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Posted: 11 years ago

Woohooo we got a valentine update

Now what can be better than that

I know you alredy said we will get the update on V day but this just makes it that much more fun

So here is hoping that arhi just move forward

And not back again

Hope they made some progress there

Also things will be back on track for them

Well this is arhi we are talking about right

With them you never know what will happen

What with his past and her confusion about the same

But they will make it through am sure

Hopefully it shouldn't take me too long

So lets get down to it shall we

Aha I see there is comeback of buaji and I hope bade papa too

Not that I don't want arhi scenes but its nice to know about their family too

And what with her bade papa getting outta operation recently how is he faring

Buaji your titaliya will hover only

She cares for all peeps in this house aww bless

Wow I think she is such a cute bahu for sure

Caring for her family the way she is

Hope through this her hubby can see that she is nothing like his mother

Well it will take him time to trust her but he has to believe her too

Trust is a two way street right

Okay musnt talk about all these serious things for now

Aww they are getting along I see

That's good news for us all

And she is taking over her duties as the DIL of the house too

Am sure it couldn't have been easy for her in the beginning to take over this

But she sure has learned and fast

What would khushi have done without her buaji

Well with time and circumstances we all change

Before she was just the daughter of the house

Now she is the bahu

I know that didn't change much but now she has more responsibilities

Which she seems to be taking care of

After all its now her house too

It was before but now there is the added incentive too

We all change when we get married

Though it is the same house for her and same peeps too but there are changes too

Now its her responsibility to take care of her house and her family they are now official hers

No one can talk about her staying here without any relationship now

Hawww that was funny but so true too am sure

So it seems khushi is settling in well with her old family but in a new role

And am glad about that for sure

She has started waking up early which is something big man for khushi

Well her hubby wakes up way too early so I doubt she can wake up before him

Unless of course she don't go to sleep

But she is getting there

And there is no rule that you gotta make up before your hubby

As long as you wake up and be with him before he goes for work

Yup buaji sure got it right

All this waking up early is due to him only

Well of course she would see that

Khushi wants to spend more time with her hubby in their house

And this is the best way to go about it

I know right love makes the world go around

So this is nothing

Ahhh yes her cooking skills well she can brush up on those slowly

I still cant forget her first rasoi man

God that was such disaster but it was cute nonetheless

Aww her bade papa is so sweet

He doesn't want his laddoo to over work herself

And why not she is his little darling

I just love their relationship

They are pretty close aint they

Why would arnie or buaji have a problem with her having BF with you guys

But it sure was funny him asking that of them

I like this domesticity of it all man

I know right buaji

But then you know how much fond he is of khushi

So he just cant see her eating last or doing so much work

That was interesting comparison from buaji

But she is right in thinking that her brother thinking that his laddoo is made to slave over domestic matters

Good only khushi could have made her bade papa see sense

Well you cant blame him for getting so touchy

She is his daughter after all

And he just doesn't like to see her like that

He wont be able to see all this

For him khushi will be the little girl

It is always the case for father and he is no less

But I must say am glad she is taking the initiative to get to know her hubby

And also take care of him and pamper him too

He really needs that don't he

Love this insight by buaji into arhi relationship

She is maturing for sure in his love for sure and that is gonna help her know her hubby more

Hmmm whats with the cloth around her neck

Are we hiding anything are we khushi like a love bite for example dear

I wonder if that's the case or not

Once again I agree with buaji

They are good together aint they

Him being all silent time and her injecting some happiness into his life

Ahhh it seems that khushi consulted her buaji on their relationship

Well she did need some help from an elder

And who better than her buaji

She is her mother and also bua saas naa

Acha it is to do with his past

Well she has to know just enough to try to understand why her hubby is the way he is

And she did it without poking her nose in their private affair

Well she needs to know more about her deceased saas if she wants to understand her hubby and why he is the way he is

She cant ask bade papa she wont be comfortable

And hubby dearest is outta the question

Because had he wanted to tell his bride that he woukd have done so

And buaji is right how will he tell his wife about his scheming mother

Yup she is trying to get to know her hubby better

So she knows what to do and what not to do with him

He isn't easy to figure out either so she does need help there

Well am glad she didn't straight out ask buaji what happened

Because what happens between arhi stays between them

That much khushi knows not to do

She may have been innocent but even she knows that she cant tell her marital problems even if it is to her buaji

Cause god forbid if arnie gotta know about this well there will be hell to pay right

But yes like I have been saying she does need to know of the basic facts of her hubby past so she can understand him better and know how to deal with him too

Am glad someone told her about her now deceased sasuma and what she did to both father and son

And how that affected her hubby arnav

She trapped her bade papa man this is even worse than I thought

So she never loved her bade papa was it just for money she married him or something

Not only did she ruin her hubby life but her son's too

Oh my god no wonder arnie is so insecure

And he was so mad at her when he saw her hugging rishu

He was just reminded of his mother affairs

And was thinking that history is repeating itself with him now

That woman deeds it seems are never ending

And she really out arnie through so much

Ahhh well this explains things better with arnie

Why he is the way he is and his trust issues

That woman didn't leave any chances for father son to reconcile she poisoned her arnav against his dad

God the list seems to be endless what she did to ruin arnav and his trust on others

Man she sure did a right number on arnie

And the repercussions of what she did still stand

So much so that arnav isn't able to trust his wife

And thinks that she like his mother might betray him

Man that woman was rotten through and through

That's all I can say about her

Which is the least mean thing I can say about her

So buaji couldn't see her brother

She kept all his relations away from him didn't she

Wow this tale was really sad for sure

Also it explains a lot about arnie

Oh my that was horrific past for sure

Wonder if there is more to what that woman did

Well those things only her hubby can tell

As they happened with him

Man I so feel for arnie there

Poor thing what he got for mother man

Well any wife would react like that after coming to terms with her hubby past

Man that woman gosh even the genteel khushi reacted to her badly

That means she was mean horrible enough yaar

Yup that she is now thank god for that

Now arnie has someone looking out for him too so cute

Khushi can be mothering enough

And now that she knows of the facts about his sad and lonely childhood she is bound to pay more attention to her hubby

He really does need it for sure

Oh no he loves her but yes not very demonstrative

Well I guess not PDA of that love for sure

He still isn't too sure about love and all

Its new to him naa

And with his past still clouding his present well of course it seems that arnie don't love her

When that clearly isn't the case

Ahhh thank god buaji has enough experience to see that though arnie may not demonstrate and show he loves his wife but there is no denying that he feels strongly for her

Why else would he be loathe to let her go

Or the whole hugging rishu incident hurt him so much

He does have something that he might not show to the world but he certainly does to his wife

Otherwise she wouldn't be happy with her marriage naa

And they would know wont they if she wasn't happy

Uff bade papa bhi naa

He will not give up grumbling about his laddoo

And I hope not either

This just goes to show how much he loves his laddoo

And I rather it not change either

Whats with her hubby now I wonder

Why is he being so how do I say it cutting to her

Whats bothering her hubby now

Aww I just love these little things she does for him

You know if they weren't with their family what would be perfect her making him wear the tie

And he and that time tease his wife

Haiyye that scene I would love to read

Ufff ab inhe kya hua hai

Aise ukhde ukhde kahe hain ji

Is it just me but when he behaves like that all I can think of is to pull his cheeks

Okay must be just me for sure

Why is he so moody now

He sometimes can be worse than pregnant women with his mood swings

But I rather have him like this only

Maybe that's what he did want

Problem yeh hai ki he wont say it

But wants you to know what he wants

So he did want that scene to happen that I wanted to happen

But guess she is shy to do that with family present

Okay maybe it aint that

But whats got him in such twist I wonder

Hmmm he does confuse her and me

Wonder what was really getting to him

Hmmm sorry cant help you out here dear

Even I don't get whats wrong

Guess only he can tell there

But she aint happy with him not appreciating how she saved his time

Aww that is sweet for sure

Haiyye these little nok jhoks sure are so cute

So she is more mad for not getting her kiss

Ab samjhe yeh kyun itni ukhdi hain arnav se

Oh ho so it wasn't one time kiss

But it became their habit

God that was funny for sure when she said since they started kissing

Hmmm things really are getting off the ground

The kisses as starting to mean more to her

They are awakening her inner desires

Well seems she is more ready for more intimacy huh

Yup she seems to be ready for more man

Hmmm but how to tell her hubby this though

Yeah right khushi you are mad at him

And not at all thinking of your hubby in naughty ways right

Who is she kidding man she cant stop thinking about their intimacy

And there is nothing wrong in that dear

Wanting you hubby and desiring him is very normal

Acha now I get picture for both of them

He didn't get his goodbye kiss so he was sulking

There was a reason why he left thing in their room

But you had to be too efficient and make him miss his morning dose

No wonder he was mad cant say I blame him

If only she had realised this before he went off

Yeah right as if he would PDA in front of family

I don't think he is ready for that yet

Seems being too understanding can have its disadvantages too dear

That is interesting though

But then maybe he doesn't want the world to know what he is like with you

Such shame that he isn't comfortable with being demonstrative outside their room

But guess it will too take time right

Ahhh am glad she understands him much better now

And all thanx to the revelations by buaji

That sure made her see why her hubby is the way he is

Well its only natural for you even you to feel hatred for that woman

As she did nothing but mak your hubby miserable

No wife can see that can she

And its good thing her MIL is no more or am sure khushi would have blasted her on behalf of her hubby for sure

She realised after knowing of that woman that she didn't deserve any respect but contempt from her because what that woman did to arnav is unforgiveable at least in my opinion

Yup she did ruin his life and use her own son against his father

God to stoop this low is just pathetic

Even I cant believe she could do this to her own son

What kind of mother was she

But I don't think she was a mother

God aisi maa kissi ko bhi naa de yaar

Well he is strong but even he is human and due to his past he isn't able to move on in his present with you

The thoughts of what his mother did haunt him so much that he is still vary of others

Well he wouldn't go so far but I get why she is thinking so

It wasn't easy for him to say this

And I don't think he can tell her of his past

Its way too painful

Now I know why he is so hesitant to tell her

Thank god for buaji for letting khushi know before she without knowing could have made things worse for her and her hubby right

Yes she needed to know bare facts of his past and not just what her bade papa let her know

Or she would never be able to handle their relationship properly

Which could have made things worse for arhi

Ahhh the less said about that woman the better

Yes he would have been better off with his dad

But he was manipulated by his mother so he lost out on that too

Man the list of her misdeeds keep piling up don't they

Though it cant be undone his past

Though his present and future can be made better dear to compensate for all that he lost

Yes now we know why this fear of betrayal got to him when he saw you with rishu

Its just that his mother has left too many scars on him for it to heal quickly

But with your love he can overcome those horrible days

He will return that love you just wait and watch dear

Now that you have started to show him your love he will return it soon

It will take time but he will realise his love for you too

Aww I love her determination to get her hubby outta his past

That is needed for them man

Well yes we cant let him know why this change

Or why you wanna are all of sudden being like of wife to him

That might just make things worse so its best to keep it as a secret for now

Well seems she is more and more attuned to her hubby

That's good news for sure

Ahhh she is getting it aint she what to do to improve her relationship with her hubby

And am sure seeing this eventually her hubby too will do the same for her

Aww her happiness is his that is so cute man

You cant turn back time but you certainly can change the future

And this is what you are doing

Aww she is realising they were meant to be

To think it all started with arguments but now look where they have reached

Though we know arnav is still reluctant to show his love for her but at least he isn't denying her efforts to make him fall in love with her

Oh yeah she did think love isn't for her now look how much she is in love with arnav

Things and circumstances changed for her it will for him too

Am glad he doesn't check up on her

That's something right

But yes he still doesn't like to hear about rishu for sure

And that I don't think will change in near future

Ahhh but due to rishu she hasn't been able to meet up with la either

But at this moment her hubby is top priority

La and rishu can be manofied later but her hubby cant be

Of course you guys must be doing something

After all arnav isn't that reluctant to show physical side of his love

Oh ho so she is planning to give her hubby a surprise for his birthday

Initiating a kiss am guessing for first time

He so wont see this coming cool

Arnav she has plans for the two of you at home so don't be too sad mate

It might even be more than just a kiss my man

Well dude no harm in just hanging out with family and your wife

In fact hanging out with your wife can be pretty fun too

Hmmm taking pics of his wife

But that's not what he wanted to do really

Ahhh of course she didn't let him kiss her

She wants to be the one kissing him first this time right

Okay so she already had kissed him

Ahhh yes must be to wish him his birthday right

Man she is driving him more crazy and the fact she wants him too isn't helping his control right

Ufff yeh arnav bhi naa

He wants her badly and yet he is stopping himself

Oh I know why he is stopping himself he is vary of so much affection from her

Thinking why she is being so affectionate to him

Ahhh this wont be easy for her to change his mind but steadily he will change his outlook I hope

The hell with rishu man but of course he cant

Dude its time to embrace these changes and let her comfort you

That's the only way forward I know its hard but you have to give life another chance

Not for her but for yourself mate

Why you didn't go to Jaipur but stayed back to celebrate your birthday

Really you seriously don't know why its because she said so your wife the one you love but cant accept the same even to yourself

Well that's something right he cant say no to his wife hmmm interesting

Hmmm so he is ready to give her some control and give in to her for things not all but few things

This is good naa he is getting better at letting her in to his life this way

And here comes out the protective and caring hubby in him

Aww bless he is cute to me when he is so worried about her health

Not helping there khushi making him remember he is getting older but that made me laugh for some reason no really

She sure is tempting him aint she

Boy she doesn't realise how much his self control is slipping seeing her like that

And he too cant seem to control and as if we want him to control now

Ufff yeh toh sach mein aaj inhe naa chodenge

Aur chodna bhi mat arnav

Good lord she is one hell of an innocent seductress right arnie

Oh ho bechare arnav I so feel for him right now

Damn she is not helping matters is she

How long before he makes a move on her I wonder

How about you try and see what that shall feel like

Oh my my my this is getting hot for him

And khushi dear don't even know what she is doing to her love there

Okay and his control snapped man

Well when she was seducing him unknowingly no way would he have lasted long and that's what happened here too

Man she don't know what she just did to him but she will do soon enough

Tension yes and all is due to sexual tension between the two of you

And she don't know that does she but will soon

Good she took that decision for him

No need to decide anymore man she has done that for ya aww this is gonna get hot and passionate now

Wow he told her straight out he wants her

That she didn't see coming so soon

But am sure she wont mind either

Not now not when she wants the same too

Wow she sure turned him speechless

So much so he isn't able to put in words how much he wants her

Well she sure got what he wants

Will she say yes or will she say no

I don't think there is any confusion as to what she will say

She wont say no for sure

Aww not only did he ask her not to refuse but pleaded her too

Man every time I think he cant get more adorable he proves me wrong

I knew it

She doesn't wanna say no to him

She wants to say yes and actually give in too

Not for just him but this is what she wants too

Well now its okay for them to take this next step

So what he didn't tell her of his past she knows it and that enough for her now

Wow this sure was one hell of valentine special

Him wanting to take their marriage forward and khushi too wanting the same

Now what could be better than that man

Haiyye this chapter was just perfect for this day

Bless things are getting better for sure yipeee

Well lets hope no more drawbacks please

Cheers for pm

Finally am done with this and what chapter this was

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
excellent update dear...ya khushi has done really a background check to understand her Arnavji's feelings and behaviour towards getting personal...this is too good an update dear...
Slowly arnav is trying to come out of his insecurities in a snail's pace...thats good and great to read...waiting to know what is there in store for us in the next chapter...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
I can't help but admire khushi. She s very mature and childish at thd same time.

And it was a dream come true for me. I have been imagining a rain scene forevet after chap 37
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update. lovely. waiting for new update
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Posted: 11 years ago
omggg the update was fabulous
arnav n khushi has started coming closer
khushi has changed a lot
khushi knws abt arnav past
super update
loved it to the t
do send me pms send u my email id again add kar lena dnt forget plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful chapter and beautifully written. Good to see Khushi live and hardworking is paying off. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Asom updt kushi is such a understanding wife after knowing her husband past she able to undrstnd her husband nature hw their relation is growing its butiful waiting for next thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I thought I resd somewhere but I don't think I actually did or I'm not finding it now. So I'm posting here.
First thoughts first - Why did you stop there? How could you do this? Valentine's day pe humko tadpana..ae sahib (oops Vats) yeh theek nahin... 😕
Now I'm feeling a bit better after my little ranting, but mind it only little.
Looking at the relationship of Arnav & Khushi through Buaji's eyes was nice especially her being experienced and a third person. As Daraji said in Jab We Met - Hamari umra mein ek nazar mein pata chal jata hai ke ek ladke aur ladki ke beech mein kya chal raha hai.. 😉 Buaji correctly assessed the changes in their lives. Although one can say that Khushi wishing to know about Arnav's past and the changes which followed after in Khushi's behavior could be the key factor, one cannot sideline that Buaji picked up on her feelings from the fact that she wanted to know more about her husband, about what made him what he is today. Also I've to give it to Buaji that she though doesn't see why Khushi loved Arnav so much, at the same time knows that he has given her something to hold on to. So even if Arnav doesn't express himself when having an audience around, Buaji is smart enough to pick that he must be directly or indirectly letting Khushi to have faith in them. Afterall nobody keeps clinging to someone without any motivation. Khushi getting over Rishabh is one such proof.
Oh and I loved thoughts of Khushi especially her "like if people would know that he can actually smile and show affection to his wife, they will start charging him for it" This was hilarious!!! 😆 Well nobody can charge Arnav other than his little young wife. 😉 (though he doesn't like it much thanks to Mrs. Sujata Mathur)
Sumer's reaction regarding Khushi flitting around were heart-touching. Typical fatherly in thinking their daughter should get maximum rest. Aren't all fathers like this? Wife can work, sister can work but daughter - they are precious!! 😊
Khushi is too over-smart. Didn't let her husband have some alone-time with her and then wonders what wrong has she done? *shakes head* Thank God her mind worked fast and she realised the side-effects of her efficiency. I hope she doesn't act so over-smartly always. It can get her in trouble.
Oh my my!!! Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada cancelled his official Jaipur visit for his wife and her wish to celebrate it. Aww... someone is changing and I'm liking these small positive changes. The fact that Khushi is behaving as per his desires, likes and they are getting close physically and emotionally , I guess is making these changes possible in him. Not to forget that he loves her too. But we can't tell him that, he would refuse out-rightly.
The rain sequence, Khushi literally hanging on the pillar and Arnav busy clicking - it was, what should I say umm..., melodious to read like a beautiful romantic song. It was like a romantic YashRaj movie and I was visualising everything.
Arnav still wants to control himself because Khushi is so giving and accepting for him. But he can barely reign in his desires today. He is letting her know about what he wants, he is asking her if she wants the same and at the same time requests her not to refuse!! Well this is our Arnav Singh Raizada in love!!!
She doesn't have a no anywhere in her mind. She was in fact disappointed on many occasions when he to control himself brought some distance between them.
Arnav she is all yours - heart, body, mind and soul!!!
Continue soon
It was a lovely update.
PS: I'm holding on you to not interrupt this scene and continue from here. 😳


Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it your writing dear...
Update was mindblowing...
Eagerly waiting for next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for sending me the link. I luved chapter 38 . Looks like they are ready to take that final step and become one. Now hurry up and write the next chapter!!! Thanks for sharing this beautiful story with all of us.

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