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Posted: 11 years ago
di pls accept my apology... I know i disappointed u... but di pls don't hav any doubt on me... m ardent fan of qh n ksg... I luv him di, how can I miss his show... I know di I muddle it up... firstly di cricket fiasco lapse of my mind ... n di I seriously thought old banglow means dat bhangwalla banglow...di m quite obsessed with bhangwalla scene... I luv dat dialogue when asad say''' 'Agar aap itne badtameez ho, toh mujhe aap itne ache kyun lagte ho?'App mein itne khashish kyun hai?Kyun mere tanhai mein khalaq dalte hai aap? Kyun mere andere mein roshni banke aate hain aap''' ... I just luv dis dialogue... pls di its a humble req pls use dis dialogue smewhere in ur ff... di... sorry..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update!! Dilshaad 's right move!!! Dilshaad bond 🤣 Zoya bond ki phuppi jo hai!!! 😉 Anwar Zeenath on d way!! I wanted to ask this question bt like Asad I forget it!!! Where is d envelope which Zoya gave Asad to read??? Old memories !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Lovely update!! Dilshaad 's right move!!! Dilshaad bond 🤣 Zoya bond ki phuppi jo hai!!! 😉 Anwar Zeenath on d way!! I wanted to ask this question bt like Asad I forget it!!! Where is d envelope which Zoya gave Asad to read??? Old memories !!!


Envelope is missing Asad will get it at the right time only
Be patient.

ZeeWar will be in India only and will have enough screen space also.
Yup What they showed in the show was crap, A mother of 2 chidren coudnt find out tha
Tanveer was pregnant. And Tanveer never showed any symptoms of preggy Bullshit.
We are were are and will be duped again and again with Tannu and her preggy track!
Hence in my story I thought to give it logic!! i was pissed off with the show.

Bond Phuppi and Bond Zoya Both rock!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Level 1: A Railway Station:Zoya left KV bcuz of Asad 's anger for going to Cricket match!! Level 2: An old Bunglow: Akram fiasco !! where zoya first tym called asad Level 3: A village Level :Mangalpur!! 4: A prison:Handcuffed in jail!! Level 5 : A dense jungle: Zoya burried alive!!! Level 6: An office: searching for Dilshaad 's shooter!! Level 7: An Accident: bus accident after bang wala night nd dat billi 's entry!!! why didn't dat billi died in dat accident!!!????
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Envelope is missing Asad will get it at the right time only
Be patient.

ZeeWar will be in India only and will have enough screen space also.
Yup What they showed in the show was crap, A mother of 2 chidren coudnt find out tha
Tanveer was pregnant. And Tanveer never showed any symptoms of preggy Bullshit.
We are were are and will be duped again and again with Tannu and her preggy track!
Hence in my story I thought to give it logic!! i was pissed off with the show.

Bond Phuppi and Bond Zoya Both rock!
Glad you liked it
Continue reading.



Aha Asad & I should wait for right time for d envelope!!! I m proud of Dilshaad & You too di Zoya & her mind!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
so ayaan did not reach asad to tell him
and I guess tanu pick up the message at KV
dilshad found the truth of tanveer so nice
wow asya video game dont think about it
1:when he saved her the goons when she left for new york at the RS.
2:is from akram at the bungalow
3,4,5 is mangalpur
6 the office cant remember
7 is the bus crash
hope I am right
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
so ayaan did not reach asad to tell him
and I guess tanu pick up the message at KV
dilshad found the truth of tanveer so nice
wow asya video game dont think about it
1:when he saved her the goons when she left for new york at the RS.
2:is from akram at the bungalow
3,4,5 is mangalpur
6 the office cant remember
7 is the bus crash
hope I am right
continue soon


Glad you liked it
Contiue reading
Your guesses are correct

Ayan didnt reach Asad and Tannu picked the phone, She will use it as the time comes but as usual will fall falt on her face. Dilshad will find the truth
Yup Asya video game! Zoya will program more like cooking games, cricket quiz, the OCD house etc. Small spoilers! Enjoy




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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow... Nice update... Loved it...
Pls continue soon...
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Precap:
Zoya was playing with the kids in a computer game. Kids say that Zoya is very intelligent and presses her to make a game for kids. Zoya gives it a thought and concludes not a bad idea.Anwar and Zeenat reach Anshumans house and meet Zoya. Tanveers medical check up couries reaches Asad house and she manages to take it away before it lands in some one else hands. Nikhat gets frequent calls from Imran but she disconnects it. Ayan comes to visit zoya and in between talks tell her how his bhaijaan was missing her. Zoya gets emotional hearing about Asad. Zoya finally puts he brain into action. She programmes ASYA GAME.

Anshumans House, Delhi
Zoya was shifted to Anshumans house and everbody ther welcome her warm heartedly and they love Zoya very much. She was made to settle well, in the meantime Zeenat and Anwar too arrive. The whole family had a chit chat moment and Zoya was left with Zeenat and Anwar to have some private time and the trio had a heart to heart talk and some emotional and crying scenes. Zeenat hugged Zoya and kissed her forehead too. Zoya smiled and kissed Zeenat too for giving such a good news.

Flashback: Zoya before leaving New York had a verbal spat with Zeenat since she was pressing her for a nikah. Zoya retorted and said "I will not do any nikaah since you are also not listening to me." Zeenat asked " Akhir chahti kya ho tum zoya?" Zoya again said, " Mein yeh chahthi hoon ab aap apne aur jiju ke baare mein sochiye. Aur muje apne haal pe chod dijiye." Zeenat angrily said. " Yeh kya tareeka hai baat karne ka Zoya?" Ab tum hume sikhaogi ki hume kya karna hai? Zoya turned her head away and twisted her mouth too. Zeenat knew that Zoya was stubborn but she could not forget about her responsibility towards Zoya too. Zeenat asked calmly "Bacha sun meri baat" Zoya did not budge. Zeenat knew she has to bend this time. " Okay Zoya agar mein tumhari baat manoogi to tum nikah ke liye razi hojaaogi? Zoya quickly changed her expressions and her eyes twinkled. "But meri ek aur shart hai. Ladka muje pasand ana chahiye varna nai." Zeenat nodded and said Bhala koi majal hain meri ki mein tumhare nikah kisse aire gaire nattu khaire se kardoon."
Of course meri princess ke liye koi Prince Charming hi hoga. Ab Akram wali galti nai karoongi." Zeenat quickly said "Kal tumhe dekhne ke liye koi araha hai, to tayyar rahna." Zoya saw herself trapped in her own words.She didnt want a nikah now and Zeenat very cleverly made her agree to her terms too. Zoya didnt think much and she ran away.

Present: Zeenat and Zoya were lost in their past moment and Anwar cleared his throat. "Are bhai men bhi yahi hoon, agar tum behno ki rona dhona hogaya hai tho hum khana khane chale muje bohot bhook lagi hai. special stuffed baigan banaya mere liye aur vo bhi punjabi style mein..Zeenat rolled her eyes. "Ap Phir shuru hogaye Baigan Baigan" Anwar went out asking them to join. Zeenat told Zoya "Lagta hai muje Baigan aur Lauki ban karna padega apne pregnancy ke bahane!" Zoya laughed.

Asad House: Bhopal
The door bell rang and Najma went and opened it was courier for Tanveer.Najma signed and received it and turned and found Tanveer behind her. Najma said "Vo tanveer tumhara courier" She gave it and went to her room. Tanveer quickly glanced at the courier and found the hospital logo in it. She hurriedly went to her room and opened the courier and put some ink over the name of the patient so it smudges nicely and it not seen. Then she kept it in her drawer. She went downstairs while Dilshad was waiting for her to come to shower her with her questions. Asad hadnt come yet. Dilshad spoke in "Tannu, tum pareshan lag rahi ho, kya baat hai?" Tanveer replied, " Kuch nahi khala". Muje urgently bahar jana hai to main jaon. Vo Doctor ke saath appointment aaj meri aankh ki patti khulegi." Dilshad thought let her go and come and then she will ask about it and hence she nodded. Tanveer lens will be delievered today and hence she needed to pick it. But she was running out of money and Imran was not picking her calls. So she thought she go to her Jammy and ask for some money.

Ayans Residence:
Nikhat was getting calls from Imran again and again and she was disconnecting it and finally swtiched off her mobile. She went to Humera with a determined face. "Humera chao abhi Asad Bhaijaan ke office par jate hai, maine phone karke pooch liya hai, bhaijaan vapis agaye hain." Humera said "Chaliye Mein bas abhi ayi".

Asads Office
Asad was surpised to see Tanveer in his office. Tanveer made a lame excuse that her atm card has developed some problem and hence she was not able to withdraw money from her account and she needed some money urgently. Asad asked her to sit and he went out to Prasad. Nikhat and Humera too reached his office and entered his cabin. Tanveer was sitting already and they took seats on the couch beside. Tanveer was keeping her hands on her face partly and so Humera couldnt see her. Asad returned with some money and gave to tanveer and she said Thank you and got up and turned to leave. It was only then humera saw her face. She couldnt foget her face at all as it was becoz of her frightening looks that she fainted in the mall. Now humera was hell confused why Tanveer was with Asad. Asad hadnt noticed them till now but as Tanveer left he noticed them and greeted them and hugged them. Asad asked "Achanak " Koi problem to nahi, Ayan teek hai na?" Asad queried. Nikhat replied that Ayan has joined Rashids business and now in Delhi for his first project. Asad was happy for him. And said" finally he thought to be setlle in his life otherwise he is always behind all the girls in Bhopal." Humeras face fell on that comment. Nikhat started hesistatingly. "Vo Bhaijaan baat aise hain ki mein yeh nikah nahi karna chahthi" Asad said "Kya". Nikhat calmly briefed about the happenings and Asad offered to help them with a private detective secretly. Both of them thanked him and Asad offered that he will drop them at their house and they quietly agreed. On the way to home Asad pondered "Ayan ne itna bada kadam utaya aur muje bola bhi nahi" "Ab mein gair bangaya hoon kya?" He took his mobile and listened to all voice calls and heard Ayan too. Asad smiled that Ayan has not forgotten him. He thought of calling him when he reaches home.

Anshumans House
After lunch everybody had retired. Anwar and Zeenat were having jetlag and hence they retired to their room. Zoya was playing with Anshumans kids in computer. The kids were very impressed with Zoyas gaming skills, how she dodged, ducked the attacks and how she won. The kids were all over Zoya and asked "Didi Aap to papa ke saath kaam karthe hona? Zoya replied "Haan". Kids again" Toh Didi aap hamare liye kuch acha game kyun hai design karti?" Zoya was surprised at the sudden question. She said " mein socchongi not a bad idea. After all Zoya Farooki can do anything in this world". Anshuman interuppted in between "didi ko thank mat karo and invited Ayan inside. Zoya seeing Ayan shouted 'Rabert" Anshuman again made wierd faces and said "Rabert to hindi films mein villain ka naam hota hai aur Mona uski assistant hai!" And he left them.

Ayan was like where to start what to start and finally asked "Kaise ho Mona?" Zoya replied." Ab bilkul teek hoon and jaise bhi hoon tumhare samne hoon, Khud dekhlo" She also thanked Ayan for saving her life. Ayan said "there is no need for a thank you as between friends there is no thank you. Salman Khan had said in Maine Pyar Kiya". He added. Zoya just shouted "Awe Sallu Bhai! "Ayan just closed his ears and finally removed when he saw Zoya calm. Zoya then briefed about how she is the biggest fan of Salman while Ayan also justifed himself with his reasons too. They spent together sometime and finally Ayan said good bye to her. Before Ayan went out he mouthed that "Koi hai jo apko bohot miss kar raha hai aur apki diye huye Lion Mask ko ghoorte aur sarhaate rehte hain." And he went away. Zoya couldnt beleive her eyes that Asad is missing her. Zoya then thought if he was missing her then why didnt he act as per her instructions written in her letter. Didnt he read it? She quickly checked her bank account through her lappy. She was neither disappointed nor happy. And began to think about the past moments right from her first meet with Asad till the date she left. She saw that Asad avoided her and gave Tanveer some importance. But she brushed it off as she was his childhood friend and its normal for them to behave like that and its just recently that he has met her. Sleep took her over and she closed her eyes.

Anshumans house the next day:
Zoya was again pressed by Anshumans kids to progam a video game for kids and Zoya was happy too. She was sitting with everyone on the breakfast table and finally she screamed "MILGAYA" And everybody "Kya Milgaya" Zoya said "IDEA ". Again eveybody "Kya idea" Zoya " Video game ka idea" Anshman said that she needs proper rest now but Zoya couldnt wait so she sais she will work from home and finally Anshuman had to agree. Zoya went to her room and was sitting the whole day with her lappy and finally she gives her final touch to her video game for kids. AsYa game. She was ready with software programming and forwarded it to her department for further proceesing.

Precap: Asad gets the pregnancy reports of Tanveer by mistake and questions Dilshad about this that who is pregnant in their house .Tanveer covers herself saying that its not hers Dishad surprised as Tanveer turned tables on Zoya. Even Asad was bewildered at her statements. Dilshad slaps Tanveer and her lens falls off. Everybody was shocked by seeing he eyes. Tanveer finally shown the door by Asad for her characterless character. Tanveer cries and whines and says she was duped. Dilshad pities and allows her to stay. Asad buys a book from a store and gets a CD free with it.
Edited by anura7281 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramlath

Wow... Nice update... Loved it...
Pls continue soon...


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