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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was beautiful Zee...
I shudder to think what would have happened if Arnavji had really not returned to the mandap in the show..

You have written this beautifully...
Khushi in the whole OS depicted what she truly meant happiness...my heart went out to her...
But she lost the battle against fate...poor girl...

Wish Arnav had not punished her and fulfilled his promise of always being with her...

The last part was so heart breaking...him not able to look at the stars and ask forgiveness...

*sigh* guilt and regret are the biggest punishment a person can get and Arnavji is going to leave with it his whole life...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
This was deeply moving.
You captured the right feelings for this one.
Probably this would have happened if her Arnavji didn't turn up.

Sighh.. this is so beautiful. 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was phenomenal...
Well done
Amazing one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Y soo sad os? u made me cry. it was hrt touching.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was heart wrenching!
beautifully written..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very beautifully written, loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
That was a brilliant and beautiful OS...
Kushis faith in her Arnavji till the last breath left her just shows her love...and Arnav has always lived in the cloud of his past always fighting against it and never actually seeing Kushis love for him her faith in him ..her forgiving nature...
you have porttrayed it beautifully loved your OS...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this was so sad, heart breaking and painful.

Honestly the one shot bought a tear to my eye,

However it was written so beautifully and exceptionally well,

It started of on such a beautiful moment and ended with a tragedy,

So Arnav's past did not let him attend his own wedding and Khushi waited for him till death took her away, so sad.

A brilliant read,

Amazing and fantastic writing,

Thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
omg so heart felt ...you bought tears to my eyes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I alread told you fab os..!

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