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Posted: 11 years ago
Great part ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc part...kriya wants to be as strong as she can to save herself from breakdown...i really dnt want kriya to get hurt...
Rey is selfish...lets c..what is store in
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor kria lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazinggg part👏
y s kria hiding her talent😕
and disgusting day😕
old kria ghai😲😕
m very much excited to know abt d reason😳
finally she agreed to b rey's dance partner😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
Kria rey dancing together.
Waiting for it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
the chapter was good... finally kriya want all to forget that why she dance but now
their friends have came to know about her dance and rey do not have any partner
for that competition request kriya to be he dance partner after lot of magnify she agreed...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update but bahut chotu sa tha...
Even I want to know y kriya doesn't want dance in front of everyone..
waiting for d next update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Inna chutu sa update!!
koi ni.. It was awesome as ever!!
kria waiting for Rey to excute his plan.. Me also waiting!!;)
Kria dance out in front of Reyz frndzz..
kr dancing couple.. Waiting eagerly!!
update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing...
kria dont want to show her dancing talent..
rey asked kria to join the group...
kria hesitated but accepted...
kriyaansh dance karenge ek saat...
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sorry about the length of the last update. It didn't even cross 400 words . :p Sorry about that , but have my exams going. That is why.

Part 7

I didn't want to take things forward at a fast pace , so I decided to be normal with her. It had been a week since we were friends .

We had our rehearsals early morning. So we reached the rehearsal hall , and we saw Kria dance. Honestly , it was a treat to watch her dance. She was a dancing princess , but I was confused why didn't she show her talent to others?

All complimented her for her dance. She gave them a small smile , and went. Suddenly I realized I needed a dance partner , and who could be much better than kria , plus with this I could go forward with my plan.

I called her. She turned. Out of curiosity I asked her.

"Why do you hide your dancing talent?"

"I don't hide it rey , I just don't like showing it. If I would have to hide it from people , I would have never revealed to you that I was the girl you danced with that day."

"Erm , but I really think you hide it , like some secret. Anyways , kria I need your favour."

"My? What?"

"Listen , I need a dance partner for a competition , Sharon is dancing with swayam , and other girls don't want to participate , just this one favor kria , please?"

"Rey I don't.."

"If you say No , this means you are hiding your dance."

"Okay."

I smiled in victory.

"Rehearsal hall , sham ko?"

"Fine. Now can I go?"

"Sure!"

---

I was waiting for her in the rehearsal hall , she was late , I went to find her , and saw her in a classroom.

"Dad , just once? Please?"

There was a sort of desperation in her voice , mixed with pain. Her dad probably cut the call , and she stared at the phone. I heard sob , but she controlled it. She turned and saw me , she was shocked.

"Rey?"

"Uh , you were late. Everything fine?"

She nods. But she didn't look fine. She was upset . And I don't know why I just wanted to hug her . But I didn't. Why should I? She did look adorable , with her nose turned red , but I had never seen her upset. Even when my gang had done her ragging. And it was disturbing to see her in that state.

No! I didn't have feelings for her. I mean who wouldn't find it disturbing to see such a strong girl , be upset .

"Shall we go?"

I nod , and we went.

---

Kria's P.O.V

I was speaking to my dad. I just wanted to meet him once. Didn't I deserve at least that much attention from him? Since that day , he had never met me , and he hardly spoke to me. It pained , but I was used to it .

Tomorrow was father's day , and I wanted to meet him , just for an hour. He didn't even reply , and just cut the call. I don't know why I sobbed. But I controlled it , kria ghai is not a person to cry over such issues. You have yourself for your support , you don't need anyone.

I turned to see rey. I was shocked.

"Rey?"

"Uh , you were late. Everything fine?"

For a second I had thought it was a part of his plan. But , no it wasn't . Cause in this one week I had noticed one thing , that rey wasn't a bad human being. He just had an elephant size ego and double the size of an elephant reputation of being a bad boy to be maintained.

But that does not mean , I was soft towards him. No! I knew he wants to take revenge. But now his expressions were genuine. He was in deep thoughts , and stared at my nose , what was so intresting in it?

"Shall we go?"

I asked him , and he nods. We went.

---

Hope you all liked it.

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Note.

Guys , are my writings so bad that the reviews don't cross even 4 pages? Be very honest if you like it or not. I won't mind , cause I do need to know the problem in my writing. How will I improve , if I don't even know what's wrong? So please tell me , and if you like my writing please review. Reviews mean a lot , and it is upsetting not to see them. The Life OS reviews were VERY DISSAPOINTING , and even the last two updates reviews. Next update after page 34.

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