All types of criticism and ideas are most welcomed
sorry for any grammar and spelling mistakes
This OS is going to be in some parts and here is the prolpgue of some sequences.
scene 1:
Kriya -kya aap mjhe hug kar sakte ho Rey plss
Rey hugs kriya
Kriya - can you hug me thoda aur tightly
scene 2:
kriya - rey main aapko chodke k kabhi nahin jaa sakti kabhi nahi
and this time i will make you realise that you are my linecutter
and now i want my linecutter my chabilal back
scene 3:
Rey in basketball court
Rey-kyun kyun main apni feelings nahin control kar paa raha
no nah ye pyar mere liye nahi bana and i have to stay away from it
scene 4:
KriYaansh fight
Rey hurts himself
rey dont talk to anyone
scene 5:
Kriya hurtss herself to make realise how it feels
Rey anger at its highst peak
and ic changes into a big aggressive drama
scene 6:
rey searching kriya
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jope kuch samajh aya hoo if not thnn this is how story will go
Kriya realise that why Rey is not ready to realise his feelings for her and decides to make him fall madly in love with her ,but in this the situation changes and the story how rey realise that he is so called madly in love with her again and just cant seperate her from himself
there will be a lot of emotional sequence
a romance
rey's fight
and a dhamakedar ending
hope you all like it
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