SwaRon OS: Kabhi Jo Badal Barse

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

awesome concept n awesome os.. loved d way u showed sharon's concern for swayam n her inhibitions to meet him..

loved d song sequence n her outburst..

swayam worried wen he heard rey talk over phone with sharon n kria ..

loved d love both has on each other..

sharon came to c her n d way she was worried for swayam n d way she promised she ll come again tomo..

ruhi uff hate her.. d way she yelled at sharon felt like slapping her..

swaron confrontation was well written..

i so wished d read abt wat happened to that ruhi but anyways loved d end..

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Simply amazing and beautiful continuation of current situation. The best thing about your writing is your ability to describe situation and emotions. You use this ability of yours to perfection all your work and that's one of the reason for me being a fan of your works.

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

wow!!

wonderful!!

this os realy touched me...

superbly penned down..and the song just made it more beautiful...

i could feel the pain and love of sharon and swayam!!

it was such a pleasure reading this!!

i so wish this happened in d3 :(

but well loved to read it!!

you truly are an awesome writer :)

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Sneha Chheda

@snehac2

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

aww such a sweet end
yaar i just luv d way u write
too good gal
keep it going & keep writing such beautiful stuffs which are simple yet amazing👏👏

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Amazing os.
Luvd d way u ended.

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cool.surabhi

@cool.surabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Amazing...

Ab to apke writings ka hi asra hai, show mein to patch up hone se raha...

So keep writing such beautiful things...

n thanks for the pm...

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Aww beautiful os
Happy swayam ruhi sai irritate hogaya
Sharon swayam ko east Mai Milne aati hai
That was so adorable n the way she says she will come tomorrow
Hayee ! The love n concern which u potatoes thru Sharon
Was the best part
N at last the patch up
Grt work
Nancy

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