update chapter 1 pg 5 And the Reason is You

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TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

will read part 1 tomoro nd commnt.. pakka..😊😊

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shikha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: --Orchids--
will read part 1 tomoro nd commnt.. pakka..😊😊

Day after tomorrow a gaya😳

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sybarite1989

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

very enticing start..
was a sad part but loved it..
you are very right in potraying the orthodoxy and dogmatism of indian society. ..
arranged marriage without approval is one such example. .
cont soon. ..:):)

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sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

nice start...brilliantly written..

you described Riddhima's feeling and emotions so well...

she loves Armaan and getting married to Sid...

eager to read what will happen next...

cont soon...

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punam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

awesome sikha,loved the whole part...love..

punam di

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TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shikha.kj

Day after tomorrow a gaya😳

hehehe... sorry yaara.. bhul gayee thi.. abhi aa gaye mein part padh ne.. day aftr tomoro se bahot zyada days guzar gaya but still tere nxt update se pehle toh mujhey yaad aa hi gaya,na..😉😛😆

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TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

brilliant..

superbb..

mind-blowing start...👏👏👏

i must tell u sikhu, u've improved a lot as a writer.. yes, u r indeed an awsm poet but there was lill difference betwn poems n FFs but now u've merged both efficiently..

this one has awesomely started.. too good ..👏👏

plz cont soon shikhuu.. waiting too eagerly..😃😃

tke care.. luv uu..🤗