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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Excellent Start and Loved the update...

I was taken back by Kushi's behaviour towards Lavanya.. seems Kushi a spoilt brat...

Glad to know that Shyam's charector is positive...

Arrg what can i say about out hotty and every time angry ASR, he dont even give any damn to kushi to explain her point of view...😡

Please update soon.

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Amazing start!!!!
Can't wait to read more

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varshamaharaj

@varshamaharaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

brilliant chapter!!update soon. love it when kushi gave him a befitting reply...

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Mind blowing...Khushi my Dear...you spoke and how..., you were excellent...

...I'm just imagining his expression after Khushi spoke...that's would something!

So looking forward to this story...your writing is just amazing!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Phewww U, you wonderful you! You have me all emotional!

There was such intensity and power in your writing when you were describing every single development in this Chapter, that you left me with no choice but to feel exactly what the characters were feeling. I will get straight to my favourite part and that is when Arnav gets his rude shock with Khushi's emotional state and outburst. The scene where Shyam calls out for his sister and Khushi reaches out to him asking him to take her away was simply FANTASTIC! It just touched me immensely and I don't think any amount of words will be enough to describe exactly how I felt about this scene. *Sighs

I can't commend you enough for your dedication that is to the visually impaired, no wonder you portrayed Khushi's pain so realistically! You have worked with them and understand a great deal about their feelings due to the personal and emotional connect.

Coming to the other characters, ASR's character is just as powerful as you would expect him to be and in this case yet again we find him standing for his loved one and berating people without a second thought! I just cannot wait to see his regret at the way he treated Khushi, I cannot wait to see how he will show his regret and remorse for what he did. While there was a mix up with the Khushi's, as Khushi quite rightly pointed out to him, he was still quite aggressive and barbaric in his treatment of a woman and that too a completely innocent one! Moving on from ASR, I am so glad you are portraying Shyam in a positive light, I am quite tired of seeing the guy as the bad guy constantly. It is so refreshing to see him in this light! Loved the way he was there for his sister without being a royal jerk like Arnav was shown to be. These three characters most certainly stood out for me in this chapter and I am quite excited to embark on this journey with you!

I don't think I need to even tell you that I loved the start because you can already guess that from my comment! Bring on more as soon as you can! ❤️

EDIT... Happy Birthday again Aayat! xx

PS. I also want to thank Vandy and Gita for pushing you to post this GEM! <3

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arsneh

@arsneh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

i loved d narration as i can imagine its scenes flow in my mind
i am happy to know that shyam and khushi are siblings as such.ff's always have a softcorner in my heart
i understood that Anjali have feelings for shyam bt waiting to know shyam's feelings towards her hope he will reciprocate her feelings
and i am curious to know what was there in news and which photo they were talking about
regarding khushi i didn't understand her.character that will the be a chirpy happy go lucky girl or a matured one
i think she will.be matured
Arnav is as usual impulsive and arrogant
bt khushi is blind came as shock for me
i.am waiting for next chapter

note-
i wrote it all wdout P.R.E.S.S.U.R.E
bt u have pressure to bear it

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aamshula87

@aamshula87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Superb. Shyam n kushi siblings. Anjali has a soft corner for shyam.arnav mu for journalist kushi n chutki.OMG.our kushi is blind

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome Start.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.

So Khushi is blind.

Oh boy, what a blunder Arnav has made.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

unres!

Congrats on this new ss vijji!
Loved the update.
i must say, you have emerged out as a brilliant witter. thanks for all those who have boosted you up for writing and giving us another wonderful writter.
loved the story and loved the concept you have opted.
it was sooo goo, i am finding myself short of words.
Shyam is a Gupta! i am liking it.
Arnav, well, he is the ASR for apparent reason. Mr. Arrogant Singh Raizada.
i loved Khushi though not out of pity, but for the strength of her character and what she told Arnav in her outburst.
Anjali, as usual too confidant about Arnav.
But what was the reason behind his anger that he so wanted to thrash the reporter. what was the Article or the gossip about . what pictures?

waiting for next update Vijji
continue soon.

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Res!!!
Finally its started!!!!

Edited

Sorry for the late unres uthra!!

Whoa!! What a start! Hatred and misunderstanding in the very first chapter! Damn ASR was downright rude! Manhandling in any form should be heavily condemned. I mean evn if khushi had written the article, he had no right to behave like that.
Poor girl! Must have been shocked n scared out of her wits!
So khushi is blind? Well she seemed quite self sufficient and confident to me!

N i like this shyam! Hell shyam and khushi brother n sister! Waah!! Yeh huyi na baat!

A very good start viji!! Looking forward to read more of this story!

Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago

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