Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23)

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Fantastic update...

wow!! Their relationship has closed1 more mil stone- kissing hugging is part of their life 😳

like the thoughts of buaji how she is admiring her daughter and commendable the way kkhushi is handling breakfast dinner arrangements like a expert..The maturity she showed the way she had asked buaji about Arnav's parents..
how she understood why trusting is a problem for Arnav and her resolve to take away his all insecurities..
she cut the interaction to her friends because Arnav like when she waits for him and she spends her off day with him..tThank god itna to convey kiya Arnav nE. ..

like the way she Iis taking care of his things how hard time he gave her...The way she is in love with her husband is outstanding. ..hope he realised it soon. .

Arnav can't refuse her wishes. .that's great.

The bday seems to be a major turningpoint ...tThe way Arnav lost himself...iguess slowly but steadily his walls are breaking ..The way he asked and command khushi DONTSAY NO ..

but again a CLIFFHANGER

hope khushi surprised him by her confession..by telling him what she feels for him

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anyafarsi

@anyafarsi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Wonderful chapter...their relation is progressing...
Pls update d nxt chapter soon...

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Now that's what I call valentine gift!!

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lika63

@lika63

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

tanq for pm.v.v nice update.

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kanika

@kank_dah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

it was fabulous.khushi adjusting herself in her married life,understanding arnav.khushi getting to know the truth of sujata from bua,helped khushi to better understand the fears,behaviour of arnav.innocent khushi trying to save her husband time as he was running late made her forget their morning ritual.,after lot of thoughts she got to know why arnav was pissed off at her,so cute.arnav taking holiday for khushi specially shows his immense love towards her.i guess arnav would be getting one of the best birthday gift from khushi.though I didn't like khushi not making an effort to maintain nd strengthen her friendship with lavanya nd rishab.i hope she is able to make arnav understand that those friends of her had been her support system till now.well written.continue soon

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Micha1005

@Micha1005

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

your updates just made a perfect start to my day today. it was sooo real it was like i am standing under an umbrella watching them haha. very perfect update dear. keep it up XXX

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sachdevaridhima

@sachdevaridhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Awsm loved it ...thanx for the pm

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

So finally you updated on Valentines day. Thanks for the lovely update.

So Khushi and Arnav have started taking their marriage ahead one step at a time. They have started taking baby steps in sharing physical intimacy too with Khushi looking forward to their passionate kisses and hugs. It is good that Buaji has told Khushi the whole truth of Sujata and Sumer and Arnav's relationship. Khushi needed to know this truth way before but at least now she understands Arnav in a much better manner. She can understand why Arnav had the insecurities and the fear of betrayal. And Khushi being Khushi has vowed to fill Arnav's life with happiness and love. Khushi is right. With her love and constant support, Arnav will get over his insecurities and will learn to trust himself and her and their relationship.

Arnav on his part is starting to trust Khushi in his own small way. He has not kept any tabs on her and always came to visit her with his prior notice, so that means he is somewhere trusting her that she wouldn't leave him midway. And he is happy with the way their physical relationship has blossomed and started taking its place in their lives. Arnav becomes grumpy when he misses the chance to kiss Khushi - Guy is full on in love with Khushi and now wants the whole deal.

I loved the way you have woven the last paragraph. The desire and the need to be one is too much in Arnav and he can't wait now to make Khushi his wife in the truest sense. The last sentence of Arnav 'Don't say no' tells how much he wants to have Khushi love him back. And Khushi is also willing to take the relationship further. Now looking forward to the next update. You have stopped the update at a crucial point so hopefully you will update soon. Can't wait for the next update. Lovely writing. The more I read the updates, I more I admire your writing skills. Each update is different and the twists are very different and unpredictable. Beautiful job.