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zainza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

I think it has been removed, didn't see it there

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Camlin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: zainza
I think it has been removed, didn't see it there

Yes, its been taken down. 😊

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anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

First of all I am so sorry that your story got plagiarized!!! Thank you that you decided to continue with the story and did not get discouraged. I can only imagine how sad this must be as you work so hard to write and then someone just copies it!!!!!! Please do continue and do not give up😊

Coming to the update I loved it, aww it was a magical date!!!!! From her selecting the dress to everything was almost like watching a movie 😃

I still cannot get out of feeling that Arnav has a hidden agenda or something else planned which will not be good for Khushi!!! Can you blame me for not trusting Arnav as his best friend is Shyam really that itself is a big negative point lol!!!

It was nice that both of them are trying to know each other and Arnav is keeping his distance!!! Got to see how tough his childhood was and how lonely he was all through his childhood. He did talk about Shyam and told her that he does not judge his friends is this some kind of tell tale of what he would do in the future or am I just looking too much into this and not trust Arnav 😊

Cannot wait for your dhamakedar future plot unfolding updates that are going to come sooonnn 😃

Can you please write an update from Arnav's POV so that we will get a peek into his mind too!!!

Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Loved d update

I feel he is close to Khushi

bcoz he knows something abt

her like whose daughter she is 😛

overall a beautifully written update

Thanks for pm 😊

Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 11 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us

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nishkka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Lovely update. Both are getting closer to each other. Sorry to hear about the plagiarism. Hope it doesn't happen again.

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

AMAZING PART 👏👏

LOVED IT 😛

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

So simply put but so true - "you don't judge your friends"

Arnav and Shyam as best friends? That will be interesting to see! Will there be a betrayal somewhere down the line once he meets Khushi?

Very sorry to hear someone's copied your work. Glad you were informed and it was taken down.

Thank you for trusting your readers and not giving up on the story or removing your work from IF.

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luvbug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Oh wow tht was a wonderful update... Beautiful dinner date (obvi arshi just can't have dinner ;) it has to b a date)

I'm just scared... Wat will happen when Arnav shares this news with Shyam ... N Arnav will come to knw she is the same person he hates

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pearl.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Superb update..Arnav is smitten by khushi n its obvious d way he is opening himself up around her...loved d brief description u gave abt khushi's apparel...i could actually visualise our gorgeous khushi looking incredibly sexy in dat dior dress...loved d update..
I read ur note n i know how disheartend u will be feeling to hav ur work copied n used like dat...n i'm glad u havn't decided to put this story on hold...a hearty thank you pakhee .