KriYaansh OS -LoveUjustUforever PART 1 UPDT

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chandrima

@chand91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

sry

i m lat

dhamahedar cncpt dr

plz cnt soon n plz plz pm me

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Atcully me kal hi comment karne
Bali thi but post nhi ho raha tha

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Concept was great loved it
Plz continue do pm me

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Kunwar_AJS

@Kunwar_AJS

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: reyaditi
yaay...i lovd d way u sd a dhamakedar ending...
wohoo...prologue padh ke hi itni excitement hai...
plz plz update supr soon...
do write asap...
ty..mast hai story...
kriya makin rey realize hiz love...i wish d3 main bhi aisa hota..

hope you like that dhamakedar ending and hope yu like the story too

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Kunwar_AJS

@Kunwar_AJS

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Thanks alot to all the commentors and hope you like the first part

chapter 1

Kriya in Fire Exit
Kriya crying badly
She is hurt badly hurt she never thought this could be the reason for all this
Kriya -Kyun universji mere saath hi ye sab kyun hota hai
Main hamesha Rey ko sirf khush dekhna chati thi
Do saal pehle main rey se jhooth bolke yaha se gayi thi
sirf isliye kyun ki main chati thi rey moveon kare apni life main
but aaj wahi sab ho raha jo main kabhi nahi chati thi
kyun universji mere saath hi sab galat kyun hota hai
She was still crying badly she was completely heart broken and blaming herself for everything this time things wer hurting her beyond the limitations.

Suddenly the door opens and kriya turns she sees Rey standing there
rey could clearly see hurt in her eyes
he was sure something has happenes that hurted her badly her eyes speaks it all and this time he can just deny that he could feel the hurt she is suffering from.
her every tear is hurting his heart badly

rey goes near her she was not looking at him
Kriya was completely broken but she dont want rey to tell anything

rey-Kriya are you okk
Kriay is just silent
rey -kriya what happened just tell me
kriya is still silent
rey holds her by her arms
rey-kriya just tell me kya hua
plss aise chup mat raho kriya
plss tell i will help you tumahri har problem main tumhari help karu
just tell me kriya main kuch bhi karunga tumhari help karne k liye
kriya plss stop crying and plss bataoo

kriya -rey aap meri help karna chate haii na toh
rey -batao kriya kya
kriya -rey can you please hug me please with tears in her eyes
rey was shockd but he could do anything to stop her tears
and in no time he hugs her trying to pamper her to stop crying
kriya- rey kya aap thoda aur tightly hug kar sakte ho plsss
rey hugs her too tightly as much tightly he could
there was no space inbetween them not even air could pass
he hugged her too tightly
and after a long hug of 10 minutes they finally broke the hug

kriya eyes were still wet
rey was just staring at her and holding her face
kriya could see the pain the love in rey's eyes
but she could stil see the fear the hurtness in rey's eyes and only she is responsible for all
and at ay cost she wants to take that pain away from him forever and just wanna see love in his eyes she wants that love back for him for herself for them

she cant control her emotions and places her lips on him going more closer to him
rey just cant believe what is happening but he just wanna live this moment
she kiss him soflty but witl more of passion and unintentionally rey pulls her closer to him by her waist

and the kiss turns into a passionate one
and finally kriya brokes the kiss and she could see so may mixed emotions in rey's eyes his expression asking him so many questions a feeling of guilt but she dont want him to be guilty nor he wants him to feel he did anything and
so she again places her lips on him kiss him with lots of love

i know its small but next will be longer😊
and hope you liked this one

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Awesome Start
Loved It
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part
Continue Soon

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AMAR_LOVE

@AMAR_LOVE

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

this was the best update...plz continue soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

the first part was amazing... she knows that it was her fault and they serious it was
they talk and she let her emotions out in front of him and no one can bear it for longer...
it flow out... do continue soon and pm me