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Precap: Asad gets the pregnancy reports of Tanveer by mistake and questions Dilshad about this that who is pregnant in their house .Tanveer covers herself saying that its not hers Dishad surprised as Tanveer turned tables on Zoya. Even Asad was bewildered at her statements. Dilshad slaps Tanveer and her lens falls off. Everybody was shocked by seeing he eyes. Tanveer finally shown the door by Asad for her characterless character. Tanveer cries and whines and says she was duped. Dilshad pities and allows her to stay. Asad buys a book from a store and gets a CD free with it.

PART 12

Asad House

Asad had been calling Ayan for the past 24 hours but couldnt get to talk to him. So he tried again this time and call was responded. Ayan was happy that Asad had called. Asad asked Ayan " Kya mein itna gair hochuka hoon ki tumne apne faisle mein bhi nuje shamil nahi kiya?" Ayan replied " Apko lagta hain mein aisa karunga?" Asad. " To kyun nahi kahan ki tum Dilli ja rahe ho vo bhi business ke liye?" Ayan, "Meine call liya tha bhaijaan lekin apka voicemail mein hi ja raha tha" Asad " Oh haan mein bohot busy tha do din se,lekin ab free hoon batao." Ayan started to hesistate" Vo bhaijaan meine ek aur baat ke liye bhi call kiya tha, meine Zoya ko dekha vo yahan Dilli mein hain aur job bhi kar rahi hai pichle ek mahine se" Ayan abruptly stopped sensing silence from the other side. Asad was shocked that Zoya was in Delhi and he couldnt find out. Ayan again poked in "Bhaijaan aap hai kya, Bhaijaan? " Asad finally spoke in and asked how is she. Ayan then detailed how he saved her a fire accident and now that her Appi and Jiju have also come here etc. Asad was happy to know that Zoya was safe and he also thanked Ayan. Ayan again asked " You miss her a lot bhaijaan, ek baar aakar usse mile to sahi, meine land line par bhi call kiya tha, aur inform kardiya tha Dilshad bi ko, Apko bataya nahi unhone?" Asad said no "Ghar pe yeh baat kissi ko bhi pata nahi hai varna muje zaroor batate." Ayan said now he has some work pending and he will call up again and hung. Asad was shocked that Ammi knew about this and did not tell him. He thought to ask about this to his Ammi. When he went to his Ammis room upstairs she was not there. Najma came and told Asad that she had gone to Dargah for praying. Asad thought may be for Zoya. In the meanwhile Asad wanted to ask Tanveer about whether the money was enough for her purchase and whether she wanted anything else also. Whether her card was okay now. So he went to her room. He knocked on the door but getting no repsonse he was worried and opened the door calling Tannu. Tanveer was in bathroom having the best of puking time. So she couldnt actually come out and did not reply Asad also thinking he may go if he didnt get any reply. Tanveer in order to hide her puking voices opened the tap and the shower at full speed. Asad hearing that thinking she was in her bathroom turned and was going to go that the window opened up and a gush of cool breeze came in. All the curtains started flying and window started rattling too. Asad due to his OCD went to close the window and bolted it. Some papers were strewn down on the ground as wind blew. Asad picked up the papers was about to keep it in the bed that something caught his eye. He again carefully read the report and saw words like foetal position, placenta status and some other things too and in the end A statement. Intra Uterine Gestation... Primi ... .. gestation period 3 weeks etc. Asad was bewildered by looking it and was wondering who was pregnant in the house and thought to ask his ammi. Probably she might know about it. He took the reports with her and went downstairs. By the time Dilshad had returned from dargah and was entering the house. Asad called her.Dilshad stopped in her tracks.

Asad showed the pregnancy reports to his ammi and said he got it from Tanveer room but the name on the report is not visible due to ink smudging. Dilshad saw her conclusions coming true. Before she could say anything Asad again continued Ammi Kahin Najma to nahi. Dilshad became furious and shouted " Asad kya keh raho ho kuch soch samaj ke bolo Najma meri beti hai, she wont do anything like this. Ab tumhe meri parvarish par bhi shakh hai?" Asad lowered his eyes in shame and continued Nai ammi mein to bas yeh pooch ne ki koshish kar raha tha ki iss ghar mein koun pregnant hai." Hearing the noises Najma came out. Dilshad roared "Tanveer neeche aao abhi". Hearing Dilshads voice Tanveer was trembling and thought "ab kya koga, kya kiya hai meine?" Tanveer came down and stood before Dilshad " Ji khala boliye kisliye bulaya apne mujko?" Dilshad turned to Asad and said Yeh pregrancy reports Tanveer ke kamre se mili hai to Tanveer ke hi honge na? simple baat hai Asad" Asad was again taken aback, "Ammi Tanveer Pregnant hai?" Dilshad said "Yes" Tanveer was also shocked at her statement and thought to immediately cover up and interrupted in between. " Jammy yeh reports mere nahi hai, vo kya hai na Mein aur Zoya jab pichle baar hospital gaye the tho zoya kuch tests karvaya tha, meine dekha tha use blood samples dete hue, to shayad yeh zoya ke hosakthe hai" She stopped to see Asads reaction. Asad eyes were filled with anger and he was super angry. He barked "Tannu yeh report zoya ke nahin hosakthe, bak was mat karo" Najma poked in lekin courier tho Tannu ke naam se aya tha Agar Zoya ke hai tho uske naam se ata." Dilshad was waiting to see to which extent Tanveer goes to lie to save herself. Tanveer replied "Are vo meine hi doctor se kahan tha ki hum saath mein hai issliye reports mere addrss pe hi courier karde. Aur aap log yakeen nahi karenge Kal Dilli se call bhi aya tha ki zoya hospital mein hain. To isse to yehi sabit hosaktha she might have had some complication yah phir abortion haina." Tanveer didnt complete the sentence she felt a hand on cheek so hard that she was almost knocked down. She opened her eyes to see Dilshad fuming. Asad meantime registered that Ayan had spoken to Tanveer instead of Dilshad " Tanveer retorted " Galti zoya kare aur thapad muje pade, yeh na insaafi hai, zoya iss baat ko chupana chahti issliye Dilli bhaag gayi." Asad roared "Tannu apni zabaan sambhal lo Zoya Dilli mein hai yeh baat muje pata hai Dilshad also joined Muje bhi pata hai, lekin vo wahan work permit par ayi hai.Samji" Asad and Dilshad looked at each other and were giving looks like Ammi apko pata tha aur muje nahi baya wala" Dilshad " Asad ko pata tha Zoya Dilli mein hai wala. Tanveer saw all her plans in vain. She was holding half of her face with her hand and due to crying Tanveers lens had also come out and she was unaware of it due to all the commotion. Najma had her hand kept on her O shaped mouth and was rolling her eyes in disgust. Dilshad continued "Tannu tumhe mein bohot din se notice kar rahi thi, tumhara vo kapde tight hone ki baat karna, pineapple juice ko girana phir allergy ka jhoot bolna, phir vo sanitary napkin ka mamla, phir yeh bottles, she walked upto kitchen counter and took two bottles, one pickles and on tamraind, yeh muje tumhare kamre ke drawer se mila hai, phir yeh dawai yaan, she placed the folic acid and other medicines on the table. phir tumhare cupboard mein vo oversized lingeries. Aur yeh papers tumhara first positive test ka report,Tumne isse apna hatana bhool gayi shayad yeh tumhara naam hai Tanveer Moin Beg yah phir ab yeh kahogi ki yeh mera nahi hai" Tanveer by the time removed her hands from the face and stated sobbing loudly fidegting her dupatta. By the time Najma screamed seeing her. Everybody looked towards Najma and she pointed towards Tanveer and everybody turned to her. Tanveer was looking like a witch indeed with her one stone eye. They all were shocked and everybody in unison shouted "Tumhara ek aank pattar ka hai!" Tanveer again saw another of her secret out. She was lost totally lost in this game. She immediately thought of some sympathy seeking game and started.

"Main maanti hoon ki maine jhoot bola hai, par issliye kyunki muje apne jaan ka daar hai, mera shauhar ne meri ek aank phod di aur ab vo mere jaan ke peeche pada hai, issliye meine Jammy yahan rehna ka faisla kiya. Mein jaanto hoon ki Jammy muje kabhi kuch hone nahi denge. Aur meri hifazat karenge. Kal vo paisa meine apse manga tha vo mera shouhar ko dene ke liye tha, mein uske account mein har mahina paisa dal thi hoon thaki vo muje pareshadn nahi kare." Tanveer stopped to see everybodys reaction, they were disinterested in her fake story and she needed to emphasie more to get sympathy. She was crying and sobbing unlimitedly and was again and again pleading for sympathy. She added that her husband used to make her subject to domestic violence and she had ran away from him fearing for her life. Asad came up and took Tanveer by her upper arm. She thought he was going to give in and fallen for her fake story telling and thought that he was going to take her to her room But to her surprise she was dragged towards the door and shown her exit. He asked Najma to pack her things immediately and give it to her and he doesnt want her anymore in his house.

Tanveer was bewildered at his reaction. She called "Jammy, aap muje ghar se nikal rahe ho mera itni vinti ki baad bhi aap chahte hai ki mera shouhar muje maar dale. Muje aapse yeh ummed nahi thi" Asad just spat out. "Aur muje bhi tumse yeh ummed nahi thi, Aur Jhoot aur Dhoke se muje sakth nafrat hai specially uss jhoot se jo kissi doosre ki zindgai kharab kare.Issilye aise jhoote aur dhokebazz logon ke liye mera ghar mein koi jagah nai hai. samji tum. Tumhara behtari issmi yeh ki tum yahan se chali jao. Aur ek aur baat agar tumne yeh qubool karliya hota ki yeh report tumhara hai to shayad mein yeh kadam nahi utatha par Zoya ko tume nishana banake apni galati chupane ke liye mein tumne kabhi maaf nahi karunga. Iska matlab to yahi tha ki tum Zoya ko badnaam karna chahthi thi. Vo bhala ho ki Ayan ka call muje aya varna mein bhi tumharre iss ghatiya chaal mein aajata. Chali jao yaha se aur hamari zindagi se bhi bohot door" Dilshad was feeling pity for Tanveer. She called Asad and softly spoke to him. "Dekho Asad jo Tannu ne kiya vo mafi ke layak nahi hai par vo pet se hai aur aisi halat main hum usse iss tarah se aadhi raat ko sadak par nahi chod sakthe. Usse thode din yahan rehne do phir mein kuch intezaam kardungi uska. Tab tak thoda sabar karo Asad, Tannu ki nahi uski marhoom ammi ke bare mein socho, Jab bachpan mein mein tumhe samay nahi de pati thi apne kaam ke vajah se, vo Tannu ki ammi hi thi jisne tumhe sambhala, kitne din tumne Khala ki haat ka khana khaya hai, Uski ammi ek bohot hi bhali aurat thi Asad, usska khayal karke please isse yahan rehdo , varna mein usse kya mooh dikhaungi upar jakar." Asad said " Jaisi apki marzi Ammi, par kuch dino aap kuch intezam kardijiye, par yeh yahan hamesha nahi reh sakti. isse jana hi hoga." Dilshad said "Tum fikr mat karo Asad, mein tannu ki koi arrangement kardungi zyaada din yahan nahi rehegi, ab tum kamre jao bohot thak gaye hoge na." Asad went inside and banged the door. Dilshad closed her ears and asked Najma to attend Tanveer. Najma said that she had some pending work and studies and stomped off to her room. Dilshad had to do the honors. Tanveer was again sobbing, Dilshad said "Yeh rona band karo kyunki mein iss rone dhone mein nahi ane wali, tum maa banne wali ho aur phir tumhari ammi ne meri bohot maddat ki hai mere bure dino mein, issliye kuch din aur bas." Ab uto aur kamre jaon and aram karo. Apni halat thoda durust karo. Aur haan hamare beech aakar khana khane ki and gul milne ki koshish mat karna. Tumhara khana sab tumhare kamre mil jayega, samji. Kyunki mein nahi chahthi ki Najma and Asad par tumhara saya bhi pade." Yaad rakhna yeh baat hamesha, tumhari ammi ache karmo ne tum iss ghar mein rok ke rakha hai, varna tum kabki bahar hoti." Saying this Dilshad went to kitchen for preparing the dinner. It was like a calm after the storm. The house was unusually silent today, nobody was interested to talk or speak and Zoya was missed as she might have broken into her impromptu shayari to break this silence. They were waiting for the cock to crow marking the dawn. Nobody had a good sleep in the night and didnt have enough food also. Everybody ate half stomach only and that too unwillingly.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yapee iam 1st
Thank you so much for this update😛


Anu darling,
I completed 2 updates,
Its simply superb.
I love zoya's game ASYA.
I am waiting for the next update.
And where is zoya's letter for Asad gone.
Pls clear it.
And thanks for the pm😃
Edited by aseelashah - 11 years ago
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PART 13
Asad was the most hurt. He thought of times how he blamed Zoya for every time when she created a havoc. He was feeling guilty more after his New York visit too. He had thouroughly misjudged a poor and innnocent soul. He badly wanted to ask about her health now. He thought he will go to Delhi and give her a surpise too. But will ask his ammi about why she hid the matter and didnt tell him With that thoughts he just slept tossing and turning on his bed.

Dilshad was also no less in turmoil, the way Tanveer turned tables on Zoya, she couldnt imagine if she didnt know the truth, may they all would have fallen in her trap. Sleep was also far away from her. She was rewinding the happneings and thought how Asad came to know about Zoyas whereabouts and how Tanveer came to Know that Zoya is in Delhi. She thought she will ask Asad in the morning. And with that she too tried to sleep by closing her eyes.

Najma was also not feeling too good. She missed Zoya very much today and wished she should have been here today to witness all the happenings. Najma pondered Zoya in Delhi that too on a work permit? She thought to ask her ammi and bhaijaan in the morning as they both know the matter and they hid it from her. She too closed her eyes.

New Delhi

Zoya had created her game and was put to test and it was successfully approved. Zoya told Anshuman that first they will release this CD for kids in metros only and will offer free with the best selling books in B and C class cities. Anshuman had agreed for it. And the first set of CDs were ready for their dispatch. Zoya was immselnly happy. She created this game for 2 purposes one for kids and the other one, she wanted to test Asads reaction to this. So she thought of couriering one sample CD to Asad as gift from her.

Ayan and Zoya decided to go for a Salman movie together and hence they reached Ambience Mall, Gurgaon. Ayan and Zoya entere the lift and lift suddenly jerked. Zoya immediately pressed for the alarm button for help. And there wa a lift announcement made immediately that there was a power failure and some issue in the generator also and not to panic. And the issue will be resolved as soon as possible. Ayan and Zoya was finding it too difficult with some other people also in the lift. Zoya being Zoya couldnt stay silent. She told Ayan "Why dont we start a game" Ayan replied " Like" Zoya anyway we have to still prove who is the biggest fan of Salman Khan and anyway we have come to watch his movie so why not A SALMAN movie name game?" Ayan immediately agreed and asked "What are the rules?" Zoya said "rules are so simple. we have to just name a salman movie and the other person will also say, it will be instant no thinking and the person who stops will fail and the other wins. so simple" Ayan agreed and started.

A - Pattar ke phool Z - Chand ka tukda A - Dabanng Z - Maine Pyar Kiya A - Pyar ki tho Darna kya
Z - Hello brother A - Chal mere bhai Z - Wanted A - Kahin pyar na hojaye Z - kuch kuch hota hai

and they continued, neither Ayan nor Zoya was ready to lose and the other people in the lift were amused by this. Everybody were turning their heads from right to left then left to right alternatively to see who is failing and by the time lift started again. Ayan and Zoya went for the movie.

Asad House Bhopal
Everybody were seated in the breakfast table except Tanveer. Dilshad in order to avoid confusion said "meine Tanveer ko uski kamre mein hi breakfast de diya hai, i have already told her she will not mingle with us and will stay here till I make another arrangement for her." Najma added, "Achan hua ammi varan subah subah uska chehra dekhna padtha". Asad also added "Vohi teek hai varna mein apne gusse pe kaboo nahi rakh paoonga, vo mujse jitna door rahe utna hi acha hai." Dilshad poked in "Vaise Asad tumhe kaise pata chala ki Zoya Dilli mein hain,? mainto nahi bataya" Asad retorted back "Ammi apko pata tha ki zoya dilli mein hai aur apne nahin bataya kyun?" Seeing Najma also ' Aap dono ko pata tha aur muje nahi vo kyun? Everybody started laughing that now this is not at all a secret as everybody knew Zoya is in Delhi. Dilshad paused, "vaise tanveer ko pata chal ki Zoya dilli mein hain.? " Asad said about Ayan call and call was attended by Tanveer. Dilshad said" Chalo ab sabko pata hai zoya kahan hai to kyun na hum usse call kare aur uski tabiyat ke barein mein pooche?" Najma squealed "Acha Idea" Asad immediately excused himself for office and said nothing in particular. Dilshad noticed the immediate silent mode of Asad when Zoyas talk came in between. She just smiled and prayed that they soon realise thier feelings for each other.

Tanveers room:
Tanveer dialled Razias number and told that she needed more money she had the copy of the chip recording . Razia said she cannot come out as the wedding preparations are going on. Hence she asked her to come to her house. Tanveer blackmailed her by saying if Razia is thinking of double crossing her then it would not be good for her also. Tanveer also said that she was planted in Asad house by her for her own benefit and now that when she needs Razia help she has to agree for it. Razia said she will not double cross her and asks to keep trust in her.

Asads office:

Asad was again anf again wondering why zoya hadnt called him if she came back to India. He really was in doubts now that why zoya came back and also didnt not try to contact him. Has she really forgotten him? Asad was now doubting the Koi tho hai in Zoyas letter. What if its not him? Will he be able to bear it? Bear Zoya with someone else? Can this happen? His thoughts were interrupted by mobiles ring. He attended it was Dilshad, Dilshad informed Asad that she has madde arrangements in an orphanage for Tanveer and told him to bring a book on pregnancy to give to Tanveer. Asad didnt agrue since tanveer was leaving and said "ji ammi." He hung.

Evening at a book shop:

Asad went into a book shop in a mall and was searching for pregnancy section. The staff came and offered help to him. He said what he wanted and staff immediately gave a book on pregnancy. He said thank you and moved to te counter for payment. The book was neatly packed as per Asads request. After making payment the shopkeeper handed over a CD pack also. Asad said "I didnt buy it" Shopkeeper its given free with every book in this shop, its a newly released CD of kids game" Asad replied "ji thank you par muje iski zaroorat nahi hai kyunki mera ghar mein koi bahche nahi hain." And he gave it back. Shopkeeper said "Sir yeh toh free hai ap lejayiyeh, kissi ko gift mein de dena." Asad took the CD also and drove back to home.

I gave two updates becoz I really wanted to take the story further becoz even I was bored to such an extent by dragging the tracks now. I know many are waiting for Asad and Zoya milan and I promise that they will meet after 4-5 updates.

Precap: Humera sees Tanveer with Razia. Ayan sees the old photo in Zoyas hand and tell her that he has seen the same photo somewhere. Asad gives the CD to Najma. Dilshad arranges for Tanveers departure and tells her to live a life of dignity and stop fooling others. Asad recevies a courier and opens to find the same CD he had got from the shop and wonders who had sent it and sees MSS pvt ltd name on the courier packet. Dilshad, Najma do a skype vidoe call with Zoya and Asad comes to join them.

Edited by anura7281 - 11 years ago
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Yuppeee
I am first here also
thanks Anu for this double update.
I am impatiently waiting for ASYA milan
This was a nice update.
Pls update soon😃
Edited by aseelashah - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aseelashah

Yapee iam 1st
Thank you so much for this update😛


Anu darling,
I completed 2 updates,
Its simply superb.
I love zoya's game ASYA.
I am waiting for the next update.
And where is zoya's letter for Asad gone.
Pls clear it.
And thanks for the pm😃


Dont worry Asad will get the letter at the right time only till then it will be under the cupboard😉
More asya games to come

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Originally posted by: aseelashah


Yuppeee
I am first here also
thanks Anu for this double update.
I am impatiently waiting for ASYA milan
This was a nice update.
Pls update soon😃


Glad you liked it
Even I am also waiting for AsYa milan but not happnening right now.😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
RES

UNRES

WOOHOO...

DOUBLE DAMAKA...⭐️

I LOVED IT...😛

BUT I BADLY WANT ASYA MILAN...😳

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...😃

THANK U SO MUCH FOR THE PM...😊

PLS CONTINUE SOON...😕


Edited by aksasya - 11 years ago
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Part 12
Good update! 😃

Tanveer's pregnancy truth out! 👏
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It was awesome di
Thanks for pm
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Double update!! Tanveer!!!! got what she deserved!!! Rabert-Mona ki Salman deewangi!!! Asad gave dat CD to Najma!! *facepalm * Zoya courier cd to him!!!! Thanks 4 pm

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