KriYaansh OS -LoveUjustUforever PART 1 UPDT

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i actually have not written any KriYaansh story like this but this time i have something beuatiful to penned down and so want you all to read
All types of criticism and ideas are most welcomed
sorry for any grammar and spelling mistakes
This OS is going to be in some parts and here is the prolpgue of some sequences.


scene 1:
Kriya -kya aap mjhe hug kar sakte ho Rey plss
Rey hugs kriya
Kriya - can you hug me thoda aur tightly


scene 2:
kriya - rey main aapko chodke k kabhi nahin jaa sakti kabhi nahi
and this time i will make you realise that you are my linecutter
and now i want my linecutter my chabilal back


scene 3:
Rey in basketball court
Rey-kyun kyun main apni feelings nahin control kar paa raha
no nah ye pyar mere liye nahi bana and i have to stay away from it

scene 4:
KriYaansh fight
Rey hurts himself
rey dont talk to anyone

scene 5:
Kriya hurtss herself to make realise how it feels
Rey anger at its highst peak
and ic changes into a big aggressive drama

scene 6:
rey searching kriya
😊




jope kuch samajh aya hoo if not thnn this is how story will go


Kriya realise that why Rey is not ready to realise his feelings for her and decides to make him fall madly in love with her ,but in this the situation changes and the story how rey realise that he is so called madly in love with her again and just cant seperate her from himself


there will be a lot of emotional sequence
a romance
rey's fight
and a dhamakedar ending


hope you all like it

chp 1 page 4


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sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing concept... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaay...i lovd d way u sd a dhamakedar ending...
wohoo...prologue padh ke hi itni excitement hai...
plz plz update supr soon...
do write asap...
ty..mast hai story...
kriya makin rey realize hiz love...i wish d3 main bhi aisa hota..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept dea...! Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg
Totally exciting
Yaar aise track pe tho sirf kriyaanshko imagine kar sakte hain
I loved the concept
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb... Continue soon n pm me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Prologue
Loved It
Continue Soon & Plzzz PM Me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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V exciting concept!!!
Ye jo bhi likha hai uss se to khali concept samaj mein aaya!!
Matlab sab ku6 tad-bits mein diya hain!!!
Smart! Pura ka pura to humko milega nahi!!
To jaldi se update kardo!!! Plz!!!
Dis tym kriya is taking a step forward!!!
She is putting d effort to make rey realize his own feelings n accept dem!!!
Sooo interesting!!!
It surely wud b a treat to read!!!!
Plz plz plz do update soon!!!
N ya plz do pm me!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowow real good like it :D
update soon :D PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept...!
please start soon ...! sounds amazing...!
Please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks

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