SanDhir SS :: As Long As You Love Me *Day 4 Updated*

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WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29
Amazing update..jus loved it!!
😊 😃

thanku so much

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WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Mahiii
amazing amazing update... loved it toally... fab job... i cant wait for the next part... please update soon :)))))))))

Mahhiii Di!!! i am so glad u r here!! 🤗 and don worry next part will definately be rocking!!!

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WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: sweetieswagata
amazing update..👏
finally sanyu revealed her past to randhir..this girl is in so much pain😭
hope randhir brings her out of this depression soon and makes her life happy...😳
waiting for the next update 😳

thanku so much!!! yea she definately is thus she tired to attempt suicide!!!!

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WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: jtmbarun
Amazing update dear!!!
The feelings and emotions of sanyukta was well written!!
And I loved the third reason-Live for your parents..
very emotional..finally we got to know about Sanyukta's past..

Awesome update..love it!!👏

thanku so much!!! i am glad u liked it!!! 😳

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WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Asapom
awesome update
sanyu is suffering from lot of guilt
continue soon

thanku so muchh!!!

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Rads

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Brilliant updates Part 2 and 3 both are quite intriguing
and we finally got a sneak-peak into Sanyu's life...
looking forward to the next part..
great job Sonia-Partner⭐️⭐️

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

And am here.. 😎

Sorry guys i was a teeny weeny bit busy so i couldnt comment earlier. 🤢

Saffu partner...its time for payback for all those extra large comments...muhahahha 😈😈

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First things first. Lovely idea sonia. Its so different and fresh from the SH story. And i love the 10 day twist.You've crafted the basic story line so well. Randhir is a stranger to her still is attracted to help her. Sanyukta doesnt know him still cant say no to him. Their bond is so beautiful already. Two incomplete souls coming together. I am truly am in love with this concept. Something different than the usual sandhir <3

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Day1

First reason...bang on...perfectly put...no matter what...sanyu ke liye first reason to live machines ko chodke kuch nahi ho sakta...

You wrote it brilliantly...randhir trying to understand sanyukta...confused as to what he should do...and then without making any effort he knows it should be machines...thats how their connection is...It was very good moment his realisation... 😃

Kudos to you both for the idea and the execution 👏 And love the song and title selection as well...its one of the few english songs i like 😆

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Day2

The transition from day 1 to day 2 was very nice. I was also very khush khush seeing sanyu and randhir khush khush 😃 And happiness is definitely a very good reason to live for. The way you wrote it sonia...i could see it happening before my eyes. And feel their happiness... Beautifully penned down 👏

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Day3

Saffi kamini...tu sadist ki sadist hi rahegi 😭😡🤣 Itni emotional cheezein kyun likhti hai...makes my heart heavy heavy...😭

But i cant tell you how happy i am to see you writing something...didnt i tell you you will write something soon...I was right afterall 😃😎

You definitely deserve to be the president of the sadist club... The way you wrote about her past and her pain. I could literally feel it. I was feeling so bad for her. *takes a bow* sadism queen😆

I loved how she shared everything with randhir and how he just listened to her.

Bechari sanyu fearing everyone will leave her and not getting close to anyone 😭

And that jay person 😡

But the ending wrapped it up perfectly... She shouldnt feel guilty for her parents accident...she should live her life for them...perfect reason...

After this i understand sanyuktas depression perfectly...

But kamini i was so happy that atleast randhir dint have a troubled past here...tuney uske papa ko kuch kar diya 😡 Curious to know about his past...make them friends soon please :P

And update jaldi se 😉

Waiting 😃

Edited by --Ari-- - 11 years ago

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

And with this i beat saffu's guiness world record length comment with my own 🤣🤣

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Anysia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

SanDhir SS :: As Long As You Love Me *Day 4 Updated*

21/03/2014

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jtmbarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Beautiful update!!!

The first part Sanyukta waking up with a smile was nice..She is changing and that shows Randhir is slowly being successful in changing her for the better... And the first thing she thought about was Randhir..how sweet..

I also liked how Sanyukta too cared for Randhir...how they are slowly becoming more close to each other..their friendship..etc..

I loved the fourth reason-Live cause we all are here for a reason and life and death isn't in our hands..

This is so true for all of us..loved it..

And I don't know why..I feel the last reason will be Randhir..Live for Randhir..😳

Edited by jtmbarun - 11 years ago