An Arshi TS: In Search Of Love.LAST PART UPDATED

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neha_shah

@neha_shah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

😊 sorry for the late comment...nice start

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neha_shah

@neha_shah

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

amazing...always stand by each other...pure love always create miracles.

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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

het. Res. Pakka unres kardoongi.😊

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Now it's a proven fact that I am a late-lateef..!!!
Still, I expect you to forgive me the late appearance on the thread..!!
Coming to the updates, Sheetal track was the most frustating element in the show (for me) and here you have handled it beautifully..
Right from chap 1 till the last, I enjoyed reading every thing..
I had expected an ending where Sheetal would be kicked out of the house but no, you provided it a better and beautiful ending..!
So, NK is out there for her..
Also in the story, I loved Khushi's confidence in Arnav which was lacking in the show...
Somehow I think you should have been the one dealing with Sheetal track in the show rather than those good for nothing CVs...!!
The show would have been much better then..
Anyways, I'll just say that I really enjoyed reading the alternate Sheetal track and please keep the good work coming :)
I read your note where you said you won't be PMing about your further updates and I do agree to your explanation there..
Yet, can you please scrap me the thread link, every time you start something new?
Just the thread link?
For the updates, I'll stalk them :)
Don't want to miss anything..
Thanks for this amazing read..
Expecting more :D
take care
Love ya <3

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sushmita ghosh

@shalunsarun

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Nice ..exciting journey of love

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

wow... nice fiction i must say..

everythign so beautifully penned down...

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

updated my comment HERE

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Just discovered this story and liked it very much.

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Wow ..read allthe parts in one go
Loved it
So u made none villains

I just love khushi for het loving nature..caring..friendly ..stubborn..ordering..understanding a d what not everything to her arnavji
Arnav khushi r best

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Hetal,

The reason your writing touches the heart and the right chord is due to the fact that you wrote for your satisfaction and not for praise.

This as such a lovely interpretation of the Sheetal track. people are not always black and white, good and evil but have shades in them and are sometimes just a product of their circumstances and situation.

Sheetal did what she did out of her love and the desperation to be loved her means where wrong but that she realised that and the power of love and what true love is was showed that she was not bad.

I loved how you kept Khushi's character so true and perfect ...along with Arnav who supported his wife brilliantly...

She has also gone through a lot in life, but to raise her sister's child as her own is commendable.

I loved how there is a air or hope and positivity in the story, Khushi realising that NK is interested in Sheetal and has already started her planning.

It was great to see how everyone has accepted Arav. And I love that they are pregnant and soon to be parents...love how he takes her to the gynaecologist wanting to confirm it before letting everyone know...

I can not thank you enough for mentioning me in your A/N's I am humbled and touched at your thinking of me as a valued reader...hugs...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago