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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Woooww an wondefull update👏

Aman want to hug..You are my hero today❤️

Woooww anav just address khushi as his wife infront of the media😃

Wait until 18 feb😔

thanks for pm

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AneesahJabeen

@AneesahJabeen

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

hahahahha awesome

wonder wats about to go down now

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Just quickly read it...i am going to India today if i could read it there I will other wise i will read it when I come back love your story

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Blackbells

@Sunshine28

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Gorgeous wife huh...cool update...deeps this was ur shirtesr ypdate...loved it though... waiting for tuesday... this is the last time u are leaving a cliffganger Deeps...dont do this anymore dear...rhanks fr wonderful update

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

just read all 8 parts

truly amazing

oh what a wedding!!!!

2 very strong characters, both don't believe in God, Love or marriage

ironically tied together by a taveez that has their initials entwined

so Adi is trying to blackmail Payal and Khushi thinks it is Arnav

oh crap!!!! he called her his wife on air

now fireworks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

What a thriling updt deepthi ful of action today aman is our hero asr ko fool banana asan nahi hai kushi ki to watt lagi asr declare kushi wife front of media tussi great ho thank god akash is nt negetv he is cute guy tho most of people think payal bos is akash anyway u stop the chap in crutial point nt fair haan itna lamba intejar tanx for nt n pm

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

The update was nice.

The misunderstanding carried forward and I am happy that not much of a damage was done , because if ASR's image would have been hurt which implies that his big fat ego would have been hurt and we all know what will happen if his ego is damaged.

I am happy that atleast Aman have an idea of what went wrong and who is responsible for this. The one thing I am confused is Why did Aadarsh tried to send a girl to Arnav. It was supposed to be a client to whom Payal was supposed to go then why did that Adi send Arnav there was it a wrong timing that Adi was out of town and Arnav went there or was it preplanned to trap Arnav.

But in any which way out of all this misunderstanding and confusion one good thing that happened is Arnav called Khushi as his wife on National Television and I think Nani and Aman should be the happiest people on this earth but I think a storm is waiting in the next update.

Enjoy your time will wait for 18th.

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved the update too much

So Arnav accept his marriage in front of media

Arnav's spantanious thinking about the situation was mind blowing

Khushi misunderstood him as Payal's boss

Adarsh is trying to blackmail Payal and Khushi thinks it is Arnav

But glad that Aman has proofs of Adarsh's deeds

He has idea what is wrong there in all this mass

But all of this things Aman and Nani will be happy as Arnav accept his marriage in live telecasted program

What strom is coming for Khushi in next update

Hope Aman will help both of them

But you stopped it in cliffhanger

Eagerly Waiting for next update

Off ye Tuesday kab aayega

Plz continue it as soon as possible

Edited by star_fan1 - 11 years ago

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

my goodness deepu...it was thrilling...action pack ...full of suspense and drama...in short total hatkay update...

Throughout the update i was on a rollar coaster...even the wait of client which makes arnav restless makes me even more restless... i was like uff kiya hoga ...abh kiya honay wala hay...omg arnav phas jaye ga...like i am his nani...damn ...u have made it so tough ...that i developed elderly feelings towards poor arnav.. ...damn worried for him and all thanks to u...u the main cause of this all hyperactive haal of mine...in short wow loved the way u have written it deepu...i am IMPRESSED...

and worst thing ...u took ur own sweet time...its 2:15 its 2:30 now 2:45 damn its 3...its now damn 3:25...he doing exercise...now treadmil is on 8 speed now coming to 3...that dhak dhak dhak was not at all due to acidity ...in short love... but that dhak dhak was all due to tension...uff me deadwa while waiting...

aman new name is sherlock holmes from now on wards...u took me to sherlock holmes series...such a smart handsome awesome detective...he crossed 007 james bond...loved the way he said tussi great ho ...hehehe...in short deepu tussi great ho...so aman got 2 messages...cd..and empty envelop...his brain is on constant working now...but

again a big twist ...insider called him and told about khushi...

must say khushi is hyper active ..not using her sensible brain at all..reason behind as u mentioned in note...kiya kerain abh woh hay hee aysee...with all hidden camera and all ...she reached taj...

arnav ,damn not using his brain at all cut the call of aman ...just imagine his best friend...his right hand...and he cut the call just for khushi...wah wah ...this is called bad luck...going on air...woh bhee in awesome bare chest and her torn sleeves...but thank goodness our james bond reached there before too much damage...but i wanted to give THE HERO OF TONIGHT award to our super hero arnav...he smile back after hearing hidden camera...very sharp brain indeed...and adding 2 plus 2...he came up with excellent reply...need time with my gorgeous wife now...hahahaha...damn good...all praises for u deepu...fabulous and fantastic writing...excellently concieved and written...

well in this all drama and stress...the hight light which is hidden is ...the storm which khushi willingly ask for...she tried to trapped arnav in a very bad way...i know arnav ruthless,arrogant angry young man and many many more...but khushi is the one this time who has taken the wrong step without thinking ,without proper back ground checking...

in the end just last thing i wanted to add...i know u r master in writing emotions,love,romance,relationships...but pls add few more feathers to ur hat...u r superb in writing drama,suspense thriller and action...love u loads :)

Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago