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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it

ahhh already can't wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anamika! Nooo... You stopped it here. Really? That too on valentines day!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...jst cant wait for the nxt chptr..
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Posted: 11 years ago
what an A.M.A.Z.I.N.G and ABSOLUTELY F.A.N.T.A.B.U.L.O.U.S UPDATE...
u included most of the characters in one chapter giving each character the importance it deserves...the update was truly and completely worth the wait...going short of words to describe the beauty of the update...

loved Buaji's judgement about Arshi's relationship...they are really MADE FOR EACH OTHER COUPLE...also loved Buaji for telling the much deserved truth abt Sumer-Sujata story which was very essential for Khushi to make her relation strong when it was at the verge of unstability...she has opened a new dimension for Khushi's understanding abt her Arnavji and now she can slowly start 2 heal each of his wounds he beholds in his heart since his childhood...well she is right even if Arnav doesn't show it outside his passion will always make Khushi happy and involved in him...loved her motherly role for Khushi...i was eagerly waiting 2 see howKhushi will know abt his past,glad that it was Buaji bcoz i knew both Arnav and Sumer would hv found it difficult 2 open up as it would make them relive the hurt...

loved Sumer's over protectiveness and reaction to Khushi doing her DIL duties...but what disappoints me is that he can see and complain Khushi working but ever seen him complaining abt his son working his head off day and night...sometimes he never could actually see his own son's pain...but even then i loved their dining table routine...happy that nw Khushi has completely tuned into her wifey and DIL duties...

but really can't believe Sujata was such a bitch...can't believe she manipulated her own son 2 this extend that nw he has turned out 2 be so vulnerable inside that he can't trust any1 easily...poor Arnav he wud hv been devastated when he came across his mother's shameless deeds...nt only Khushi any1 wud find it impossible 2 nt hate ds vile woman...

aww poor Arnav bitwa missed his goodbye kiss and was angry with his wife for her smartness which made him miss his kiss...well even our Khushi was also missing her passionate kissy...😳so Khushi you finally realised y ur hubby s angry vt u...but anyway loved their new found morning and night routine...😳...aww naughty Khushi she s getting disappointed when der intimacy ends abruptly but do u hv any idea how tough it s for ur hubby 2 control himself from ravishing u..."In her excitement to prove herself an understanding wife she forgot that PDA and Arnav Singh Raizada lived on two different planets. He was still so formal outside their room with her, like if people would know that he can actually smile and show affection to his wife, they will start charging him for it." loved this abt out stubborn Arnav bitwa...

"She had decided to love him so much, fill his heart with so so much love, that one day he will have no option left but to return some of that love back to her. She vowed that she will loyally and trustingly follow her husband, like a shadow, to the end of earth if required. So much so, that in each moment of this long life when he would look back, he will find her with himself. Someday, he will have to trust her loyalty to him as well" these words truly showed the depth of her feelings for Arnav...waiting 2 see the day when he will trust her completely...but the irony is that she thinks that he has control over their relationship while he thinks that he is giving her the control in his life and their relation...well if they have so much understanding even without proper heart 2 heart communication then i am sure they will definitely have a wonderful married life once he gets over his insecurities...Khushi will be so overwhelmed with his love that she wud forgt how hard she had 2 struggle for this comfort level...

well proud of ur Arnav...you believed her and also respected her relations even if they hurt u...he never tried 2 check on her with his uninformed visits...mayb his small sweet guesture like these have made a place in her mind due 2 which she respects,admires and loves him so very much that she s evn ready 2 dedicate her life for his happiness...also i am happy that nw Khushi has made his happiness her highest priority...i am sure once he realises that she s only his he vl himself take initiative 2 make peace with her's and Rishabh's friendship...

well naughty Khushi,she gave him an apt bday present...well our Arnav babua may say no 2 bday parties or gift but vl never say no 2 her special bday kiss...well bitwa our bitiya doesn't want 2 to control ur desires even she wants that ultimate intimacy from u...but whenevr u give either Khushi or Arnav's POV u make we readers 2 love the character even more...i think they are one of best characters i hv read in Arshi's story till now..."And the funniest thing is that he is thinking all this when it has only been three months that she has become his wife and was still friends with her childhood rascal of a friend. But all said and done, he could just feel the change in his life unto his bones these days. And what scared him was that he was liking it a little too much for his comfort." i think it won't be far away when he will embrace this change gracefully and confess his undying passion 2 his ladylove.....

well ur description of Arnav's desire were so well sensual that i cud see those emotions playing infront of my eyes like a film...without even giving any sensuous scene ur mere description made me have goosebumps on me...hats off dear...👏👏👏👏👏loved the way you described how that thin thread he was hanging on to Snapped...it was fabulous...


"He hauled her wet body to his drenched one and secured her to himself tightly. 'I... I... want you today Khushi. Not... not kisses... I.. more..' he seemed at loss of words. " well this one liner showed this passion,desperation and need so aptly yet so sensually...not only Khushi no girl will be able 2 resist if her beloved asks her d way he asked...

but u r truly evil...after giving such a wonderful update u left at cliffhanger making us restless and wanting for more...please update soon else u wud be held responsible if we readers die of anticipation😉...so please please please update soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it sooo much...👏
waiting 4 next ( hopefuly 18 +) chapter...😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
So beautiful, the slow build up till we reach the crescendo at the end...Arnav words gave me goosebumps...so sensous they were. you have handled this story incredibly. So deftly that every update is better than the previous one.
I can see the progress in thier physical relationship...and I understand that there is a corresponding progress in the emotoinal aspect also. But Arnav has still some way to get there... Rishab still bothers him. It is as if he much as he wants or believes otherwise, he is waiting for Khushi to falter.

And I love your Khuhis so much...so pure and so naive and yet so mature, so ...intelligent. You have created two inceredible cahracters. I know they are IPKKnD characters but you have truly made them yours

Vann
Edited by vann - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm so proud of this khushi you have created :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg!! You just scorched the IF space with that chapter and left us all hanging high and dry.

This is now going to take their relationship to a totally different level. I just hope arnav too makes some progress in their relationship to keep up with his young wife who has been literally carrying the burden herself.

such a wonderful way this story is progressing. Awesome! You make it worth the wait.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb, waiting eagerly
for the next update
plz updte sn
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is not stall fair!how could you stop there ,that too on V day!!
Khushi is really immersed in this relationship and all the other relations she cherished so far have taken a back seat.arnav is bound to break her heart with his insecurities and I am very scared for khushi since you have told long before that he would stoop low to hurt her.

Khushi's foresight that he wouldnt be late for office earned a glare and khushi "ek kiss dene aur lene me kit a want lagega😉


Madhumatiji ka jai ho ki she spilled everything to khushi and khushi is hell bent to make his present and future Bindaas!

How long we have to wait to know whether the deed is done or not😉

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