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What_the thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
:D
Was eagerly waiting for an update and was upset will all those little problems which were causing delays...
Very, very excited about this update!!!!

I am loving all the sizzling awareness...these two are definitely raising the heat in California...and burning up our laptop screens as well!
One scene...a few minutes in the moonlit bedroom...a shirt unbuttoning and a zipper coming undone..probably on the way to first base? ooohhh...but all that underlying passion and s*xual energy...delicious, toe-curling moments...amazing stuff ;)
Can't wait to see what will happen when they hit the ball out of the field and score the home run!!!

So they are soon going to move to the lovely manor with the interconnecting bedrooms...where Di might visit and pretenses have to be kept up...ohhh just imagine all the wonderful possibilities...sigh!

I am hoping that Arnav did not cause Khushi to lose her job (with noble intentions to let her get on with her PhD and all that)...she is going to hate his interference...

Will be waiting past midnight today for Part 2... :)
Edited by What_the - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
I have read the Ch . Will try to unres as soon as I can
Angels11 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kyon shark bhai waiting for choclating 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ye kya hui??

Part-1 !!

I literally felt like a chameleon, shifting colours from Pink- Pinker-Red!!! ☺️

By the end of This Shaadi, i definately am going to get all.. Bold and Red 😉

Manorama is a nice person in general and infact every worker here seems to respect Arnav genuinely. He's all nice and kind.


Infact seeing her savouring that chocolate and asking her to talk, Arnav was already playing with fire and desire. ;) but hey, Khushi is beginning to understand him, his different sides, his shades. He likes to take care of the ones he love and not the other way around. He likes to be the responsible one. Infact, this easy silence that settles between them, the companionship that comes is very peaceful. Arnav here, he is not holding up. Even with painkillers, he told her why it bothers him. It certainly would have been a trauma for a small kid.


So All set for Payal! I'm glad and happy for her. :) and Khushi is happy too.

But what happened next!! Never in my life i knew Buttons, Cuff links and Zips, could be this.. Um.. Torturous and well.. Seducing! :D

for minute, i seriously felt is Arnav here a Vampire? So much of self control!! If not for his broken hand, i might have concluded my theory as well. ;)

The contant wasn't much.
But, she just realised it from a single touch.
The Tight she got, the hard he felt,
What a dangerous Situation they dealt.
Each minute passing slow,
Khushi , here, unable to say 'No'.
Sccumbing to the challenge, both played with fire..
Wow, this Shaadi has some serious dose of Desire. ;)


whenever Arnav says those simple words, like 'Thank You' and 'Please' he said, heart really goes 'Dhak-dhak' , he means it when he says so.


And when he flirts😳. God. He is Incorrigible. ;) and poor Khushi, just when she gets all defensive, he's play sober and when she lets go, he does the offence. :D

NK, a good mate? Eh. Well he seems fine, curious , inquisitive, quite caring for Arna and well, maybe a good Friend too!! :)


whats with Aman? Why does he always has to be Thanda Paani? His dil ke tukde-Tukde ho gaye, so is he now planning to take his frustration down this way? Such a jealous sissy he is. 😛


waiting for the dusra hissa!

P.S: Sami di, beautiful banner! The colours speak for the shades of a Traditional wedding. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg superb updte...
arnav he is so shameless...ur writing gave this chapter a life yaar...
and aman why he is behaving so rude...i mean how can he blame khushi?????she has the liberty to do things which she likes right...
anyways waiting for midnight to read part 2...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for part1

(Ps: to people who report the thread, I'm at work so can't unres right now. Be assured that this is not a spam comment)

~Unres~

Juhi, first of all I want to applaud you for maintaing the same aura in Shaadi despite the mental heavy toll of last few days. I loved, loved the update. When Khushi ate the chocolate, I knew it affected Aranv 😉 She guaged him accurately about him taking care of the family and not letting his family take care of him. His past with his mother was heartwrencing.

Here the comes the teaser 😳 Simply superb the way you make us aware of her emotions and the ST beetween the two. Oh my, he asked her help wth zipper!!! hmm *ahem ahem* that was the height of the update ☺️ Bur Khushi did manage it, escaped from there but then tortured by her own libido 😳

Khushi might want the innuendos to stop but I want them continue 😳 I look forward to them as muuch as the update 😉

NK & Khushi's conversaton was interesting, he seems to be a smart person.

Oh, so Khushi got fired from the job but I sympathise with Aman. He lost his investment which his family loaned to him on a trust and his outbutst is understandable. I think he will come around and ask for forgiveness!

But the last sentence reminded me of Donald Trump's show "The Apprentice" 😆

Cheers
K

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for part2

(Ps: will unres after the update, again not a spam)

Haaye Juhi, you listened to me, you gave me what I asked for on page 4
Thank you.. Muah ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

Alrighty I'm allowed to write this 😉

Looking forward for your reply Juhi
Challenge posed by V, Drool & Sami
Though he is incapacitated with one hand
Don't forget powers of his lips & tongue
Reminding you Sami's idea of shower or pool
We are here forever to drool drool drool
We know you're busy in your duniya asli
One Searing Kiss or two is all we demand Juhi


I loved Khushi's thoughts leading up to the kiss.. I mean it was heartbreaking that she got fired and insulted by Aman and then the same day her own mother/sister disregard her but then these events made her realize she needs to be little bit of selfish and that she needs to listen to her own body..I'm glad she didnt have second thoughts..
Arnav giving her free reins was a first and her asking him to take control 😳 I have read many kisses by you before but each time I feel the exhilaration and this KISS was special as I asked for it or predicted it as you can see 😉

Thank you for the beautiful chapters amid all the chaos. They are Par Excellence!! 😃

Cheers
K
Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Imagining the scene of Khushi undressing Arnav,... too good!.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This chapter was definitely worth the wait, and we are only at part one so far😊

The way you describe the sexual tension between Arnav and Khushi, and especially Khushi's feelings towards the same, is just amazing - I feel like I can hear her dhak dhak's from over here! Arnav is shameless (maybe that could be the title of your next story😉) and his seducing words can make any woman go weak in the knees; Khushi is a mere mortal and there is only so much she will be able to resist when it comes to her husband. The undressing scene was just brilliantly written - it conveyed all the tension, desire, lust, care and everything else that is between these two already.

Absolutely loved how Khushi didn't back down from the challenge! Love her feisty spirit😊

If Arnav needs special assistance undressing, shouldn't he get the same care when it comes to getting his clothes back on?? I guess Khushi couldn't handle getting her hands back on his p...(I'm sure Arnav was talking about his pants, lol)😳😳

Khushi's dilemma between wanting to care for Arnav, having feelings of desire towards him, and then ultimately backing away because they are not "real" husband and wife is portrayed in such an interesting way. There are so many different factors are play here - will she continue to stay away even against her "newly found libido" or will she succumb to the charms of her husband? There may be no cliffhangers, but you are leaving us with so much anticipation with what is to come!

The side characters are all so interesting in their own right - they have small parts, but they make an impact. Manorama is so caring towards Arnav; she doesn't want him to go to bed hungry and is upset that his new wife won't be there to take care of him while he's not well and isn't afraid of making that known (akin to a mother in-law in some way). NK as Arnav's assistant is great - I wonder if he is doubting Khushi's motives here. Lavanya is still a little bit of a mystery - what exactly is her deal??

Now there is drama at Khushi's workplace - hope this doesn't cause any problems between the newlyweds.

Part one was great, and I'm so excited for part two already...UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

This update kept smile on my face all throughout :). .That's all I want to say. Does Arnav has anything to do with Biosys contract loss?

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