~I was a Virgin at this but now I am a Pro~ Kriyansh TS (Part 2 Pg 7) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
it was perfect and amazing ending...😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72


OMG this was sooo damn freaking awesomeee... 😳


They were school friends..and..kinda in Love since then.. OMG..aawww...

It was seriusly amazinggg...

The way you showed there jealousy towards each other... woahhh... I loved all that...


Then Finally confession..that kiss.. uff...


It was a compete mixture of sweetness..jealousy..love..and romance...

I loveddd ittt...

Amazinggg one Re... 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha



OMG this was sooo damn freaking awesomeee... 😳


They were school friends..and..kinda in Love since then.. OMG..aawww...

It was seriusly amazinggg...

The way you showed there jealousy towards each other... woahhh... I loved all that...


Then Finally confession..that kiss.. uff...


It was a compete mixture of sweetness..jealousy..love..and romance...

I loveddd ittt...

Amazinggg one Re... 😃



Thanks baby 😉 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
omg.. this was simply amazing...

a perfect story...🤗

loved it dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Superb Ending!!
Re.. Luv u!!
How can u manage to write such awesome fantastic Mind blowing thing..
U r a really awesome writer!!
loved how you showed Everything!!
Had never thought That Rey would be a nerdy guy..
DRUNKEN KRIA IS REALLY DANGEROUS!!
three slaps.. Poor Rey..
Rey really changed a lot!!
This chapter justified the title perfectly..
loved it so much..
KEEP WRITTING LYK THIS!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Wwohaa!!! Grt story!!
Kriya's life was getting ol bitchy..n her sister entered...
God!! She uses d F word so much!!!
Lolzz! She even slapped rey for using it in front of her!!!
Okay!! Drunken kriya is d last thing u wud want to handle!!!
Ohhkaayy!! Did she really just punch dat gal on her nose!!!
Well no one orders kriya ghai!!!
What?!! Ol dis was a plan!!! I m so happy!!
Well rey did manage to handle d bimbo!!
Kriyansh love each oder!! Dey loved each oder bt d "rep" issue arrived!!!
Hey one thing! Was she so damn crazy or bored to complete d list?!!
Kriya kissed rey once n slapped more dan 3 tyms!!! Not fair dude!!!
Bt well dat was an awesome story!!! Thnx for pm!!!
U guyz really have grt ideas!!! Pm me for ur futher works too!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
U attitude queen...u hv all the time to reply for evryone...y m i exception..???...
Hate u seriously...nd i mean it
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

.So the title was related to rey... i thot that was for kriya

this was unpredictable...

.kiri nd riri..so damn amazing...the treatment dat blondie got for ordering the kriya ghai...hahaha
so all this... a plan

Body shots...was d best part ...nd his reactions

ufff... perfect

I so knew it that claudia nd rey are fake

Confession part..3 slaps😆 n one slap for using the word F infront of her...haha

yeah! thats our kiri's copyright

it was perfect

riri...m in love wid this character😳

itni jaldi kyun katm kar diya...

one of the best TS for me

keep writting such works

thanks for the pm

Edited by khusbooluvarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: -Vaish-


With the first and second line you are embarrassing me... 😳

Okay so the schedule is set...

Tomorrow we will get an OS... ^_^

and for the second last line..

No need for hints... I have all the possibilities jotted here... *tapping my head*

Lap dance and personal strip tease had topped them hands down... ^_________________^

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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Damn!! This was "Fu**ing" Awsome 😛

Seriously! loved the jealousy in it the passion, love and the way it was written!
Claudia and rey's plan was a good one!
Love rey's jealousy and kriya being the hot girl made it even more awsome!
Riri and kiri hehe aww that was too cutee!

please pm me for any other works off urs!

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