SanDhir SS :: As Long As You Love Me *Day 4 Updated* - Page 13

Originally posted by: --Ari--

And am here.. 😎

Sorry guys i was a teeny weeny bit busy so i couldnt comment earlier. 🤢

Saffu partner...its time for payback for all those extra large comments...muhahahha 😈😈

Yayyy finally Ari is here *lol*

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First things first. Lovely idea sonia. Its so different and fresh from the SH story. And i love the 10 day twist.You've crafted the basic story line so well. Randhir is a stranger to her still is attracted to help her. Sanyukta doesnt know him still cant say no to him. Their bond is so beautiful already. Two incomplete souls coming together. I am truly am in love with this concept. Something different than the usual sandhir <3

Thank you Ari 🤗
Am very glad that you liked it 😃

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Day1

First reason...bang on...perfectly put...no matter what...sanyu ke liye first reason to live machines ko chodke kuch nahi ho sakta...

You wrote it brilliantly...randhir trying to understand sanyukta...confused as to what he should do...and then without making any effort he knows it should be machines...thats how their connection is...It was very good moment his realisation... 😃

Kudos to you both for the idea and the execution 👏 And love the song and title selection as well...its one of the few english songs i like 😆

i know ... Machines ko chodke Sanyukta ke liye first reason kuch aur ho hi nahi sakta :)

As long as you love me is moi too favorite song :P

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Day2

The transition from day 1 to day 2 was very nice. I was also very khush khush seeing sanyu and randhir khush khush 😃 And happiness is definitely a very good reason to live for. The way you wrote it sonia...i could see it happening before my eyes. And feel their happiness... Beautifully penned down 👏

Thank you 🤗

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Day3

Saffi kamini...tu sadist ki sadist hi rahegi 😭😡🤣 Itni emotional cheezein kyun likhti hai...makes my heart heavy heavy...😭

But i cant tell you how happy i am to see you writing something...didnt i tell you you will write something soon...I was right afterall 😃😎

You definitely deserve to be the president of the sadist club... The way you wrote about her past and her pain. I could literally feel it. I was feeling so bad for her. *takes a bow* sadism queen😆

🤣 🤣 moi too agree ... Saffy President of the Sadist Club 🤣 🤣

I loved how she shared everything with randhir and how he just listened to her.

Bechari sanyu fearing everyone will leave her and not getting close to anyone 😭

And that jay person 😡

But the ending wrapped it up perfectly... She shouldnt feel guilty for her parents accident...she should live her life for them...perfect reason...

After this i understand sanyuktas depression perfectly...

But kamini i was so happy that atleast randhir dint have a troubled past here...tuney uske papa ko kuch kar diya 😡 Curious to know about his past...make them friends soon please :P

And update jaldi se 😉

Waiting 😃

Originally posted by: ..Serendipity..

Brilliant updates Part 2 and 3 both are quite intriguing
and we finally got a sneak-peak into Sanyu's life...
looking forward to the next part..
great job Sonia-Partner⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: --Ari--

And am here.. 😎

Sorry guys i was a teeny weeny bit busy so i couldnt comment earlier. 🤢

Saffu partner...its time for payback for all those extra large comments...muhahahha 😈😈

u r damn to late...!!!! kamini!!!!
ofc my beautifully comments deserve payback... after all they r the shaan of ur SS!!! 🤣

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First things first. Lovely idea sonia. Its so different and fresh from the SH story. And i love the 10 day twist.You've crafted the basic story line so well. Randhir is a stranger to her still is attracted to help her. Sanyukta doesnt know him still cant say no to him. Their bond is so beautiful already. Two incomplete souls coming together. I am truly am in love with this concept. Something different than the usual sandhir <3

she got in a damn to good concept that i couldnt help bt be a co-writer to it..!!! :P
me too was in love with the concept!!!

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Day1

First reason...bang on...perfectly put...no matter what...sanyu ke liye first reason to live machines ko chodke kuch nahi ho sakta...

You wrote it brilliantly...randhir trying to understand sanyukta...confused as to what he should do...and then without making any effort he knows it should be machines...thats how their connection is...It was very good moment his realisation... 😃

Kudos to you both for the idea and the execution 👏 And love the song and title selection as well...its one of the few english songs i like 😆

hahaha i love to many english songs...definately a good song!!!! thanku so much..definately for Sanyu the 1st reason ought to be Machines!

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Day2

The transition from day 1 to day 2 was very nice. I was also very khush khush seeing sanyu and randhir khush khush 😃 And happiness is definitely a very good reason to live for. The way you wrote it sonia...i could see it happening before my eyes. And feel their happiness... Beautifully penned down 👏

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Day3

Saffi kamini...tu sadist ki sadist hi rahegi 😭😡🤣 Itni emotional cheezein kyun likhti hai...makes my heart heavy heavy...😭

But i cant tell you how happy i am to see you writing something...didnt i tell you you will write something soon...I was right afterall 😃😎

You definitely deserve to be the president of the sadist club... The way you wrote about her past and her pain. I could literally feel it. I was feeling so bad for her. *takes a bow* sadism queen😆

I loved how she shared everything with randhir and how he just listened to her.

Bechari sanyu fearing everyone will leave her and not getting close to anyone 😭

And that jay person 😡

But the ending wrapped it up perfectly... She shouldnt feel guilty for her parents accident...she should live her life for them...perfect reason...

After this i understand sanyuktas depression perfectly...

But kamini i was so happy that atleast randhir dint have a troubled past here...tuney uske papa ko kuch kar diya 😡 Curious to know about his past...make them friends soon please :P

And update jaldi se 😉

Waiting 😃