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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Superb update...very well written Nidhi...I have a mixed feeling after reading the chapter...as first I loved her confession, his kiss and their closeness...but then reality stuck with that one phone call...that his girlfriend Lavanya is still there with him...this one thing change everything...he knows that she loves him and only him, knowing all this how can he be involved physically...I really don't understand, is it okay to love someone and sleep with someone else...I mean what is the reason behind it...is it due to what her family to him and he does not want to show them that he loves their daughter...or he thinks that she deserve something really better than him...but I am happy that he told her everything without hiding anything from her...and in the last he confessed his actual feelings for her...eagerly waiting for your next chapter.

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josnirmala

@josnirmala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

this story is like a small sweet wind loved it

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

"Well you're wrong Arnav, I chose you. It had to be you". This is the most important quote, which came as a reply to Arnav's confession of wanting the best for her, happiness and deep love.

I have never read about a kiss like the one they shared. It's fire, desire, and again and always love. You wrote this scene brilliantly, portraying their feelings and needs all together.

Even I, like Khushi, forgot all about Lavanya. And Khushi being the awesome person that she is, never wanted to do that to a woman because she knows what it means to have a broken heart, the way she felt that night years ago. A llshe wanted is to know Arnav's decision and let him handle what he has, yet she could not help but feel hurt that Arnav is in a relationship with another woman and cared for her too.

I loved Arnav's move when he wanted them to talk and clear things; he tried and he succeeded in making her listen to him, then explained Lavanya's situation for Khushi though Khushi was making it hard for him.

Arnav is such an understanding guy; even when she accused him with that 'friends with benefits' he apologised instead of being mad at her.

You show the inside of Arnav and Khushi very well that I don't want to judge either of them or blame them. Hats off for this.

The dialogues here are simply amazing; they deeply touched my heart when Khushi said that she waited for long, when Arnav siad that he never ignored what they have and he won't ever, when Arnav said that she's the first and the last and when he confessed his love verbally.

For me, this SS is more emotional than your other stories.

Shaimaa.

Edited by bridgeofdreams - 11 years ago

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

congrats for the new thread !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i m in love with this story...

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Congrats on the new thread
Really good chapter

At least they got to talk about Lav
Which was needed before they went forward

I hope they can go forward slowly

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Jay

@jduke

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Good Arnav clarified his relationship status with Lavanya. Kushi might be upset to know all this but she will come out of this soon. Finally he confessed :). I hope Lavanya is not love with Arnav and there won't be anymore MU. Thanks for PM.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

congrats for the new thread !!! 😃

amazing update.. well feels arnav is right its not gonna be good to do break up on phone.. khushi is and khushi had been always his love.. it is only that he used to avoid getting in relation with her because he felt under obligations of her family.. but now when he have come across clear signals from khushi who is not ready to be with anybody else than him.. he have done what he needed to do.. he confessed his love.. he is being honest to khushi.. hope khushi doesn't make things complicated by having feelings for lavanya as she is feels that she can build her life on others unhappiness.. loved the update..

thanks for mail 😊

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

nidhi ur update just made me cry. it was so emotional but still very beautifully written!

i think i can try to understand arnav's explication about the whole thing about lavanya and i really appreciate him trying to be the gentleman and not breaking up with her on the phone but still if he loved khushi all his life then how could he have been without someone else! its just my view! if u really love someone then how can you go out with someone else. its like there always be a comparison on that person's side! maybe like arnav was doing to lavanya, comparing her and wat he feels for khushi!

my heart just went out for khushi, arnav may not be harboring romantic thoughts about lavanya but still they were in a relationship and here he was kissing khushi! i think its unfair to both ladies. because even at the end where he confessed his love, khushi will not be able to savor that moment to the perfection but somewhere arnav is still betraying lavanya and khushi too is participating to some extent.

its such a complicated situation and this makes me want to pull out my hair in frustration because my best friend went through the same situation.

nevertheless nidhi this was one of a kind update and i loved it sooo much. very eagerly waiting for the next chapter

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KeerthiRajkumar

@KeerthiRajkumar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

nice update
such a long update
i just loved it
😊 😛

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Sooo happy you are back with an update...really missed my chi-town friend. Hope you are staying warm, can't wait for spring which seems so far away. Was in Chicago a few weeks when it was the coldest and ended going back from the hotel to work and nothing else. Its cold here in NJ but nothing compared to where you are.

Love the up, down and hopefully up in the story. At least they both are aware of their feelings after coming close to losing control outside and the phone interruption gave Arnav a wake up call. Lavanya, she always tends to come in the way LOL. Well hopefully he can break up with in person and they can move on. But am Khushi might make that tough. And OMG the thrilling part of the story...he says I love you...simply awesome!!!!

Can't wait for the next update...hopefully its soon!

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