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Posted: 11 years ago
was really busy this week so couldn't reply to the chapters for me it was a 2 updates back to back but i would like to go slow on this and comment chapter wise...
Chapter 10
It was an awesome update they going for a party there small help for each other to bring them together but i think its very late ...khushi ia confusing and a complicated character she wants his happiness but canno see wid anyone else and she cant see him happy when he us wid her we all know she is a selfish egoistic brat and she clarified herself here love is something which is not for her ...arnav is a caring and a loving husband but he should also know that his own happiness matters too and sometimes letting go of love is beneficial for both of them ...both shared little moments here but the tension among themselves there relationship there guilt is clearly seen love might be there from arnav's side but i cant say it from khushi that she loves him as of now ...khushi is jealous of la and want him to be happy but also wants arnav to be taking care of her as well she has completely forgotten about arnav...la's character is in the initial stage but her relationship wid arnav is awesome ...payal is great too wid her jiju...khushi has kept me confused all times i dont think she would believe arnav if he says adi is the rapist...great update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 11
This was an awesome update and i totally accepted it and i somehow knew that she wouldn't believe arnav over aditya she is denial she claimed that she wants his happiness but she doesn't really care about him and the fact is that she is loving him out of guilt not out of love she is sorry for what she did but slapping him and putting blame on him again is unacceptable...i love arnav here but he is a spineless man he is a coward and he doesn't have any self respect and esteem for himself as well as his sister i understand he loves khushi but that lady has blamed him that he is lying abt and blaming a poor soul no one nd i mean it no brother who loves his sister could blame anyone apart from the culprit who has raped her ...arnav has given everything for his love and i guess now its high time to take back his love and avenge his sister's death leave khushi in whatever situation she is she herself start everything afresh sort things out but she doesn't believe arnav and i think she can never love him if u cant trust him he overrated his love and did everything he was capable now he should not bcoz that would be an insult to love itself he should learn to let go and move on wid anyone i guess la would be perfect now her character would be handy ...he should really leave khushi and learn to respect himself and care about himself as well ...khushi u rot in hell ...if she comes to know that what arnav has said is correct she would go back to arnav but this tym i really hope arnav is strong and doesn't accept her no matter what plz make dis happen bcoz she is taking things for granted...continue soon...cant wait to know whats gonna happen next...plz make arnav a different avatar a man on a mission to avenge his sisters death he should understand love is a part of life and not everything life is not always fairy tale u should make some tough decision...he needs to be the asr now the world knowshe should not degrade himself even in front of his so called lover...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh No! Khushi can't be dead! Scary teaser.
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Posted: 11 years ago
she dont belive him so sad..poor arnav hw he will prove that devil s adi oly?update soon ya😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
plzzz khushi for once in ur life time believe arnav
hope devil to expose soon
really want arshi to remain together
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockingchamp

chapter 11
This was an awesome update and i totally accepted it and i somehow knew that she wouldn't believe arnav over aditya she is denial she claimed that she wants his happiness but she doesn't really care about him and the fact is that she is loving him out of guilt not out of love she is sorry for what she did but slapping him and putting blame on him again is unacceptable...i love arnav here but he is a spineless man he is a coward and he doesn't have any self respect and esteem for himself as well as his sister i understand he loves khushi but that lady has blamed him that he is lying abt and blaming a poor soul no one nd i mean it no brother who loves his sister could blame anyone apart from the culprit who has raped her ...arnav has given everything for his love and i guess now its high time to take back his love and avenge his sister's death leave khushi in whatever situation she is she herself start everything afresh sort things out but she doesn't believe arnav and i think she can never love him if u cant trust him he overrated his love and did everything he was capable now he should not bcoz that would be an insult to love itself he should learn to let go and move on wid anyone i guess la would be perfect now her character would be handy ...he should really leave khushi and learn to respect himself and care about himself as well ...khushi u rot in hell ...if she comes to know that what arnav has said is correct she would go back to arnav but this tym i really hope arnav is strong and doesn't accept her no matter what plz make dis happen bcoz she is taking things for granted...continue soon...cant wait to know whats gonna happen next...plz make arnav a different avatar a man on a mission to avenge his sisters death he should understand love is a part of life and not everything life is not always fairy tale u should make some tough decision...he needs to be the asr now the world knowshe should not degrade himself even in front of his so called lover...




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totally agree with u.
its kushi who brought herself into such situation.
really wish arnav now should only think about his sister.


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Posted: 11 years ago
read all parts in one go.
what kushi had done n doing is totally wrong
i can say she never loved arnav.
she simply chose aditya over arnav. she is in love with aditya so she took his side.
if it is where is her so called lover when her name is defamed he can easily cut it n if he is genuine he would have married her.
what she did to revenge arnav is so sinful.
i really want arnav to stood for him atleast now.
go to the hell with kushi. she will rot in what she herself got in to.
i really think la is good match for arnav.plz show arnav to be different. he too have self esteem.
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser. waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
The teaser is really confusing...how did Arnav get so many FACTS wrong...or how can he prove he was right ...? Whom will Khushi believe now...? May be Ananya did go to Aditya willingly...but she might have been cheated or used by him ..

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