Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24) - Page 52

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madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update!!

felt its short, after waiting so long😕

hope next update will be soon...

Didnt see any heartfelt sharing between Arhi.. i am sure u u planned something superb for the future...

Like the Khushi's POV.

Bechari Khushi had a tought time with Buaji and drank the tea according to her which is like Kadha.😆

eagerly looking forward!!

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crazygurl

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Posted: 11 years ago

i was like waiting for this chapter for ages...n there u updated n did perfect justice to it,...soo beautifully described...am still reading n re reading ...soo niceee...

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely update..

very well drafted..First he makes khushi as his wife..

Now after they consummated their marriage..

He marked khushi as his for eternity..

Loved it the way u write khushi's shyness..

And all the scenes..beautiful...

Some scenes were damn funny..

Like ''buaji ka poisonous kadha''.

Worth the wait update..

Edited by Chandni.. - 11 years ago

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srilathas

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Posted: 11 years ago

much awaited update...awesome one dear...so simple and so beautifully written...emotionally they were getting more closer than physically...u really played with words...gr8!!!!!

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shreyasonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful update...worth the wait!!!

Eeks arnav...possessive much???

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jiji

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Posted: 11 years ago

finally they are one in every sense

love them

so cute

thnx

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muskaansobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesmeee. ...I loved dis part...lovd d way u described dis part
M in lv wid ds storyyy...plz do update soon..eager to read more

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simplysappie

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Posted: 11 years ago

I'll write a comment sumtym later

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..juhi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Now that was seriosly something...i too am flustered...☺️

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js1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

I will read it later but am sooo excited. You have uncanny ability to draw you readers.

Thank you so much for the pm. I am guilty of not always commenting for that really sorry.

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