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Shanaya

@Lovelylavender

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Hey vaish!!
First of all happy valentines day!! :) :)

This was like an aaawwweeessooommeee os.!!
Ek to pehle se hi this wait fr todays episode is drivin us crazy n u are adding a cherry on the cake!!

This was.. Like ill not call it hot..
Coz this was full of emotions!! The way u expressed their confusions..
And the way wen they wer togethr they jus forgot all of them..
They wer there in ur os in deep love and finally accepting it!!
U know if even sum part of ur os wud occur in real..
God!!! The arsha fans are like gone mannn!!! 🤣
but all i want to say is..
Brilliant!! I luvd it :)
Thnx fr pm :)

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anjali

@anjali22

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

its HOTTT

amazing os

well written

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Res

unres

u have that power in you to make readers think the way you want to...

captivating minds is the game of ur left hand...

it was very much enthusiastic types...

ambience u created by words...that essence of yours...lovely..

most beautiful part was the constant discription of her caressing his muscles...

sensual yet sophisticated...i so so loved it...

this was one of ur best👏

Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Vaisuuu 😳

i love u ree🤗

gawwddd☺️☺️

d way u described rey's confusion abt his feelings,the dance part everything was perfect👏

d ending part was F***ing brilliant

u totally roaked it vaisuuu❤️

m dead🤢🤢🤢

Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Why vaish why???? Or even better, why kishi why????? Why did you read this so early in the morning???? Dimag kharab ho gaya tha mera. Par tune koi warning bhi to nahi di. Aur ab ho gaya bera garak mere din ka. Reh reh ke yahi aayega dimag me.

It was primal with a capital P but yet so poignant in its beauty .That feeling that they have for each other stems from something very deep within them. It was not lovemaking on a physical level. Not just them satiating their desires . It was the merging of souls on the cosmic plane. I LOVED IT VAISH. And it had nothing to do with me being a tharki. Because what you wrote was so much more than that.

Editing ke taraf dhyanbhi nahi gaya mera. And I don'tthink anybody would care...They would be more preoccupied with fanning themselves. hehehe😉

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

firstly promo kal se mujhe torture kar rahi hai..

ab tera yeh os...huhh...

btw os masst tha yaar,,🤗

hot,,,, sensous.. above all the way u described their emotions..

their feelings was amazing..☺️

whenever i m listening ang laga dere.. i m visualising Arsha..

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Ouch!it ws so hot that it burned my body...
loved it...the lovemaking expressed so beautifully that it dint seem vulgar..only u cn dobit vaish...
loved it...

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sun_flower60

@sun_flower60

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

i just cant get enough of this song now...and ur OS...

haye...that was awesome...the way u expressed their feelings and especially the last bit ☺️ ...so good...

aj time bohut slow ja raha hai...

till then i'll go over these posts n create an ArShaland...😳😆

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

vaish it was awesome and 😳 os... loved it kal se sab 🤢🤢🤢

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

oh hell...
diz waz hawt, sexy n what not...
dont have enough sexy adjectives to describe diz os...
u had a plan behind writing diz os na???
i knw...
u had a plan to kill us with ur writing...
imagining d entire scene while reading gave me goosebumps on ma entire body...
ahhh...*screaming*...
still cant get over it...
thnx for pm...

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