|| Combined FF : Dented Scars || Part 9 , Pg 33

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purnima209

@purnima209

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

wow yar this is soo beautiful and awsome yar...

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Such a creative concept! An effective way to keep this wonderful forum active. Why people no spamming this post??? :P
And as usual, Arushi's brilliant writing compels me to comment. D'you know awesome blossom you are? I lurve your writing. Itna expressive :')
Two of my favourite authors, Arushi and Mitra, combined with various others writing one fic? It's gonna be quite a rollercoaster ^^

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: LoveToDream
Such a creative concept! An effective way to keep this wonderful forum active. Why people no spamming this post??? :P
And as usual, Arushi's brilliant writing compels me to comment. D'you know awesome blossom you are? I lurve your writing. Itna expressive :')
Two of my favourite authors, Arushi and Mitra, combined with various others writing one fic? It's gonna be quite a rollercoaster ^^

Thenkoo, thenkoo, thenkoo, Priya! *jumps around the room and falls to the floor*

*regains senses and composure*

How are your exams going?

I'll tell you what! Why don't you write a part too? I think this post will get spammed then :P

Also, please comment on The Grease Story ka agla part xP

Edited by ArushiKotecha - 11 years ago

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arshifan2012

@arshifan2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

wow! Its so beautiful! Whenever i hear song , i feel SanDhir at the back of mind! Beautiful part! 😃

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rabia297

@rabia297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

it was fabb. ...superbly penned down...
their sweet memories...
em really eager to knw wht happend to their perfect life...wht randhir done...dat dey both r seperate...nd hurted...ahhh!!
plzzz nxt update mai open dis suspense...
nywazzz superb work...continue asap:)

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Anuradha

@federized2210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Arushi darling, u have set the bar so high for me! So next up my part! Tomorrow!! I am off to thinking a fitting continuation to this:)
Beautiful u guys!! Nidhi, rads, zoya & arushi!! Absolute brilliance!
Love, anuradha

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TheAphrodite

@TheAphrodite

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

since its written by different writers im resing differently wil unres soon!!! :P

RES for Nidhi😆

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UNRES

"We are all incomplete.

On the inside, we are splintered, torn.
But we are eternal, like the phoenix,
and, with our heads held high, we fight on."

firstly tell ur friend the above lines wer ahmazing...seriously...!!

do u noe i love the bird phoenix...and the mention of it and the prefect description of the two jzz makes me fall in love with the above lines..sry nidhi this time this poem was the best!!

coming to ur part... when i read it and believe me i read the moment u had updated it...the way u portrayed the start was such a beautifully beginning..sad beginnings are my weak points and cant resist bt comment but ur strt was something so wonderful i really did know wad to write and plus was lazy ass!!! 🤣 🤣

but u jzz made me fall in luv with this FF and without the start it wouldnt have been the same... the way u wrote that Randhirs letter ohmyeffinggod...!! could the guy get ny cuter...!!! he regerts his mistake...he betrayed her...he forceful said Love U thats all i could register!!!
but yaar fabulously written..i donno why i kept wondering what exactly to write...usually words come to me..bt u truely managed to make me think wad u tot while writing the thing since u left it half ways...!!!!

gal u jzz r ahmazing writer...and keep writing!!

regards

safrena

Edited by forevermine - 11 years ago

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

RES for rads

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Unresed

Partner...!!

ur partner is always chotu but yet so beautifully penned yaar!!

when we had the unthinkable conversation where u said it wil be the end of it...i was upset...although i luv sad stories but hate stories with an open ending or a sad ending..!!!! but then came the idea of Colab work and gosh u fitted ur part to this story so beautifully!!

i loved how you explained Sanyus anger..the Randhirs Sadness making me want more of ur writing..!!

but gosh the little part u wrote was so beautifully!!!

awesome job

regards

safrena

Edited by forevermine - 11 years ago

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

RES for Zoya

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Unresed!!

ZOYA!!!!!

ohmygod!! this part was wowie...and possible one of ur best til date..!!!

i mean that is of the one two many OSes i read of urs...and feel in love with the writing!!!

coming back to the OS..!!

can i say it was worth the delay!!

the way u portrayed both of em.. i luved it...!!
the sadness of the two... while one is living with the tot that he has lost her...the other cant seem to think wad did she do to deserve this treatment..!!!

the way she blasted out and randhir shocked as he jzz didnt know wad to say but a mere ILOVEU...which sanyu ofc wouldnt believe as she tot he betrayed her..!!

and left...!!!

gosh zoya u made this part with such beauty the way u fit it into the entire storyline...a fabulous job!!!

regards

safrena

Edited by forevermine - 11 years ago