ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14)

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

beautiful!!!

wonder what happened that anji lost her smile

eager to read more

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@BlueBloodQueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

IS ARNAV TALKING ABOUT KHUSHI OR SOMEONE ELSE 😕
LOVED ARNAV'S BOND WITH HIS NEPHEW...

AWESOME UPDATE...

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

wow superb update as always u will amaze us with ur narration and the intensity of emotions...arnav was so much attached with his family and seek for his di's love...but what was the reason behind his di's ignorance of him is too much to ask u at this point...looking forward for the next update...what more surprises waiting for us..?!...update soon...

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Awesome update. Looking forward to next part.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

everything seems so dull.. what has happened?

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Intriguing start... Well written. Loved it. Thanx for the PM.

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

ahaannn...

a great start...

eagerly waiting for the story to progress...

plxxx continue soon...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

The update was really good. It's too good to be written in words about how good the update is. I say I cannot make it into words on how splendid the update is. You wrote it very beautifully, clean and neat. I just loved it.

The update, written in Arnav's POV, so well portrayed his inner turmoil, his inner thoughts, his feelings. The way he want his daily roiutine to be, but the way it is, his inner self while the ruthless covered outer self. His pain seeing his Di not being the same old, the way he find his happiness in small things and get contended to run a day with the same was so well written.

The changed yet the same Arnav here, I'm really getting curious about him. His mind fickle between him being the ASR or Arnav was too good to read. I'm much more excited to know further but gloomy about the timings of the update.

Will be waiting for the PM of the next update now. I want that to come soon anyways, but can't make you compromise with your commitments. So I just have to say I'm waiting.

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

There is so much suspense around each character. We have to wait for the story to progress to unfold the things. Story plot is interesting. Keep going.