Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24) - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing updte.finally they are one in all sense.hope arnavs insecure will be less now
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Posted: 11 years ago
For the readers since last week, Arnav and Khushi were in the rain, Arnav waiting for Khushi's answer. And since your writing is not predictable, I had no idea that what will happen then, whether they will continue exploring the new-found desire or someone or something will interrupt the moment.
Glad that you have continued with the lovely moment they shared while enjoying the rain. And their intimacy was narrated so beautifully.Her shyness,his eagerness and their desires,everything was perfect. When Khushi asked what are you doing ?,while Arnav undressing her,I thought she was reluctant, and it will make Arnav frustrated. Nothing like that happened, but why did she asked a question like that? Is it out of shyness or was she unaware of the exact meaning of physical relationship bw husband and wife?
What makes their relations perfect is Khushi's undeniable understanding and acceptance . She knows Arnav perfectly.
On the whole a beautiful chapter.
Edited by ramyarn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Anon,

The first part was enticing and blushy blushy one...But honestly I felt Khushi was little too nave..I mean she is 20 plus..and these days girls know at least technical details and Madhu Bua would naturally prepare her for what to expect on wedding night too...if she had been a typical mother to Khushi which she was and which she is..However Khushi's shyness was understandable and enjoyable...but she could have been little more mature about few things at least..after living with Arnav for all these months and after sharing those passionate kisses...it should have prepared her a bit...I really thought for a minute - my god! Will arnav have to explain each and everything to her now? But he managed beautiful..bloody rascal!

Enjoyed Buaji's confusion over Khushi's red face and exhausted ness...but she should have guessed...especially with rains and the ambience plus these are newly weds..just my thoughts

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Posted: 11 years ago
I really loved the way you played with words in this chapters to describe intimacy, afterthoughts, lovely banter and Arnav's contradicting thoughts between mind and Heart and recently him heart has been ruling...like you very nicley put it

"He had thought that his wedding with Khushi was one such decision. Taken by brain. But the nagging feeling that his heart had fooled his mind into thinking that it had taken decision in this regard too like always, had been rearing its head these days. Because with Khushi in question, his planning, plotting and outcomes everything took a back seat. She was like an addiction his heart refused to kick off."

Loved the way Khushi questions, blurts and than comfort her husband with all her heart before their love making.

Arnav describing his wife's beauty as God's masterpiece and he may start believe in him just for this reason. And what more his possessive brain are the feeling emerging from heart resting the case on the facts that she does not regret their physical intimacy and so she was his Arnav Singh Raizada's for this life and others.

Amazing update.

P.S. You can smirk and shrug Arnav style for the obvious achievement of this update. 😉
Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved it continue soon thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally!! this chap was worth wait...
Khushi...i love her a bit more than arnav and the credit goes to u ofcrse she is naive, innocent and shy sometimes but she is bold, strong, zealous and devoted.
Arnavv is such a flirt sometimes, hope he realizes soon that he is in LOVE..
Waiting for further chapters


Thank u so mucchh for this chapter😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was so...I dont know...may b I need to read It again...
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Posted: 11 years ago
She wants to be his... He only wants to make her his..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great chapter...so finally he has made khushi his...now waiting for his fathers past...thanks once again
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its amazingly written..u write their intimacy very beautifull..i think nw they should knw abt their feeling n start to talk freely to each other

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