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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

too happy yar, loved it... swayam gave ruhi a piece of my her mind.. swaron back together, happy..

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armaanasadksg

@armaanasadksg

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow loved it. awesome os. pls do update more thankx 4 d pm. !

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

amazing os...loved it totally...

swaron emotion's wer perfectly defined..

just love d way u hv described sharon concern for swayam..

and ending was beautiful...

i loved d Rosy's demand...she bady needed dt slap. 😆 but koi bath nahi..swayam defended sharon in front of her dat was enuf for me.. 😳

over just loved it...

keep writing more.. 😃

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome OS!!

loved d way u described sharon's concern..

The song sequence was beautiful..

Thank u thank u thank u so much for this awesome os..

keep writing more..

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Ayushi or Aisha

@AyushiSinghania

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Abe. So adorable. Loved it.

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

it was a fantastic and wonderful os... loved it

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Well written tannu and I liked Sharon's silent care as well as Swayam's restlessness on getting a hint that Sharon was'nt well and was going through tough times..😊.
This was exactly something I had wished to read on the current track but how I wished Swayam ne Ruhi ko thoda aur jhaada hota badi irritating bandi hai woh..🤔.
I loved this write up as much as your previous write ups keep up the good work Tannu..❤️.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Also I'd like you to continue this and write one more part which would have the revelation of their relationship to the gang and also Ruhi's sick plotting it would be great..😊. Likh na pleasshhh Tannu..

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Also I would like to read one more part to this OS which would have a revelation to the gang of Swayam and Sharon's relationship and also Ruhi's sick plotting.. Likh na pleashhh tannu..😊.

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

superb os... awsm...
thank u fr d pm...

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