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Shameela

@Sam_Faizal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Loved the update.. Awwwe Arnav was such a cutie the way he apologized and khushi was just wonderful to forgive him like that... Two relationships in the making... I can't wait to see how Arnav and khushi's relationship is going to turn out.. I hope they don't get into any huge misunderstandings.

Edited by jani_faizal - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

wow...beautiful update Uthra Di...I am loving Gupta family already...the atmosphere of the house...the bond they share...lovely...
Shashi is a wise man, loved how he gave Arnav the much needed space for him to apologies...
Loved both Arnav-Khushi & Anjali-Shyam convo...its beautifully written Di...

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Awesome update ! Love the way you're fleshing out the characters and the story is progressing beautifully.

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Arnav is quite gentleman unlike he portrayed in most of ff's sincerely apologized n khushi is very kind hearted just accepted his apology whole heartedly n also requested to attend the event beautifully I like the way they treated other politely n respectfully

Anjali n shyam is also on the road of love looks like soon one of them going to confess shashi is quite intelligent man treated everyone well n gave them space to sort out their differences

looking forward

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alex1906

@alex1906

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Lovely update. Didn't think arnav could be so humble n apologise with so much sincerity, I was thinking that probably his big fat ego woulf come in b/w.

Khushi is so warm. Forgave him in a jiffy.

Loved shyam n anjali's relation. Atleast here he is not pretending anything(hope so).
and shashi is so tactful n understanding. He can see that long lasting bonds have startedforming though there will be bumps Iin b/w.

and a very happy bday to ur friend

Edited by alex1906 - 11 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Book-marking! Be back later to edit my comment. Apologies for the delay because I have a crazy weekend ahead!

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Caught up with chapters 1-3, Viji - and might I say that you have beginnings of a beautiful story here. I like how Arnav almost immediately apologized to Khushi after his error and how things are now taking a more relaxed pace as the couples find themselves drawn to each other. I really like Shyam and Shashi - love that Khushi has such a lovely family

And Khushi herself is such a strong woman. I hear that the loss of a sense is usually made up for by nature with courage, poise and a loving spirit - you are showing that in Khushi so well

Will now go and read Chapter 4 and post a comment on that separately. Hope to read as you update hereafter :)

Small suggestion - since you are just starting - it will be easy to do for you - Could you please add the link to the next chapter at the end of each so that it is easy for readers who want to read in one go? Thank you so much and i hope it's not too much trouble :)

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Shikhayugal

@Shikhayugal

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

amazing update

glad to see that Arnav apolozied to khushi and khushi forgave him

thanks for the pm :)

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Beautiful update !!! shashi is so sweet father.. they way he made everyone leave to let arnav apologise to khushi was nice gesture.. also liked his thoughts about the beginnings of new things among the four people whom he saw from his study's window.. arnav-khushi convo was sweet.. also liked shyam-anjali.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

I don't know how I missed put on reading chapter two.

Just read both chapters together.

Love the strong and believable characters.

Arnav's heartfelt apology made up for his unsolicited anger.

And Anjali and Shyam definitely have something going on between them.

Did Arnav and Khushi know each other as kids?

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Love the characters, the storyline, the writing style and the pace - I know in my heart that this is going to be one amazing SS.

You are so gentle with your words - so very endearing!!