Thank you for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay!
Can't wait to read this! :D

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