Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24) - Page 50

Its really very beautiful romantic and superb update

loved d update...loved d way how khushi was feelinf shy 2 ans buaji abt der looonnng nap...hehe juz wish dey xpress der feelings wid each other...will b waiting 4 d next update..

Commenting after a while! I still haven't read the last update too but couldn't resist reading this and no regrets what so ever! 😃 Anyway there is no point of telling what a fabulous writer you are! This update was just fantabulous, love, need, care, lust everything was portrayed in a very convincing manner that at the end of the update it felt like Arhi are real couple who are trying to cope up with the complications life presents.

Thier love making scene was written explicitly well, not too vulgar but not too naive as well, all the emotions were nicely conveyed. Arnav's plea to let him love her followed by Khushi's submissionn,even though Khushi wwasn't aware of the activities that would follow the way she placed her utmost trust on Arnav was such a beautiful scene. In my opinion that was such a lovely scene, it marked a beginning of a beautiful journey between the couple. Post love making scenes you have just penned down splendidly! Khushi's thoughts and blushing while reminiscing what transpired between them it was just adorable!

And then come the interrogation session by bua! She was hell bent on making Khushi flustered and poor sole was trying to figure out a convincing answer. Arnav answering with ease dodging any further queries, Khushi's misery was a treat to read 😃 and now coming to the most important part, Arnav has already realized he is feeling a lot more than he wants towards his lovable wife, now his possessiveness has increased drastically I'm sure no longer he won't be able to resist the love besotted on him by his innocent wife. Need to add Arnav questioning Khushi whether she regrets what they did still he has deep rooted insecurities within him but as I said earlier he will be tangled in the cobweb of love pretty soon 😊 afterwards him teasing his naive wife was so sweet! Hopefully their life will remain blissful forever!

Btw this update made me forget all my worries on my impending exam coupled with work stress! So thank you very much for! 😃 please ignore typos(there must be a lot) typed from phone while at work 😊

Love the new arnav and khushi.. cannot wait for the next chapter and to see what their relation now beholds in the future :D awesome update

Wonderful chapter anony!!!
I loved how you wrote this beautiful love making scene!
U know m not very fond of love making scenes! I usually skip them when i find them getting too technical n explained as if its a chore! So m usually disinterested in these scenes!
How ever you simply made the whole thing looked so beautiful and desirable!
I guess soulful is the right word! It had so much of soul! That Nowhere i found myself skipping anything or even wanting to miss a word of the description!
The whole scene, his slowly taking a step towards a new begining, a step towards trusting her with whole of his heart, a step towards making her his in rvery sense of the word! her selfless surrender to him, her desire to give her everything to him and becoming his in every way possible is so perfectly written! You have captured every emotion from their desire, to their hesitation to their eagerness n finally their submission with utmost perfection!

You know i thgt the most difficult thing for arnav must be to get khushi out of that saree! Given how shy n naive she can be, i guess that would have been the biggest hurdle! But then he is ASR , n nothing is difficult fr him!

N i absolutely loved the evening after! Specially khushi's reaction! That was so cute n classic khushi!
Lets see where do things go from here!
Now as everything has started looking almost perfect in their lives, i hope nothing happens to disturb their new found happiness!!
Waiting for the next part!

Amazing updte...its worth the wait yaar...he was desperate for khushi...his pleading 'don't say no'...my god it killed me...and his happiness for khushi not being so naive to understand his words...and she is so naive when she said 'this too' it made me laugh...then his assurence to go with flow her acceptance...amazing love making scene...and buaji she is making khushi blush even more...and arnav's teasing khushi about dress all are superb...and arnav he is so possessive of khushi...really happy that the started their new happy life...
waiting for next prt...

Beautiful ... Lovely update...loved it

Woowww they finally marked each other as two souls one body
Happy for the duo

The name ARnav SIngh Raizada
Just pronouncing it looks to be powerful

very well written. finally they are one. the update was worth the wait. thanks.