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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: rey_amar

hope you like that dhamakedar ending and hope yu like the story too

m sure i vl like it...

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

yaay...it waz a nyc 1...
start main hi kiss...wah wah kya baat hai...
i lovd it..
wanna c aage kya hota hai...
chalo chalo...aab fata fat se update do...
chappy 2 ka...
hehe...do write soon...

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

👏 👏 👏
lovely part
thanx for the pm

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

love the update...!

really amazing and interesting ...!

do continue and PM me as well please, thanks

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priyaajs

@priyaajs

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

first update with kisses n soo many emotionsss ehhee😛

good start :D

update soon :D

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

OS 🤣
arreeyyy OS nahi SS h yeh 🤣
superb start...
Kria hurt n she kisses him..
Rey ki toh balley balley ho gayi 🤣
by gawdd.. Yaha bhi pura concept bata diya 🤣
suspence naam ki chizz sunni nahi h aapne 🤣 kuch bhi ho.. I loved it.. Next part jaldi update kerna

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

wwwooowww this is amazzing!!!!

loving this!!! Awesome!!!

the concept damn good!!!

and then the first part!!!!

wooowww loving it!!!!

I just can't describe wat I feel...

could feel the emotions!!!

loving the!!!!

and the kiss explained many untold emotions!!!

ammmaaaszing!!!!

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Dis is unpredictable!!!
Are yaar promo mein to baat hig ki hui thi na??!
Aur idhar to at d end of d update humko kriyansh ke do do kisses mil rahe hain!!!
Oye hoye!!! Ye to dil garden garden kar dene wali baat ho gai ji!!!
Par kriya itna zyada kyun ro rahi hai??? 😕
Thik hai chalo hug bhi ho gayi!!! Aur vo bhi nearly 10 min wali...n tight wali!! 😉
Phir??
Ab shayad rey regret karega...aur sochega ki kriya ne emotional hoke usko kiss kar diya!! N khud se gussa hoga...ki khud ko control kyun nahi kiya!!
Aur kriya ka mission linecutter apne next stage pe jayega!!!

Par ye kya?? Itna 6otu sa update??? Kyun???
Koi nahi agli wali to badi hogi na?? To koi nahi!!!
N plz jab update karo to pm me!!! N jaldi se karna update!!!