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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
khushi feeling sorry for arnav
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it
Amazing one
Arnav's indifference is hurting her a lot...
He is hurt but still his love and care for her is intact and Pure
Fabulously written
Thanks for pm
Well done

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
so much pain...

with all the problem, still Arnav is making sure Khushi is fine..taking care of all small things for her..

But why he is behaving so indifferent with her...

Now khushi is realising her mistake??

La, a new entry...


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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic part ..
thankx for da update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update!
well, I'll be true to you!
I feel here Khushi deserves the pain!
She had been too much!
Also, she is a confused soul!
Gets terribly upset at Arnav's ignorance & mocks his love brutally!
She is jealous of Lavanya! Good!

You have done a great job!
In most of the ff, itz reverse.
I mean you've put Khushi in Arnav's shoes & Arnav in Khushi's - the forgiving one!

And I love you for this!
I'm glad I came upon this amazing story!!
pls update next part soon!
can't wait!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
though it hurts to see that Arnav has withdrawn himself ... I cannot blame him for the way he is behaving ... 😭

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
I don't k ow how I am feeling

But very sad for my arshi

It is good that Arnav is ignoring khushi as her punishment but like Arnav said khushi is not a kid to do such thing..

How ever careful and intelligent we r some how by some one we will be cheated ..that is the same thing with khushi

Oh god what is the future of arshi together ? Will they be together?

Is Arnav gonna forgive khushi?
Even if he forgives is gonna receive her the way before he does??

God
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update..Khushi deserves this pain but not Arnav..he is very hurt and I hope Khushi realizes the truth soon..lavanya is coming..I hope she is a positive character and she helps Arnav here..thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav is protecting himself from further harm... That's why the indifference... I completely understand.. He is not Khushi's doormat...
Khushi unknowingly started realising her mistake..
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Posted: 11 years ago
If I were Arnav I would have done the same thing.

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