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napk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

I just started reading your story... You are an amazing writer. This is the first time I am reading your work. I was browsing for FFs and saw this story read the prologue and I was hooked. This is such a gripping story...with so much mystery.

I loved how you build all the characters and how they are all connected to each other in some way. There is so much hidden yet so much that is revealed. As I reader I so want to know all the answers because as the story is progressing and knowing the characters so far...

My observations so far

- khushi has little knowledge about her past... But arnav sure knows about what happened if not completely... So he should know about garima Muriel right? Just wondering does he even have a doubt about the last name? Or did he figure it out and is playing khushi? That would be scary 😲

- wondering what's up with sheetal and Akash? We don't know anything why they are secretive and it's scary

- now my biggest doubt... Is Shyam rana's son? If so Anjali would be his half-sister right? As Rana is her father... This is so confusing and messed up as it showed as if they were feeling something for each other

- you revealed so much in the previous chapter... Shashi's and raghu's secrets...it's like almost everyone is linked to each other one way or the other... Except Aman for now

- I feel for khushi... So much has happened in a short spam of time without her consent and everyone is giving her orders... Poor thing... To top that arnav is always acting weird with her... It's so hard to predict him yet she understands him at some level... She will be surprised when she knows who he is what he wants to do with her

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SaRun.

@SaRun.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Freakin loved the update <3

Luved Arnav in this <3 telling her abt his feelings...luved that!

im still confused as to why khushi shared a part of her secret with him..and why doesnt Arnav know that the girl he wants to kill is back and that shyam is already trying to get hold of her.?!

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ShwetapS

@ShwetapS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

An arshilious update!

I can see the dynamics between the duo are going to change soon...Khushi is somewhere scared to lose Arnav and maybe that made her loosen up bit of information abt herself...probably to win back his faith... I know this looks like a new start for their relationship... But I for one, am waiting for Arnav to figure out her true identity. It would then be interesting to see his reaction. By fate's design she is the girl he hates, but she is also the girl he has gotten to know as a person now. So will he be able to hate her then? Could he think the worst of her inspite of everything? That would be fun to watch.

Another gr8 chapter Paakhee... Our two lovebirds trapped in a vicious web... Awesome.

Edited by ShwetapS - 11 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

y do i feel he knows the whole truth

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KKKA

@KKKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

CAM L IN ...YET ONCE AGAIN I AM SHORT OF WORDS

MY VOCABULARY FAILS ME ABSOLUTELY

A TWISTED TALE OF TWIRLED LIVES

THIS IS AN OUT N OUT A TOTALLY DIFFERENT CONCEPT

THAT YOU HAVE USED HERE

CONFUSED SOULS FUSED TOGETHER N STILL TRYING TO

STAY APART N COME BACK WITH A FORCE THAT WILL

ERADICATE THE EXISTENCE OF EVIL

BRAVO BRAVO

I AM IN AWE OF YOUR EVIL CONNIVING CHARACTERS TO YOUR

INNOCENT VICTIMS OF CIRCUMSTANCES TO THE GENUINE

PARENTAL DISGUISED SUFFERING CHARACTER TO FAKING

FEMME FATALES TO PARCHED SOULS AWAITING A TORNADO OF

EMOTIONS TO WHISK THEM AWAY TO AN UNKNOWN

LAND OF DREAMS

HOPE TO GET AN ALERT FOR THE NEXT

KKKA

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Rocking Update P !

First part with Khushi and her dad's equation getting a slight shift from the regular bland outlook came across really well.

However the second part with a good dose of Arnav and Khushi was a sure shot treat.

The fact the Arnav could not really divulge any information on Khushi has got him more interested in her. In fact somewhere i am thinking by showing the white flag and confessing to her about his carrying out an investigation on her , he actually has some hidden agenda and if along with that he can also spend time with her its like killing two birds with a stone.

The reason i feel this is after volatile reaction earlier and his about turn now sounds more like a ploy.

Khushi ...i really feel she should have stayed quiet even in front of Arnav , though she did not give out explicit details she did say more than what would have been acceptable to her father and Raghu.

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navjot7

@navjot7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

awesome updt
but i donot i have feeling that arnav is playing some game
when he donot find information about khushi
than how can be he so cool with khushi
i donot know i have begative feeling about all this
i just hope arnva donot hurt her
thnx for pm

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

awesome updt
but i have feeling that arnav is playing some game
when he donot find information about khushi
than how can be he so cool with khushi
i donot know i have begative feeling about all this
i just hope arnva donot hurt her
thnx for pm