Possessive Love of SuperStar ASR* Part(2) up *4/mar

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Mehreen Bushra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

interesting teaser...

waiting for d update...

nd how was ur exam?

all d best for tmrw...👍🏼

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Anya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

one and only one word - INTERESTING...

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Wow nice precap
One & only ASR
Awesome
Pls update soon

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Shalu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Wow cant wait fr update now plz update soon

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Hi guys,
Thnk you so much for your amazing response..
Pls give your support to this story..
Also, see the PM note below...

Here's the first part. This is JUST introduction to where the character stands.

PART (1)

"Let's welcome our first participant of our first day - Khushi Kumari Gupta with her choreo partner Salman Yusuf Khan..." announced Kapil, the host.

Khushi was talking to her mom; her phone on speaker.

GARIMA: - Don't be nervous beta.. I know you'll give your best..
Just remember you're going one step ahead from what you were before. Your competition is with yourself, not with other Participants out there. And its NORMAL to be NERVOUS when you're performing for first time for NORMAL HUMANS..
ALL THE BEST.. mara aashirvaad tari sathe chhe..(My blessings are with you..)

Salman, too, reassured her, "Your first performance is your Gujrati Garba style Only. So, chillax.."

KHUSHI'S COSTUME

They danced on the song "Nagada" from "Ramleela"..
{I'm not describing it as its not necessary in our storyline}

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AT MUMBAI AIRPORT

Reporters had crowded over there along with fans to catch glimpse of 'The Superstar ASR'.

ASR came out of Airport wearing his sunglasses..
He was looking handsome while his face was angry...
But as soon as he reached out, he smirked. Afterall, this is his profession, Acting? Right?

The Reporters started asking questions to him..
"Any film, currently?"

"Well, I'm made for films only!!" ASR replied, smirk not leaving his face..

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AT JDJ SETS

KARAN JOHAR- The performance was totally fabulous. Here, our special guest is Gujrati, too. Our Great Rising Star.. Let's ask what she felt.."

MADHUBALA - The performance was very nice.. I mean, I can't believe she's a non-Dancer.. I've just one word, in Karan Sir's style, "batameez performance"
Everyone cheered up at this..

When karan spoke, "I never knew Madhu was a thief"

Everyone started looking at him..
When Kapil commented, "Looks like Our Director Sahab has gone mad. Don't worry Madhubalaji, we believe you.."

Everyone again had their share of laughter..

When Karan said, "You'll understand this when someone will come & steal your laughter power.. Come on Yaar. She already commented batameez performance, now what should I tell her?"
Again laughter errupted.
******

"Any message for your fans?" Asked one reporter, seductively..
ASR wasn't naive to not understand this..

He moved towards her, took her hand & kissed on her palms..
"Hey Sexy" saying this, he winked at her..
"As for my fans, I love you all for giving me your support..
I'll be up in a show soon as per your demand.
Your One &Only ASR"
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SCORE BOARD

Karan Johar 10
Madhuri Dixit 10
Remo D'Souza 9

MADHUBALA (standing up from her place)
"And from my side-"
Till then, she reached stage..
She hugged Khushi tightly..
"I loved your performance very much.. I'm not getting partial but I've an intuition you will win..! All the best!"

Kapil - so, any special thing about Khushi?

Salman - She's a great fan of ASR.. She copies his name dialogue very well.."

Everyone started hooting for Khushi while Madhu, too, nudged her to speak up..

Finally Khushi in full to ASR style, spoke,
"One & Only ASR"

MADHU: oh my my! You're too! Imean I can't express! You were sounding just like him!" Sequealed Madhu, too excited..

*******

I know guys, this was not upto mark..
But I had not expressed the relations beforehand..

PRECAP->
"I left D3 coz i can't concentrate on two shows along with Jhalak.. And as far as my current shiw is concerned, I'm not going to quit it.." Replied Khushi to her interviewer..Khushi dancing around ASR on the wordings of "Kamli"

I hope you like precap...
If yes, then press like &comment...
I'll try to post second part before my break...

FOR PM, SEE BELOW...

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

-BUDDY THIS ACCOUNT FOR PMs-NO PMS WILL BE SENT FROM MAIN ACCOUNTIt becomes complicated to PM from Main Account...So, buddy This Account For FUTURE PMS...

Edited by ..Neha..PM - 11 years ago

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

**res**

****unres****

first comment given after the update by
"one and only RUCHI DI" 🤪

update was just awesomee...

but chotasa tha <pout>

well ilike nagada...

ASR hottt... 😉

waiting fr kamli lolz...

but ek baat samajh nahi aayi madhu kya kar rahi thi uder???

Update soon...

n have u noticed??

i became goldieee

party time 👏

Edited by marium-zamamii - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

so it started with khushi and ASR

she did her first performance on JDJ

and ASR came didnt he

wow so this was interesting

cant wait for more

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Sajinabi

@saj111

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Nehaaa abb now I can't use Karan Johar's dialogue batameez chapter Whistle

, but all I can say is Fantastic chapter Neha and really loved d begining of dis FF You'Re The Best

Hahahahahaha both d judges were pulling each others leg and really wonder wat Karan Johar said "You'll understand this when someone will come & steal your laughter power.. was it really true or just part of leg pulling .

Nevertherless loved dat Khushi could imitate ASR's dailogue sooo well and now d pre-cape seems alll HOT Neha and can't wait for nxt chapter asap. Thanks 4d pm

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Neha

@..Neha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: marium-zamamii
**res**

****unres****

first comment given after the update by
"one and only RUCHI DI" 🤪

update was just awesomee...

but chotasa tha <pout>

well ilike nagada...

ASR hottt... 😉

waiting fr kamli lolz...

but ek baat samajh nahi aayi madhu kya kar rahi thi uder???

Update soon...

n have u noticed??

i became goldieee

party time 👏

You rhymed it with "one & only ASR" 😆
Told you, you're a creative!

Madhu is acting in Films & is there as special guest..
Will reveal more later...

Yup.. Di..
Congrats for becoming Goldie...
Chalo isi Khushi mein I'll post JOLP update soon..
Its your fav, right?