ArHi OS : Falling For Mr. Raizada! Concluding Part Page 17 --Removed-- - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg can't wait for the next part😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...
Arshi are cute here..
Waiting for nxt one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was so so good, was anticipating the best, cutest, most romantic confession and realised it stopped at the best part 🄺 hope u update soon, still waiting with anticipation 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it very much..waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fish... laila & Majnu... OMG OMG OMG S-ji 🤣🤣

These line were the highlights...

So they were caught kissing each other by Khushi's father...

Gosh her father should have left... he should have give them some privacy *wink*

So waiting for the propose


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishti_17

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Jiii, u do not end it over there.. 🄺 Mammaaa... They both have such strong feelings for each other but still kept away.. Awww.. Khushi so wanted to confess and is all heartbroken which will soon turn into a surprise... U better put up the next partwa soon..😈


Will update on Thursday :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RizArshi

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Stalking Mr. Raizada

It was uber cute. I thought Khushi was dreaming but it was a blood sucking mosquito. Bad bad mosquito. I bet the mosquito had Anjali's aatma in it šŸ˜† I loved both Arnav and Khushi. They were so cute. Khushi made such an innocent excuse. But I guess Khushi has a very cool dad who readily bought her excuse. The ending again was very cute. Loved it

Falling for Mr. Raizada

This one was very sweet. Arnav and Khushi are still as cute as they were during their school days. Loved the Laila and Majnu wala excuses. They were so stupid šŸ˜›

I felt bad for Khushi. Mr. Raizada better make it up to her. I loved the way Arnav and Khushi's feelings for each other were described. They both love each other but the fear of rejection is stopping them from confessing. But not anymore. Loved the gifts they have chosen for each other. Loved NK and Lavanya too. It was a lovely read. I will be waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the PM :)


hahaha I know right.. I still laugh at the excuse of Khushi in the first part...
and few of the readers where like, is this your real life incident? 😲

Thank you Riz, will update the last part on thursday!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vandana.sagar


I loved it jiji...it was so well ...feel good and sweet.

So time has passed from that play they did together and now they left it there taking with them all the memories of that first kiss. And they are now in college but don't really know each other but he gets this feeling on seeing her making him feel something ...

I loved their choices for their gifts and before that the excuses they had to make to get thrown out of class.

I love the significance of their gifts. Both in the same phase ...from stalking love to silent love..both unsure of what the other one feels and unsure of what their feelings for the other meant mean but they know they have strong feelings ...and now waiting for the party for them to finally meet each other again and let sparks fly once again...for him to see her dressed to kill for her to realise this was a plan and for them to confess their feelings and over their fear of rejection and get ready to create new memories...

I am glad they have NK and Lavanya to ensure that they meet and to keep them on track...wait to read the next part.


Thanks Vandy...
I was little confused in the start..but now all good..
Your comment really made me happy..now off to write the next part..Yikes!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

OMG ā¤ļø u called me hyper ...well u and Pallu ... have no freaking idea how hyper I am right now !! 🤣


I make u smile ... am happy 😳 ... I make u frown ... when 😲 ... temme abt it okay !! 😃

and this OS ... okay I went and read Stalking Raizada and then came here !! 😊

Jiji pls dnt temme ur dad reacted so cool seeing ur first kiss !! šŸ˜‰ I cant imagine a Mallu dad who is so cool ... mine wud have scared the death out of me !!

but I loved the prequel ... it ws so cute ... all the cutness of first love portrayed so well !! 😊

Blood suckin macchar !! šŸ˜† and the blood bank ... that moment ws so Khushi !! šŸ˜† reminded me of Arshi sagaai whr she totally killed the romance saying it could be Aman calling !! šŸ˜†

and now the second part ... dammit they both remember each other !!

idiots .. cant they just talkto each other and come to their love bubble instead of having all tht crazy eye sex !! šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†

I love Khushi's spunk and Arnav's chilled out attitude here !! 😳

simply hell yes am waiting for the next part now ... its gonna be super fun seeing them try to make each other remember their school love when either of them havent forgotten it !! šŸ˜‰

and yes I love reading OSes .. that ends well... I will kill u if u give me tragedies !! 🄱

I love u both so much ... srsly u and Pallu ... u guys just made my day ... big tyt hugsss ā¤ļø

thats me looking at my phone and reading it and my happy smile 😊


and then the rest of my reactions ... I would have spinned u both as tight as I Jack spinned Rose šŸ˜‰ or celebrated like hw when Gryffindor wins a quidditch match !! šŸ˜‰ and then my tytest hugs !!!





Hyper, thats what you are..lol

And yes you make me frown with your fb statuses...hahaha..
How do you manage to watch so many daily soaps...? And types huge statuses on the same?

And Dinesha...like my other few readers, you too misunderweared me...This story is fictional and there's no way My Achan should allow me to kiss a boy in public lol..

Hugs to you too...and no tragedies...all happys and endings...šŸ˜‰

Love the last GIf the most...sweetest hug ever..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Jiji hot hot update do na..


Both love each other ..

Both stare at each other pagal cnfess nai krte

I hope dis valentine day bring some ā˜ŗļø dis also in d update


I cant...its too hot in Kochi..šŸ˜†

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