ArHi OS : Falling For Mr. Raizada! Concluding Part Page 17 --Removed--

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Please dont bother to PM me asking for the blog link. Because I dont have one!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

OMG ❤️ u called me hyper ...well u and Pallu ... have no freaking idea how hyper I am right now !! 🤣


I make u smile ... am happy 😳 ... I make u frown ... when 😲 ... temme abt it okay !! 😃

and this OS ... okay I went and read Stalking Raizada and then came here !! 😊

Jiji pls dnt temme ur dad reacted so cool seeing ur first kiss !! 😉 I cant imagine a Mallu dad who is so cool ... mine wud have scared the death out of me !!

but I loved the prequel ... it ws so cute ... all the cutness of first love portrayed so well !! 😊

Blood suckin macchar !! 😆 and the blood bank ... that moment ws so Khushi !! 😆 reminded me of Arshi sagaai whr she totally killed the romance saying it could be Aman calling !! 😆

and now the second part ... dammit they both remember each other !!

idiots .. cant they just talkto each other and come to their love bubble instead of having all tht crazy eye sex !! 😉 😆

I love Khushi's spunk and Arnav's chilled out attitude here !! 😳

simply hell yes am waiting for the next part now ... its gonna be super fun seeing them try to make each other remember their school love when either of them havent forgotten it !! 😉

and yes I love reading OSes .. that ends well... I will kill u if u give me tragedies !! 🥱

I love u both so much ... srsly u and Pallu ... u guys just made my day ... big tyt hugsss ❤️

thats me looking at my phone and reading it and my happy smile 😊


and then the rest of my reactions ... I would have spinned u both as tight as I Jack spinned Rose 😉 or celebrated like hw when Gryffindor wins a quidditch match !! 😉 and then my tytest hugs !!!




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PYAAR KIYA TOH DARNA KYA JIJI JI! 😉 😆

Will be back wit my comment soon!
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Jiii, u do not end it over there.. 🥺 Mammaaa... They both have such strong feelings for each other but still kept away.. Awww.. Khushi so wanted to confess and is all heartbroken which will soon turn into a surprise... U better put up the next partwa soon..😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vichitra love...
God...why did you stoped here...
Ok.will wait for next part...
Hmmm...so how;why & when they seprated ???
But now they realy should meet once again...
Edited by Kinu22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really cute...can;t wait read rest :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was fantastic.. 😃
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That was really good, pls update the next chapter soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice awesome OS.. Superb..
updates next part soon..
thanks for sharing
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Stalking Mr. Raizada

It was uber cute. I thought Khushi was dreaming but it was a blood sucking mosquito. Bad bad mosquito. I bet the mosquito had Anjali's aatma in it 😆 I loved both Arnav and Khushi. They were so cute. Khushi made such an innocent excuse. But I guess Khushi has a very cool dad who readily bought her excuse. The ending again was very cute. Loved it

Falling for Mr. Raizada

This one was very sweet. Arnav and Khushi are still as cute as they were during their school days. Loved the Laila and Majnu wala excuses. They were so stupid 😛

I felt bad for Khushi. Mr. Raizada better make it up to her. I loved the way Arnav and Khushi's feelings for each other were described. They both love each other but the fear of rejection is stopping them from confessing. But not anymore. Loved the gifts they have chosen for each other. Loved NK and Lavanya too. It was a lovely read. I will be waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the PM :)
Edited by RizArshi - 11 years ago

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