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Originally posted by: arnavini
wow m shockd... again a superb update.. dii mar daloge itne superb updates dekar..
i like the bst thing about u is ... ur regular updates...
seriously u put so efforts in ur writing which is reflected in each and evry update or i say evn in evry line of evry update...superb .
todays update was a light one... mean nt creating more emotional sections.. which i love the most... bt today's update was gajab...First of all Thank you baby for your wonderful comments...If I understood you right, u r up for emotional track I guess bcos loads of those scenes are going to follow when the prologue 1 come into picture.
first 2 start with i say ur note cleared many things hiddn behind fog which were a bit unclear sply... the nature of the characters.. thanks.
so well characterized...
about payal is exactly true .. this is hw happns in reality .. evn a grl frm a family having males too gt infactuated with guys who attract them .. wen dey step out of deir cocoons... and dat too at a age 22 ... surely dey will fall for guys who attract dem either by deir talks deir gestures or any other means..as dey are like small kid easily attracted towards fantasy...Very right. I strongly believe, if you keep ur kids too overprotected, they will tend to make more mistakes in attempt of adventuring things either too early or too late in their age.
nw about arnav hw true u said deir was no one to tell him about wat heart is for and except beating wat else game it play... emotionally with a person.. to gt connectd with ppl and wat it feels wen dey gt away...
in his blood more runs business than emotions which flow frm heart so he consider all as either to gain if u wish to gt it by hook or crook as its profitable and convinient or to lose permanently if its nt worth it for u...
exactly hw he did with lav and in future i guess with khushi respectively..
so exactly hw u potrayed his character...is superb and magnificent...
sme words for arnav:
Heart, Love, infactuation and attraction were never the words of my dictionary but the day i meet you my soul has started acknowledging this terms...
Damn Goood..I am stealing these words...
nw coming to khushi .. i was as clear about her character since last 2 or 3 updates...
as she is hw a grl should be who is been assaulted at a vry young age...
her view towards the society changes which is mainly man oriented and to survive oh no nt to survive but saying to live in such society u have to overpower this fears.. and show the toughest in you...
so i am exactly in line to say its very very very well shaped and influenced and relates with reality...
I am so glad that you think along these lines as I could feel some are r having hard time assuming she needs temper check..I hope I will do justice to her character the way she is in the upcoming chps...
sme thing more about this note bt later wen i reach tht point coz its about my spl.. interest 😉
Nw coming to the update...
speaking about the truth i hav imagined that arshi will meet in ar branch at borewali... and deir the blunders will flow ..
Honestly, I did think quite about it if Borivali or taj but settled with Taj as it fits more into the upcoming track
bt bt bt u are as i say unexpected and the bst writer.. so u turnd the point to taj...
and the way u jolted the strings .. was like out of my imagination...
the news channels being responsible and sensible taken a nice move to take a string operation rathr than just spitting the fire in news... (o guess dey hav to bear the cons.. in either of the case)
I hav botherd and evn mntiond it in my previous cmnt that asr if gts to knw about his nani's plan den hw he is unaware of khushi's blast..
bt u exactly put it in the correct place wer he gts to knw and evn the source (mohan)...
bt its his bad luck dat its a bit late ... that no one either mohan or aman reachd him on tym..No matter how powerful u r, u will face wrath of destiny and time..In fact I wrote a statement that I reserved to use in the next chapter which will explain them in simple line
so its adarsh singh raizada the b****y b*****d who is responsible for this cheap act of black mailing payal..
it was a superb climax types wen aman reachd on tym ... otherwise the consequences will be unbearable by kkg ... coz arnav i guess will definetely... can gt out of this mess ... bt bt who will save kkg frm arnav's wrath..
evn nw also i guess no one can save her as she stepped inside lion's den..
so arnav said to hav sme words with his wife ahem ahem...
nani just watchd the evil bean rathr than the entire which i guess nw will mislead her about his grandson..If Nani is watching them live, dont u think she will be dancing at her grandson's declaration in the media :)
Nw coming to my spl... interest(i am clearing it at first place ..😉😉 aman is just my spl. interest .. nvr and no prsn can take the place of arnav... evn hw grt dey are.. coz i breathe 4 him damn it and i need no othr reason to be love him.)
first wen in ur note u said aman takla .. i was haaaww.. and a bit pissed... bt later thank god its clarified .. i evn hav a face imagined to be aman.. wen i read dis and wen i imagined him bald ... o god ogod it was worst look he can hav..You have no idea how many are falling in love with AMan..I am trying hard to give him parallel lead...but I dont want him to be loved more than ASR...eventually Aman role will lessen as we concentrate on Arnav and Khushi love story...Sorry didnt mean to break ur heart
ao aman is just amazing man... dii u hav dne a grt justice with his character coz.. as a frd he is evrytym by arnav's side...
and dis is hw i think frds are..
i guess aman is one of a pillars to arnav's succes...
I hav a lot to say about his character bt i find shortage of the required words..
so i say he is a saviour to the great raizada...
a quote for aman:
When we honestly ask ourselves which person in our lives mean the most to us, we often find that it is those who, instead of giving advice, solutions, or cures, have chosen rather to share our pain and touch our wounds with a warm and tender hand. The friend who can be silent with us in a moment of despair or confusion, who can stay with us in an hour of grief and bereavement, who can tolerate not knowing, not curing, not healing and face with us the reality of our powerlessness, that is a friend who cares.
Henri J.M. Nouwen
Where do u get these quotes? This shows that you are an avid reader...Very knowledgeable you are...I still remember the special gift u sent me..Its stuck in my inbox and having enabled advanced security access to my Google account, my account is locked up, serves me right for not checking mails regularly..I just wanted you to know that I didnt forget you and will never :)
plz.. bear my free flowing thoughts..
Vasudha
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