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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

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My dear friend vaish first of all how f**king dare you!!😡

This OS is so so so hot like I am burning here plus the song's lyrics...🤢 dead dead dead...mai to Mar hi gayi..

You made me fall in love with your work again... (just read some of your previous works)

I loved this so much and still how dare you write such hot things like it should be illegal...

On a serious note this was bomb!! Superliner

P.S did I mention I love you 😃

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Woaps what was dat

deadly OS

i was like what da?

Awesome

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Amazing ...

Super hot ...

Loved it ..

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

RES😆

UNRES

why god why..?? why exactly I didn't read this before..?? arghhh!! anyway, coming back to the OS!

I've read a number of OSs... feelings, desire and want... angst and layers... But this one..?? it's soo full of pure love..😳
Both of them want each other, both of them want to make the other one know what they really feel, both trying, and both of them actually succeeds on it finally.. the perfect use of lyrics, the purity, the flow was too beautiful..
I honestly LOUVED the way of their mind was written.. kabhi Rey kabhi Kriya.. kitna similer feelings hain, but still kitna alag..!!😊

a huge a applause👏👏

Edited by anki_22 - 11 years ago