ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14)

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mubina_m19

@mubina_m19

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Amazing story loved it
I read both parts together
and u have beautifully written them
thanks for pm
continue soon

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Amazing update
Loved it <3
Aww the opening was emotional

Loved the way Arnav is taking care of Khushi

Beautifully written

Thanks for the pm

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

beautiful...who is lavanya...n was Arnav married before ?

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Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

nice update...

loved it...😊

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

fantastic story

i have become soo fond of ur stories

u bring out emotiona and feels soo brilliantly

that i have become a fan of ur writing

loved all the parts

KHUSHI... a psychatrist ,strong and positive girl

poor girl loss her mother at a young age and now father too

but glad she find solace and strength in arnav

loved her character

ARNAV ...had also a painfull past and lost his parents ...embracing darkness in his life and now Shashi gave him light as khushi and calmness to his life in form of khushi❤️

another very well written and brilliant piece of work by you👍🏼

HATS OFF TO UR BRILLIANT WORK ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏

thanks for pm

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

That was beautifully written.

Standing tall amidst ruins is Khushi!

No wonder Arnav is proud of her and vocalized it too!

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

that was awesome.,..emotional..beautifully written <3

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Oh god Chaverah!! I don't know how you get such beautiful ideas n how you portray their feelings so beautifully..
This a great start..
Waiting for more..
Thanks for the pm..