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Posted: 11 years ago
Teaser
"Mr. Raizada !! There is ..."
"It's Arnav, Ms. Gupta"
"You will be Mr. Raizada as long as I am Ms. Gupta. Listen, there is ..."
"Khushi"
Her name in his voice sounded like a whisper that caressed her physically, making goosebumps erupt all over her body.

"Khushi, I am sorry, I really am. My conscience knows that I have behaved terribly. I am disappointed with myself and will be able to look at myself in the mirror only if I know I have been forgiven for my misdeed."

"Arnav"

It was now Arnav's turn to be physically jolted.

"Arnav, I was shaken by your choice of words and felt that no woman, whether at fault or not, deserved to be spoken to in that way. I came to know from Bhaiyya, what happened with Anjaliji. I felt your anger was justified although the reaction was not"

Arnav felt his chances of getting forgiveness were bleak. And after a long time he felt helpless.

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Update coming up tomorrow, i.e. 28th February.

Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago
Miss.Zaidi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
this so .. intriguing .. rushes to read the missed chapter ;P

beware i m going to cmnt :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the teaser Uthra di!!🤗

Awesome teaser!!!😊
Can't wait to read the next part..
Edited by jtmbarun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uthra ji..

I am terribly sorry for the late late comments. First of all such a beautiful concept.. You kept the character of ASR intact, shrewd, arrogant, protective brother yet not a jerk. Loved his characterization. Anjali working at AR is a welcoming change in portrayal of her character instead of concentrating her time in Pooja thaalis. Khushi.. what shall I say? Perfect characterization and Shyam was really surprise here motherly figure, such a caring brother.. Its awesome.

There is no much intensity or mystery in your plot but the way you developed a simple plot is just mind blowing.. Love to read the continuation soon.. As usual my banner coming up 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Apsara my darling,
Teaser se tease karte ho !
AAP badi woh ho...
But I loved this teaser...
Hai tumhari tarah tikha,
Kuchh chatpata bhelpuri sa,
Dono ki jubaa pe naam ek duje ka,
Lagta hai kuchh,mittha Jalebi ki chaasni sa.

Eagerly waiting for the update.
Love n hugs and so many ki...
Take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
wow... superb teaser
arshi talk...
hayyye

thanks for the teaser di...

cant wait for the update now
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic chapter 2 and teaser as well Uthra, loved the way you showed an arrogant and ruthless Arnav but he is insensitive, atleast he realized that he did wrong with Khushi... Beautiful portrayal of two equally protective brothers but very different in its approach. Eagerly waiting for the much awaited talk between Khushi and Arnav.. As I said earlier, this story's unique concept make it more exciting and the way you write it makes it super duper awesome 👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was interesting Teaser...
So Arnav is in helpless situation,.. he should think before lashing out on Kushi😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh i dont know maybe it isnt so bad arnav
there is hope for you yet mate
hmmm so kuch kuch hua when they hear one another name from the other mouth
what a teaser dear

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