Sandhir FF: Of Mosquitoes and Madness (Chp 4 - 22/3)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

'Cool' that's the word that kept coming in my mind while I was reading this. Your written expression is so simple yet so beautiful. Fun dialogues, loony. Lolzz. The simplicity in 'that' moment carried me away. I had goosebumps while reading that part. Loved it!!!

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Sanchari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Oh yeah. I love that quote too. :D

Bwahaha 🤣🤣 Been observing and analyzing a lot, are we? 🤣🤣 She sure does notice Randhir a lot when she's supposed to hate him 😳

Loony bird 🤣🤣 You're killing me 😆
Loony bird and twist, sitting under a tree, ---
😆

Darn good job! :)

P.S. I agree. British cuss is so bad-ass 😎

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: nampi
Smirk with _____. Love them. Truly your use of words is great. Creative one

It is all Randhir's fault. He is the one who made me notice him, so much so that I actually dedicated an update to his smirk. Hmph. xP

Thank you for reading :D

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Galadriel
Can I borrow your awesome brain please? How is it that in face of impending gloomy doom aka BOARD EXAMS ...did you manage to come up with such a funny fluffy fic?
I.Love.This.FF! I should probably bombard you with an ultra-flattering comment but I can't think of anything to say ...apart from this ff is Kick-ass!!!!! I love your light-hearted SanDhir bantering!!! *teddy bear wala hug to you for being such an awesome author*

P.S: Board Exams bear an extraordinary resemblance to the female dog. Gale lag ja behnaa! Best of luck to you and to me! *yeh lo Dahi-shakkar*

Oh god, your comment made me giggle so hard xP

Mom probably thought I'd gone mad :P

She's used to me now, though. No worries xD

Thank you so much for that comment! You really made my day! You see, I needed some humour, and Sadda Haq wasn't dishing out the epis fast enough, so I took the matters in my own hand and VOILA! xP

My first attempt at humour had such an awesome response, it really encouraged me. That is all a writer wants, really :D

P.S. You have sent me a Buddy request, no? I accepted it. So, you'll get the news for the update next time, pakka :D

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sukriti11196
kya badhiya likhte ho tusi toh..(no i am not punjabi)
anyways..
this is so so so good...
you have an awesome choice of words...
your flow for the story is too good...
somehow your works is very fresh, new for me...

the parts like...
Smirk with flushed cheeks. My favourite
Twinkling eyes -- mischief
Did they just share a moment?

are so good...they are so simple yet so lovable...
i loved it...
waiting for more

Ahahaha, arre even I have a (annoying according to my friends -.-) habit of babbling in Punjabi. And I am a Bengali. Imagine that xD

Thank you so much for reading! Hugs :D

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -silhouette-
'Cool' that's the word that kept coming in my mind while I was reading this. Your written expression is so simple yet so beautiful. Fun dialogues, loony. Lolzz. The simplicity in 'that' moment carried me away. I had goosebumps while reading that part. Loved it!!!

REALLY? Oh my god, that is just...I am extremely flattered. You are too kind! :D

I hope my future updates are up-to-par, and you feel just as cool about those xD

Thank you for reading! :D

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

Oh yeah. I love that quote too. :D

Bwahaha 🤣🤣 Been observing and analyzing a lot, are we? 🤣🤣 She sure does notice Randhir a lot when she's supposed to hate him 😳

Loony bird 🤣🤣 You're killing me 😆
Loony bird and twist, sitting under a tree, ---
😆

Darn good job! :)

P.S. I agree. British cuss is so bad-ass 😎

She just might be stalker-in-disguise. You never know xD

I love how both of them are comically childish in this fic. The recent epis are bringing out this particular aspect of their personality, that with each other they become frighteningly kiddish. I just wanted to prolong that for a while until things become serious in the show (and maybe here too? Should I slowly turn this into a drama, or does hilarious romance work for y'all? I'd love answers to that from everyone).

Thank you for reading! :D

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Galadriel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: LoveToDream

She just might be stalker-in-disguise. You never know xD

I love how both of them are comically childish in this fic. The recent epis are bringing out this particular aspect of their personality, that with each other they become frighteningly kiddish. I just wanted to prolong that for a while until things become serious in the show (and maybe here too? Should I slowly turn this into a drama, or does hilarious romance work for y'all? I'd love answers to that from everyone).

Thank you for reading! :D

*Nirupa Roy-ishtyle* NAHI!!!! Your ff is so unique because its so effing funny! Puh-lease don't drama-fy it??? *puppy dog face* Pretty please? Just a request though. Your ff ultimately.I wouldn't mind some epic comic misunderstanding style drama. Also,for some odd reason...your SanDhir remind me of Ron-Hermione.

P.S: You read and reply to all comments? Oh Great Author, I bow to thee!!!😆

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Please don't turn this into a drama! I think almost every other FF (including mine :P) is overly dramatic already. I suggest you continue with the hilarious romance :D

And update soon! May I ask for a longer update? :D

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Galadriel

She just might be stalker-in-disguise. You never know xD
I love how both of them are comically childish in this fic. The recent epis are bringing out this particular aspect of their personality, that with each other they become frighteningly kiddish. I just wanted to prolong that for a while until things become serious in the show (and maybe here too? Should I slowly turn this into a drama, or does hilarious romance work for y'all? I'd love answers to that from everyone).
Thank you for reading! :D

*Nirupa Roy-ishtyle* NAHI!!!! Your ff is so unique because its so effing funny! Puh-lease don't drama-fy it??? *puppy dog face* Pretty please? Just a request though. Your ff ultimately.I wouldn't mind some epic comic misunderstanding style drama. Also,for some odd reason...your SanDhir remind me of Ron-Hermione.

P.S: You read and reply to all comments? Oh Great Author, I bow to thee!!!😆

Ehehehehehe xD

I love talking, and IF is frighteningly interactive xD

And, some of y'all are just so fun, that I can resist replying! :P

So much so, that I believe I am having a conversation right here with one or two of you xD

Ohk, funny and silly it is. Shouldn't be too hard, considering I am a little bit of a nutcase myself xD

P.S. I adore Hermione Granger :O

#HarryPotter is #Love.

I'm more of a Dramione fan though. *Randhir-style smirk*

Yes, I am a sucker for bad boys. Accepted. xP

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