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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderfully written Viji...
The anxiety and the nervousness at the doorsteps wondering how the family would react to his presence. The thoughtfulness of his gesture, acknowledging his unjustified actions, his need to apologise and the his more urgent need for his apology to be accepted, you wrote all those feelings so naturally and perfectly.

I loved how the atmosphere in her household was so different...so positive and happy. Welcoming him and Anjali immediately with open arms..loved her reaction when she realises he is there too.

I loved the father...he seems to a wise man, full of experience and very perceptive. Loved the way he manoeuvres every seamlessly to leave Arnav with Khushi, knowing it must be awkward for him to apologise so making it more conducive for him.

The conversation between them was sweet and smart, the effect the have on each other, the change in their relationship, her magnanimity in accepting his apology all stepping stones ...the way he looks at her, the way she strikes a deal and gets him to agree to attend her charity function.,,,she is smart ...and I like her spirit.

Shyam and Anjali share some meaningful moments getting to know each other better, which was endearing, some more insight into their lives.

Your writing is getting better, this chapter had so many elements of emotions and you brought each of them out so beautifully.

Looking forward to the next chapter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
For chapter 3 ..viji !

yo yo geneticist ... Tell me one thng ...arnav was being careful about hvng no sugar in beverages ... Questionwa is ..diabetes is X -linked trait ? If it z ..thn dominant or recessive :-P :-D ...lol... Srry cdnt help myself asking it ... It was a bug in my mind :-P


update as usual .. U dnt kno why but aftr readng it ... I m left overwhelmed wth the feeling of love ... Disciple ..humanity n so much if kindness... Sab kuch itna shaant ... Sahi ..ar peaceful tha... I feel calm aftr readng the update ... Shashi s gestures fr gvng arnav n khushi time to talk alone was so so .. ( ifk the wrd ) bt it was just soo good ..


Thn ... Arnav here z as decent as a man could be .. perfect ...

Khushi ..angelic.. Although i prefer bubbly khushi but i really liked the mature n kind hearted one here ...


Shayam ..is the best brothr ... Ever !


Anjali ..is sweet .. Yu kno ..wt sweetness means on IPk forum ..its anjali ..


There z so much so much of goodness in every character here ...

What i like most is ..how comfortably arshi n shayanjali forgave n forgot the morning incident ...


I hope i m not missing anything .. There was so much going on in mind while reading...

O ya ..one question viji ..who z the guy tht wants to defame anji ..

N .. Wt else .. Han looking frward fr bua ji ..nk ..n ..payal s entry ..


Classic update .. Feels good to read such a story . Lol.. I cnt help bt to imagine yu as a very disciplened ..n ..kind ..n .. Mature viji .. :-D <3 ...


Thnx vs ..n ..mem1 fr inspiring viji ..

Yo viji yu r lucky i read yur stories :-P :-D B-)

update soon ..but i dnt kno if i ll be active thn to cmnt.. Anyways .. Cheers ... I m loving it :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update and glad that Arnav apologised so sincerely.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav Singh Raizada was the successful business for various reasons.But he also knew to accept the mistakes he did.And accusing Khushi hadn't let him in peace.So, he was at her doorstep, to ask for forgiveness.And even if angered by his further behaviour, Arnav and Anjali both were warmly welcomed in the Gupta house.
Khushi's father seemed to be a wise and smart man & provided appropriate space for both Arnav-Khushi and Shyam-Anjali to talk.
Shyam and Anjali both are very understanding and the moments between Arnav-Khushi was also very beautifully written.
Wise Arnav & a sweet and innocent Khushi..they make quite a pair:)
Loved it..<3
Edited by ..sweetchilly.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so raizadas siblings and guptas siblings sure are getting along well
he finally asked for forgiveness
and she forgave him too
it wasnt easy for him though
her dad was good
the way he got rid of all others to leave arnav to say sorry to her
wait did he just say that this set up reminded him of potential groom and bride setting
wow his thoughts are going hay wire aint they
awww that was funny then
so anj and shy and arhi huh getting together in the future
one hopes so
but it wont be so easy either
lets see what else happens
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Posted: 11 years ago
simply fabulous
loved it😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a lovely update... couldn't do anything but smile..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Such well written update. No unnecessary drama and emotional outbursts. Liked the way Shashi Gupta managed the whole situation. He talking to Arnav and easing out the tension filled situation and giving some private space for Arnav and Khushi to talk was indeed nice.

Arnav and Khushi's chat too was from the bottom of their hearts. Khushi is not bad herself in cracking deals. In return of accepting the new phone, she made Arnav agree to attend the fund raiser.

Looks like Arnav is already smitten by our dear Khushi.

Shashi wanting his children to be loved just like he was loved by his wife might come true afterall.

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Posted: 11 years ago
That was a lovely update.
An extremely acomodating Shashi, perfect host Shyam and a forgiving Khushi who make up the Gupta family were a breath of fresh air to the Raizada siblings!
It showed what sort of sweet people the Guptas were.
An insight and awakening to ASR!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hehe ... both the families are very decent😆
no name calling, no 'how are you show your face here' etc etc.

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