Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23) - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved d update
hope d nxt one is gonna be a
continuation i.e. from whete it was left
i mean from khushi's reply to ahem ahem*** 😃 😳
pls update soon ! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!

You almost killed me today with all the build up and stopping it there!
It is CRUEL you know!
I am hyperventilating!

deep breathing Shree deep breathing! uff..
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was cruel you know , ending like that A 😭😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
What was that you stopped it there😡 how can u?
But it was beautiful update, loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reached dreamland! Will comment after I finish hyperventilating. Love u so much for such a awesome chapter.


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Posted: 11 years ago
ZAALIM ANONY
CRUEL ANONY
BEDARD ANONY

HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE?

You tease!

Such build up, such excitement - and then poof! To be continued?

And now we know that you don't plan to update till you update that other story.. that means the wait is at the least 10-14 days. And that is cruel!

*Hyperventilation galore*

PS - Kickass update! And I love Madhumati. And I am a bit scared for Khushi - she is too deep in love with a man who has the ability to break her heart. 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my god!!! amazing update... y did u have to stop oh my god just wait fot the next update... am being selfish but awesome update loved the little changes in their relation <3 :* :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant and awesome. can't wait to read the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
r...
unres...

Much has happened in the past month of their journey of enlightened physical relationship. Kissing, cuddling, caressing, touching, hugging and all that. Madly in love, their response to each other is as passionate as you would expect. Yet Arnav still has supreme self control over his maddening desires for his beloved wife. Where other men would have wasted no time in getting what they wanted from their wives, Arnav is still giving her time to adjust and become comfortable with the idea of the inevitable...the moment he will take charge of their physical relationship and take it to the supreme level. Khushi has also started feeling a strange longing for something more.

His trust issues with Khushi are still present but he has unwillingly ceded some, only some control of his tightly controlled life, all because he feels the need to see her happy. And he is getting richly rewarded in this fussing -over -him routine with a daily dose of passionate, stolen kisses, in the mornings!
His longing for that FINAL step, that ultimate prize, makes him restless, his self control wearing down and getting thinner with every day. Then on his most special day, this thin thread snapped and he marched up to his drenched,alluring wife, stammering out his desires to her. Something, she herself had been awaiting to experience with her handsome husband for so long.

So finally the life turning moment has arrived for our beloved couple. Crossing that physical threshold and consummating their marriage. And what better day to gift herself to her ravenous husband then on his birthday? What better manner when both are drenched yet their bodies are enflamed with desire? what better time then daytime, when they can clearly see each other clearly and there are no secrets between them?

Yet, somehow, I get the feeling that this is just one of many, many hurdles and milestone they will conquer together. Most of these obstacles will rise from Arnav's intrinsic lack of faith in anyone, even Khushi herself. Moreover, the unwelcome presence of Rishabh in the foreground, with his well meaning protectiveness of Khushi, coupled with the ominous presence of Shyam, in the background, sensing that Khushi is the weakness of both the Raizada men that he hates and plots against, is sure to cause problems for Khushi and Arnav , individually and as a couple.


WOW!!!
What an awesome chapter...waiting breathlessly for the next amazing update. And yes, this IS my 2000th post, so thanks for making my wish come true!

Edited by siamesecat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
duh,why did you stopped there???vaise i expected a lot after reading note...but "that" much didnt happend atleast in this update..
aji is becoming big wala teaser these days..

1.when i was reading update i felt like raizada mansion is like normal house hold. DIL of home serving breakfast,checking everyone's need,along side knoting hubby's tie as he was getting late.elders of house telling her to eat along with them etc..no panga ...

2.arnav khushi behaving like normal couple, their special "goodbye ritual",which i guess is a normal thing between couple.

3.i guess everyone is now a days happy,buaji seeing khushi behaving like proper bahu,dont know abt sumer.,khushi toh always remain happy,arnav hmm now thats tricky thing,vo pata nai kab whole heartdly khush hoga.

4.good that now khushi knew the truth of arnav,though she had now understanding him.but truth will help her more..now q remain will she change herself to bring her husband out of the shell ,or she will do it by being as innocent as she is..though i really want one day arnav shud tell about his past,madhumati telling about his past and arnav telling abt himself will be way diffrent..


5.wow aji,kissilacues update,diffrent diffrent type k kiss,morning k diffrent ,nights k alag..

6.ahh rains,they are toh special but when romance it added then it becomes bingo combination ,but here toh..

RAIN+ROMANCE+ARNAV KHUSHI+HIS BIRTHDAY=KYA HOGA????(CONTINUATION😃/FLASHBACK😛/INTERUPTION🤢)
I WANT CONTINUATION


Edited by shruti46 - 11 years ago

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