An Arshi TS: In Search Of Love.LAST PART UPDATED

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Very nice start. 👏

Sheetal has been very late to convince her love to Arnav.

This track is different from IPK, I like it.

I am eager to Aarav relation with Sheetal.

Waiting for read next part.

P. S. The banner is very cute

Edited by Javeria3991 - 12 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

me!!

Edited!

Loved the chapter. Even I never liked the Sheetal track😔 I am so happy that you are taking up that track:D

Oh so here Sheetal is actually in love with Arnav! And our ASR is crazy for his crazy wife as the show😳

Waiting for more! Love you<3

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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neha_shah

@neha_shah

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

nice starting...waiting for next update👍🏼🤗

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Res !!

Unres

Most of the post marriage tracks in IPK weren't dealt with properly and this one is the worst among those. I am glad you decided to reinvent it to give a proper closure.

Your style of narration is simple and clear and I truly appreciate such narration.

Ans I also like arnav and khushi who also think apart from being angry and OTT all the time.

Does aarav have a big role in this story? I would love to see that boy. He was the only respite in that otherwise boring track. Not to forget the amazing jalebiyaan khaayi scene.

Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

hmm so she came looking for arnie
sorry he is taken
so whats will your take be on this track
but what ever it is
will be fun to read
that much i can tell
this khushi when will she stop putting herself in jeopardy man

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Why she was waiting for eight years...I also hated sheetal track along with it sheetal and some what arnav...let's see how you tackle it...one thing is clear chatter box or insecure khushi is acceptable but a clown khush is big no...

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-Zesty-

@-Zesty-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

res...
will unres in a while :)

Hmm...So Sheetal here is in love with Arnav and not after is money?

Is Aarav her real Son here??

I too hated Sheetal track but I love reading story on this track, I am glad you started this one :)

Loved the starting ...and looking forward for the next one..

you tell my update is short then what is this??

😆

Edited by shona_arhilover - 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

I am glad for this story ...no one liked the Sheetal track and I think many of us would like a version...especially viz a viz the relationship between Khushi and Arnav...

Would love to read your version. Waiting. The start was nice. So here Aarav is really Sheetal's son ?

I like how Arnav defends Khushi and Khushi is Khushi defending any one who needs help and making it her responsibility to ensure their safety not thinking of her own safety...and then inviting them once she finds out they they are friends...

Good start and waiting for the next...