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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved it <3
adarsh is trying to blackmail payal n khushi thinks its arnav
n arnav called her his wife infront of the media
cant wait for the next update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav is just too clever.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i must say...hatsofff...u r amazing...n such a wonderful update...its like...i cant evwn xplain...n wat a presence of mind...ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA wanna hav a private moment wth his WIFE...**faint**
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh that was too good...But ASR can manage to get out off this one as well...can't wait to see what he will do next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg, just awesome .. Can't wait for d nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update. khushi tried to trap arnav. waiting for d next update
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow m shockd... again a superb update.. dii mar daloge itne superb updates dekar..

i like the bst thing about u is ... ur regular updates...
seriously u put so efforts in ur writing which is reflected in each and evry update or i say evn in evry line of evry update...superb .

todays update was a light one... mean nt creating more emotional sections.. which i love the most... bt today's update was gajab...

first 2 start with i say ur note cleared many things hiddn behind fog which were a bit unclear sply... the nature of the characters.. thanks.
so well characterized...

about payal is exactly true .. this is hw happns in reality .. evn a grl frm a family having males too gt infactuated with guys who attract them .. wen dey step out of deir cocoons... and dat too at a age 22 ... surely dey will fall for guys who attract dem either by deir talks deir gestures or any other means..as dey are like small kid easily attracted towards fantasy...

nw about arnav hw true u said deir was no one to tell him about wat heart is for and except beating wat else game it play... emotionally with a person.. to gt connectd with ppl and wat it feels wen dey gt away...
in his blood more runs business than emotions which flow frm heart so he consider all as either to gain if u wish to gt it by hook or crook as its profitable and convinient or to lose permanently if its nt worth it for u...
exactly hw he did with lav and in future i guess with khushi respectively..
so exactly hw u potrayed his character...is superb and magnificent...

sme words for arnav:

Heart, Love, infactuation and attraction were never the words of my dictionary but the day i meet you my soul has started acknowledging this terms...


nw coming to khushi .. i was as clear about her character since last 2 or 3 updates...
as she is hw a grl should be who is been assaulted at a vry young age...
her view towards the society changes which is mainly man oriented and to survive oh no nt to survive but saying to live in such society u have to overpower this fears.. and show the toughest in you...
so i am exactly in line to say its very very very well shaped and influenced and relates with reality...

sme thing more about this note bt later wen i reach tht point coz its about my spl.. interest 😉

Nw coming to the update...

speaking about the truth i hav imagined that arshi will meet in ar branch at borewali... and deir the blunders will flow ..

bt bt bt u are as i say unexpected and the bst writer.. so u turnd the point to taj...
and the way u jolted the strings .. was like out of my imagination...

the news channels being responsible and sensible taken a nice move to take a string operation rathr than just spitting the fire in news... (o guess dey hav to bear the cons.. in either of the case)

I hav botherd and evn mntiond it in my previous cmnt that asr if gts to knw about his nani's plan den hw he is unaware of khushi's blast..
bt u exactly put it in the correct place wer he gts to knw and evn the source (mohan)...
bt its his bad luck dat its a bit late ... that no one either mohan or aman reachd him on tym..

so its adarsh singh raizada the b****y b*****d who is responsible for this cheap act of black mailing payal..

it was a superb climax types wen aman reachd on tym ... otherwise the consequences will be unbearable by kkg ... coz arnav i guess will definetely... can gt out of this mess ... bt bt who will save kkg frm arnav's wrath..
evn nw also i guess no one can save her as she stepped inside lion's den..

so arnav said to hav sme words with his wife ahem ahem...

nani just watchd the evil bean rathr than the entire which i guess nw will mislead her about his grandson..

Nw coming to my spl... interest(i am clearing it at first place ..😉😉 aman is just my spl. interest .. nvr and no prsn can take the place of arnav... evn hw grt dey are.. coz i breathe 4 him damn it and i need no othr reason to be love him.)

first wen in ur note u said aman takla .. i was haaaww.. and a bit pissed... bt later thank god its clarified .. i evn hav a face imagined to be aman.. wen i read dis and wen i imagined him bald ... o god ogod it was worst look he can hav..

ao aman is just amazing man... dii u hav dne a grt justice with his character coz.. as a frd he is evrytym by arnav's side...
and dis is hw i think frds are..
i guess aman is one of a pillars to arnav's succes...
I hav a lot to say about his character bt i find shortage of the required words..
so i say he is a saviour to the great raizada...

a quote for aman:


When we honestly ask ourselves which person in our lives mean the most to us, we often find that it is those who, instead of giving advice, solutions, or cures, have chosen rather to share our pain and touch our wounds with a warm and tender hand. The friend who can be silent with us in a moment of despair or confusion, who can stay with us in an hour of grief and bereavement, who can tolerate not knowing, not curing, not healing and face with us the reality of our powerlessness, that is a friend who cares.


Henri J.M. Nouwen



plz.. bear my free flowing thoughts..


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Posted: 11 years ago
wat a update !!!! it was awesome !!!!
lets see wat happens further
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting update..Finally, Adrash singh raizada ne entry li...
he is the one who blackmailed payal..but khushi misunderstood
that arnav was behind this..and what has she done..
now khushi toh gae...& wow arnav called khushi as
his wife in front of the media..what will happen now..
impatiently waiting for the next part..
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
How can u end the update on such interesting part
So not done
Eagerly waiting for it
Plz update soon

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