~I was a Virgin at this but now I am a Pro~ Kriyansh TS (Part 2 Pg 7) - Page 9

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

U attitude queen...u hv all the time to reply for evryone...y m i exception..???...
Hate u seriously...nd i mean it

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

Y cant i be the 1st one to comment..???..
I hate u so much my sexy...i absolutely hate u...
Anyways...let me say this 1st...i NEVER EVR KNEW THAT THE TITLE WUD BE RELATED TO REY...f*ck...i thot it was for kriya...gosh u r highly wonderful in keeping suspense...kiri nd riri..so damn amazing...the treatment dat blondie got for ordering the kriya ghai...hahaha...no comments...
Rey a nerd in schooldays...difficult to imagine...bt hey i did nd was successful too...
Body shots...best part andrew...nd his jealousy reactions...perfect...
I so knew it that claudia nd rey are fake...(proud of myself)...
Confession part...well done...slap after slap...i liked the most...
Overall...it was perfect...my...KAS"blush blush"

Originally posted by: shelly_Arsha

Damn!! This was "Fu**ing" Awsome 😛

Seriously! loved the jealousy in it the passion, love and the way it was written!
Claudia and rey's plan was a good one!
Love rey's jealousy and kriya being the hot girl made it even more awsome!
Riri and kiri hehe aww that was too cutee!

please pm me for any other works off urs!

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha

.So the title was related to rey... i thot that was for kriya

this was unpredictable...

.kiri nd riri..so damn amazing...the treatment dat blondie got for ordering the kriya ghai...hahaha
so all this... a plan

Body shots...was d best part ...nd his reactions

ufff... perfect

I so knew it that claudia nd rey are fake

Confession part..3 slaps😆 n one slap for using the word F infront of her...haha

yeah! thats our kiri's copyright

it was perfect

riri...m in love wid this character😳

itni jaldi kyun katm kar diya...

one of the best TS for me

keep writting such works

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ..Re..

Itna bada comment BRB. Flying to cloud 9😆

Yaar tumhe mere saare suspense mai se ek do ka idea to hamesha hota hai. Not fairsherlock Holmes👏😉

Ab mai hoon to great to hone hi hai. *smirk* *smirk*

Muah...phoolwati your phoolwata loves you. Merko kiss chahiye jo tum kal chod ke chali gayi thi mujhe☺️

Originally posted by: kreya204

Wwohaa!!! Grt story!!
Kriya's life was getting ol bitchy..n her sister entered...
God!! She uses d F word so much!!!
Lolzz! She even slapped rey for using it in front of her!!!
Okay!! Drunken kriya is d last thing u wud want to handle!!!
Ohhkaayy!! Did she really just punch dat gal on her nose!!!
Well no one orders kriya ghai!!!
What?!! Ol dis was a plan!!! I m so happy!!
Well rey did manage to handle d bimbo!!
Kriyansh love each oder!! Dey loved each oder bt d "rep" issue arrived!!!
Hey one thing! Was she so damn crazy or bored to complete d list?!!
Kriya kissed rey once n slapped more dan 3 tyms!!! Not fair dude!!!
Bt well dat was an awesome story!!! Thnx for pm!!!
U guyz really have grt ideas!!! Pm me for ur futher works too!!

Originally posted by: -spongy-

well i read both the parts together

and honestly it rocked.

i really like the story. and the characters are pole apart.

i am so so eager to red the further update.

new twists are coming our way.

excited

thanks for the PM

PS the title literally shocked me.. i was scared whether i should read it or not 😆

PPS. late comment ... EXAMS!