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Posted: 11 years ago
Di🤗
Well this was another fantastic and action filled update.
First I got Mr. Six Finger. He is Wazid Miyan for sure...hope I am right here.

Then come to story...you gave both Asad and Zoya brain. Both use their brain in their own ways. Loved the differences. As Zoya has some OTT behavior problem so she overlooked some consequences. But Asad being the self made man took care those consequences. I loved the "Humaira escape" scene it was hilarious. Just like typical Ayan-Zoya. Asad was also typical in his thinking. Loved Asad-Zoya conversation at the lake. So Zoya now knew about her mother. But her ultimate goal is her father. So I am thinking they will marry after that only or you can surprise us anytime...😆

Overall a well written and very good update. Loved it to the core. Thank you for this.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update!

AsYa's conversation! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Di🤗

Well this was another fantastic and action filled update.
First I got Mr. Six Finger. He is Wazid Miyan for sure...hope I am right here.

Then come to story...you gave both Asad and Zoya brain. Both use their brain in their own ways. Loved the differences. As Zoya has some OTT behavior problem so she overlooked some consequences. But Asad being the self made man took care those consequences. I loved the "Humaira escape" scene it was hilarious. Just like typical Ayan-Zoya. Asad was also typical in his thinking. Loved Asad-Zoya conversation at the lake. So Zoya now knew about her mother. But her ultimate goal is her father. So I am thinking they will marry after that only or you can surprise us anytime...😆

Overall a well written and very good update. Loved it to the core. Thank you for this.😊


OMG my Blooper Queen mere ko na tension that iss bar tu koi blooper pakad na le
But glad you like it to the core
only Ayan and Zoya plan such weird things, if it wasnt for Asads back up plan, humera wud hv been again in thier hands again
Yes I wanted Asad to know that zoya s messy habit is becoz of the adjustment issues of her childhood. Then only he could accept her completely Otherwise who is as messy as zoya? I dont find even my son so much messy.
Yah her goal is father only but before that she needs to know what happnd to her mother, may be baap tak pohunchthe pohuncthe beti ko baap se nafrat na hojaye. Dekhte hain
Let me see abt abbu revelation and asya marriage tracks i hv not decided yet. But i guess it will go hand in hand. Lets see first asya marries or abbu is revealed.

This is for ur guess👏

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Edited by anura7281 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

Lovely update!

AsYa's conversation! ❤️


Thank you so much
Glad you liked it

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swapno thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anura7281


OMG my Blooper Queen mere ko na tension that iss bar tu koi blooper pakad na le
But glad you like it to the core
only Ayan and Zoya plan such weird things, if it wasnt for Asads back up plan, humera wud hv been again in thier hands again
Yes I wanted Asad to know that zoya s messy habit is becoz of the adjustment issues of her childhood. Then only he could accept her completely Otherwise who is as messy as zoya? I dont find even my son so much messy.
Yah her goal is father only but before that she needs to know what happnd to her mother, may be baap tak pohunchthe pohuncthe beti ko baap se nafrat na hojaye. Dekhte hain
Let me see abt abbu revelation and asya marriage tracks i hv not decided yet. But i guess it will go hand in hand. Lets see first asya marries or abbu is revealed.

This is for ur guess👏

Continue reading


Haww...Di Blooper Queen bana diya mujhe...
Tension mat lena di...I will not find any blooper from now...
Actually I am a reader and when I am hooked with any story I try to concentrate each and every chapter.. now as I have no works so read more carefully...😊
Ab MS GUL wali baat kyu kar rahe hain???😲
She also did not know when the lead pair will marry...😆 😆
Anyways do it your own way...I was just telling...
When it concerns with AsYa I foget everything...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno


Haww...Di Blooper Queen bana diya mujhe...
Tension mat lena di...I will not find any blooper from now...
Actually I am a reader and when I am hooked with any story I try to concentrate each and every chapter.. now as I have no works so read more carefully...😊
Ab MS GUL wali baat kyu kar rahe hain???😲
She also did not know when the lead pair will marry...😆 😆
Anyways do it your own way...I was just telling...
When it concerns with AsYa I foget everything...😆


koi baat nahi Swappy tu blooper find kar then only i will come to know how consistent i m with my story. Are maine vo issliye kaha ki maine track decide nahi kiya hai, but i m not gul i will bring problems but that will be concerned and solved by asya themselves not like gul bringing preggy billi again and again. Now the gudiya factory case re opened and the courtroom drama will be there for 2-3 updates. The older generations story has to be open now from various person filling in their parts eventually leading to Zoyas abbus truth. Now i will give u an insight of what I am planning

For example now based on the chip rashid will be freed of murder charge of Zoyas mom. But Rashid cannot tell whose voices are there in the chip as he doesnt know that Razia had committed the murder.But he is in pilgrimage with Shirin and his whereabouts are not known.

Badi bi knows that it was Razia who killed Zoyas mom in the factory as she knows that straight from Razias mouth. So she has to come to fill in the story. But as of now shes is missing

Then when the back story begin to open then how Rashid was blackmailed to marry Shirin will come, then Mr. 6finger will come to fill in the rest of the story, revealing humera to be the grandaughter of Gudiya factory owner.

But still Gaffur is Zoyas father, Razia knows it well so she will block all ways.

At last the photo with Zoya will lead to the confirmation that Gaffur is her father after corrrelating many things but I dont know where in all these asya marriage will fit. Thats why.

Now everything is in bits and pieces and it will take time to join all the jigsaw puzzle.
I hope i am clear now.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Thanks for pm


Thank you so much
Glad you liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anura7281


koi baat nahi Swappy tu blooper find kar then only i will come to know how consistent i m with my story. Are maine vo issliye kaha ki maine track decide nahi kiya hai, but i m not gul i will bring problems but that will be concerned and solved by asya themselves not like gul bringing preggy billi again and again. Now the gudiya factory case re opened and the courtroom drama will be there for 2-3 updates. The older generations story has to be open now from various person filling in their parts eventually leading to Zoyas abbus truth. Now i will give u an insight of what I am planning

For example now based on the chip rashid will be freed of murder charge of Zoyas mom. But Rashid cannot tell whose voices are there in the chip as he doesnt know that Razia had committed the murder.But he is in pilgrimage with Shirin and his whereabouts are not known.

Badi bi knows that it was Razia who killed Zoyas mom in the factory as she knows that straight from Razias mouth. So she has to come to fill in the story. But as of now shes is missing

Then when the back story begin to open then how Rashid was blackmailed to marry Shirin will come, then Mr. 6finger will come to fill in the rest of the story, revealing humera to be the grandaughter of Gudiya factory owner.

But still Gaffur is Zoyas father, Razia knows it well so she will block all ways.

At last the photo with Zoya will lead to the confirmation that Gaffur is her father after corrrelating many things but I dont know where in all these asya marriage will fit. Thats why.

Now everything is in bits and pieces and it will take time to join all the jigsaw puzzle.
I hope i am clear now.



sounds thrilling...👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmm mystery..
I'm glad Asad told the truth, I always wanted him to support her and Zoya to always face the difficult times together like couples should. Cannot wait to read about the doll factory and the back story of everyone involved. I really want Gazia to pay for their sins. They have ruined a lot of lives with their actions for greed and money. Bless poor humeira. Hopefully they won't find her and she and Ayaan can marry without any problems. Great update as usual.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: B3ll3...

Hmm mystery..

I'm glad Asad told the truth, I always wanted him to support her and Zoya to always face the difficult times together like couples should. Cannot wait to read about the doll factory and the back story of everyone involved. I really want Gazia to pay for their sins. They have ruined a lot of lives with their actions for greed and money. Bless poor humeira. Hopefully they won't find her and she and Ayaan can marry without any problems. Great update as usual.


Thats why ff is titled Mohabbat Zindagi Hai. You face turmoils and difficult times but true loves withstands everything and thats what I wanted to show. Everything happens between a couple should originate from the love they have for each other. And if that love is strong then nobody can break you. Thats my utlimate message LOVE IS LIFE. It starts from from love, it runs through love and end with love.

Asad told Zoya the truth with an insecutiry of losing her, fearing her hatred for him but she loved him truly so it didnt matter to her. Now Lets see will Asad still love her when he finds out that Gaffur is her abbu. If he truly loves her then it should not matter him.

Thank you so much
Glad you liked it
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PS: In my story Gazia is going to pay for thier sins thru Hiba. The person for which they were doing all these years will disown them when tiime arrives. Thats the greatest punishment when your offsrping disowns you.
Edited by anura7281 - 11 years ago

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